Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 25/03/12 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 16
Hmm....and again we come up against Dean's black-and-white philosophy, and this time Angie's hurt by his continued 'monster' tag. But in fairness, she's definitely nothing like what he's encountered before. But I can't help wondering if that was part of the reason she decided not to 'fit' them together at that point in time...which definitely felt like a goodbye, considering the battle she was about to go into. Still....I can understand, if not agree with, Sam going into hiding about what he was doing during season four. Well, well, well....so are we going to have another Angie story? I'm up for it, if your muse prods you in that direction. Thank you for sharing this, and for taking me on a wonderful ride. Jules
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Coming from such a telented writere I am truly humbled by your attention, especially as these were my first forays back into writing sicne I was a teenager...many centuries ago!.
Would love you to have a look at my other stuff...no pressure, though!
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 21/03/12 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 15
Hah! Loved Angie's little cryptic statement just before disappearing - would love to see the boys' faces after that dramatic exit stage right. Poor tongue-tied David - or Daveed. And how scary was Angie in full-on rage? So much for the matrix dudes. But didn't David say they could be killed by ordinary weapons? They just kept getting up all the time....for a second there, I really thought they were going to have to call Cass... Hmm, will have to save the final chapter for tomorrow or the weekend. Oh, and don't worry about not responding...I'm a bit that way myself of late, but I can't blame the site - it's all on me...*unhappy sigh*... Have you let Tree know what the problems are? Or you can email me and I'll forward it onto Tree for you. I know she's been super busy over the last few weeks, so just hang in there. Jules
Author's Response: Thanks dear...yeah, Tree has been posting for me coz I caint. I've started a new story and don't want to put er under pressure posting it. I'll just wait, I guess.... (dramatic sigh...)
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 20/03/12 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 14
When has he ever done anything like that???? Every. Damned. Time!!! He's going to bust in, all guns a-blazing, and bugger the consequences, isn't he? I just know it. Oh, I laughed when Dean was asking about Angie's girlie-bits and the fact she had no body hair....a fact of which Sam seemed unaware - *chortle* And so David finally reveals himself...so to speak... Huh - so he was created to be like Angie, only the template seems to be busted. But he's right - they do have to find her and fast. Matrix blokes don't seem to have any redeeming qualities whatsoever. But it was touchingly sad that he's followed her through the ages, trying to protect her wherever he could, viewing her from afar, never showing himself either to her or to the hunters who had dealings with her. A silent, invisible, fiercely loyal sentinal. Apart from the silent and invisible part, he's got a lot in common with Dean. Jules
Author's Response: Hey Jules, thanks so much for stil reading! i am getting your reviews, the site has turned a hate campaign on me & won't let me do much, so sorry for not responding sooner! You are coming to the end :( no new Angie story as yet, but I'd love it if you read my others!
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 16/03/12 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 13
Ooooohhhhhh! It's the bloke who rescued her last time! White angel? Now that sounds very ominous. And yes, they definitely have to get her back. A "Where's Angie" story would be just tickety-boo, I think. Wonder if the blood Dean absorbed may play a part in being an Angie-detector for this hunt. Who the hell are these matrix guys? And what do they want the white angel for? Nothing good, I'm sure. Poor Nick...*sniffles* Loved Bobby telling the boys to grow a set - ROFL! Jules
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 16/03/12 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 12
Very satisfying end to the harvester. But what a battle of wills and power there - for a moment I thought the impossible - that Angie was going to lose. If only she could have removed a lot more silver, she'd have obliterated the demon with a single thought. Interesting how the harvester zoned in on Angie's centuries of sorrow... Loved Sam in hunter mode. And how scary was it that Dean tapped into his time in hell to withstand the initial torture. and poor Nick - in all the action, I forgot his carcass is laying in there somewhere. Oh, and it must have been the harvester's doing that no one but the hunters heard Dean scream. Jules
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 15/03/12 11:38 PM · On: Chapter 12
Have enjoyed...ran out of time...will be back to leave a proper review! Because it's finally Friday, and I've got the weekend free!!!!!!!
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 11/03/12 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 11
Oh, Dean.....hope Angie can get the others there fast - and poor, poor Nick! I really liked him. So since Nick and Dean have been attacked, it looks like the Harvester is branching out from her assigned targets - or she's merely reacting in self defence and drawn to their sorrow since they're in such close proximity to her. And ewwwwww - that description of the paedophile frying.... Had a thought on Sam's little dream he had that Angie stopped - was wondering whether it was overspill from a dream Dean was having at the time, and Angie just excluded little brother from the fun...just a thought. Well, well - so they thought they had a lead, only to find that poor woman had no flipping clue she was the cause of the Harvester coming. Surely there must be a binding spell or banishing spell that will work - but whatever it is, Bobby and Sam - and Angie - need to find it fast! Jules
Author's Response: Hey Jules, thanks so much for your reviews, and for stil being here for the ride! I have been havin a few issues with the site so did nto respond for a while, Tree is desperatly slaving away to fix me up! Hope you like where the story is going...
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 08/03/12 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 10
That was so touching, how Angie reacted to her gift of a mobile phone, and how she repaid the boys in kind - with medals bearing her own likeness. Saint Angie - but geez, Dean, you didn't have go and spoil the moment...*rolls eyes*... And looks like the boys may have a shot at stopping the Harvester at last - let's just hope it goes to plan. Jules
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 08/03/12 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 9
Whew! They were almost two down, weren't they? If it hadn't been for Angie - her research saving Bobby, and her physical presence saving Sam - things would have gotten very ugly indeed. Right, so Angie's nothing to do with the Harvester. But who is? Someone's putting those coins around for her to zoom in on. Could it be Angie's mysterious saviour? Or something much more sinister, such as whoever called up the Harvester to do her dirty work in the first place. A family member of Virginia-Anne? Someone with a grudge? And that poor bloke on the bench - he's about to get spiflicated, isn't he? Must be wearing a red shirt as well as his grief.... Jules
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 07/03/12 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 8
Ooh, they've split up....nothing good ever comes of them splitting up.....*rubs hands together in anticipation*.... Well, well, well - we now have two confirmations of the identity of the Harvester. And it looks like she's the one doing the burning and the bursting...unless there is still a red herring swimming around in here somewhere. Angie didn't disappear when the man with the horse was killed (poor Tully, by the way), but she wasn't around for the kiddie-defilers....hmm.... And that was an interesting little interlude with Sam's dream - was it Angie, or something else, and Angie just prevented it from coming to fruition? It's a mystery. Which I love. *waves hand* Dedicated Agatha Christie and Arthur Upfield fan here. And I'm thoroughly enjoying Nick's discomfiture around Angie, and the obvious amusement the boys are getting out of it, including Bobby. Yep, been there, done that, got the tee shirt, the boys are probably thinking. As for another Angie story - well, I think you should do it. I don't know whether we're going to get more on Angie's backstory here, because I'm only up to chapter eight, but I'd love to read more, for what it's worth. But for the meantime, I'm gunna do an Arnie - I'll be back. Jules
Author's Response: Tully is named after one of my horses! There is back story, I don't know what you'll think of it, though!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/03/12 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 4
No offense should be taken by anyone. you've given plenty of warnings. I'm still loving this story. but now I'm beginning to doubt that this person is Angie. She was vague when the Winchesters asked what they should call her or if she had a name. Now she's clearly telling those she kills that she is the Harvester. Maybe it is her but you've planted that seed of doubt that makes the story more mysterious. Poor Sam. Too bad he was found out by Dean and Bobby. on the bright side, at least he didn't wake up frustrated. :)
Author's Response: Your brain must work like mine..
All I'm sayin'....
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/03/12 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 3
whew! Glad that was just a dream! I couldn't imagine Angie turning on Dean for no reason like that. She tries not to kill anything that isn't hurting kids or animals and Dean fits into that category. Plus he's the closest thing she has to a friend at this point in time. Pedophiles? Disgusting! Burn 'em all Angie!! No mercy! I still haven't figured out the difference between the burning and the bursting. Is it the burners that actually commit the crime and the bursters who know about it and let it happen?
Author's Response: Most people really thought I'd killed Dean... as if I would do that!
And Angie wouldn't, either...not in a million.
Though she would have goood use for him if she did.... (cryptic much?)
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 06/03/12 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 7
Oh...my...God... I am trying so hard not to fall all over my desk laughing at the last part. I can so sympathise with Sam splutting his beer all over the place at Angie's little clanger she dropped. OMG! *holds sides* Wonder if the missing filth is the next one to explode like "a squashed grape". Lovely image there, Dean - lol. And wonder if Arthur is really going to be safe from the Harvester, or if she will still come after him because of past crimes. Oh, and given what Dean and Angie found on the computer - Sam's not going to have a good afternoon, is he? And Nick - ah, Nick...she smells like candy - lol. Poor Nick - Angie really shot him down in flames, didn't she? Damn....lunch break's over...*unhappy sigh* Jules
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading...for still reading. I'm mulling over writing another Angie story...what do you think?
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 06/03/12 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 6
Dean always sees things in black and white, doesn't he? Whereas Sam sees all the shades of grey. Dean's blanket classification of Angie as a monster really rocked her, though. But Bobby made a good point - how can Dean see what she truly is if he doesn't know? I have to wonder though, after the events in The Slice Girls, whether Dean's withering "banging monsters" accusation will fall silent for a while, now that the shoe's been on the other foot... But at this time setting, that was far from his thoughts and experiences, so he just calls it like John taught him to - if it's supernatural, it must be evil so it has to die. If it's not quite human, then it's a monster. I really feel that is why Sam started keeping secrets from his brother. He was wrong in doing it, because Dean doesn't see him as something they hunt, and I don't think he ever will, but Sam's greatest fear (rejection by and hatred from his big brother) overrode all common sense and drove him underground. Just my thoughts. Hmm, there may be two Harvesters? I'm wondering about the demon connection, or whether Virginia-Anne is just a vengeful spirit with an ego. But I have to tell you, my jaw hit the deck along with Dean's when Nick identified the burster. Did not see that coming at all. I was still working on it being Angie in disguise. Lovin' the ride, by the way. Jules
Author's Response: Ahh...your grasp of the psyche wit the Winchesters is fantastic, it's why YOUR stories are so good....
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 04/03/12 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 5
A Harvester...and we all were so sure it was Angie. Everything seemed to point towards her, including the description. And those dreams the boys had - I had to have a quiet little snigger to myself when Angie revealed Sam was only having that dream because of his connection to Dean, who was having the same dream. Oh, Dean, don't think Sam's going to let you forget that one in a hurry. Hmm....but I can't help wondering whether Angie is involved in some way, or if the Harvester is closely related to her. The kids, the dogs, the whole works and jerks, just seems so much like Angie... Oh, and just completely off the wall - remind me not to ever visit that town....perhaps this Harvester would find it easier and faster to just pluck the innocent out, then raze the whole thing to the ground, along with whoever is left behind. Jules
Author's Response: I guess this would have been the town that Uriel could have done a little fo his work in! I guess most towns would be the same, if you scratched hard enough. My mum grew up an the tiniest of country towns and the storied she told of incest, theft, rape and one murder would set your hair on end! There was also a rather sad ghost of a child that has made it into the local ghost legend books....
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 02/03/12 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 2
Not expecting that! Wow! *rubs hands together excitedly* Now we've got us some fun! 'let the prison justice system make them reach for the soap for the next thirty years.' Oh yeah! That seems fair to me.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I hpe the storyu keeps you interested. did you read dogs of war? It was a prequal to this one...
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 02/03/12 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 1
Totally cool! Roasted gizzard on a stick. Yum! yum! Kill 'em all lady!
Author's Response: Ooohhh...you are evil!!! I like!!!
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 01/03/12 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 4
Whoa, Sammy....*fans self* Perhaps I shouldn't have read this at work....is it hot in here? Goodness me.... Well, well, well - and once again Angie delivers a killing blow to a Winchester. What on earth is she up to with the boys? I get that she's wiping out the filth of the town, but are these dreams her way of trying to get the brothers to back off? Too many questions...and it's still hot in here...*keeps fanning*...must get Property Maintenance to look at the air conditioning.... Have to say - four killings in one day has to be absolutely freaking Sheriff Nick out, especially since they really don't have any way as yet to trap or track Angie. Unless they go stake out the park where she may have been seen walking. Going to be an interesting hunt, to say the least. Jules
Author's Response: ooops....I did leave a warning... Anyway, again, can't answer your questions and musings... But things will change..
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 01/03/12 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 3
Whew! It was only a dream. But was it a warning...? Was Angie really gunning for Dean, or was it a not-so-subtle hint to back off and let her do her work? And is Angie's proximity to Dean having another subtle affect on him, such as his little bit of exhibitionism when he came out of the shower? Or was he merely stirring Sammy, hoping he'd see the kid flinch or blush in embarrassment? Hmm...... I think my head jerked up just as fast as Sam's when Nick started talking about the fire that killed his mother and sister. And then to find out that his father was a hunter and knew John....I really enjoy it when an OC actually helps the boys in a practical way. Truth be known, I love it when an OC is just on their side for once. Especially an OC in an official position - like the lady cop in Baltimore. I do like Sheriff Nick....I hope you're not going to bump him off.... And looks like Angie got another one - hopefully she will be willing to talk to the boys first when they finally catch up to her. And just what did Ronny see when she took off her sunnies? Jules
Author's Response: I can't answer any of your questions without giving things away! You'll see, soon, along with the boys. Probably before they do, actually... Thanks for the review..
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 28/02/12 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 2
What....the flip....just....happened... Angie killed Dean?????? WHY???? Drugstore ugly blot on landscape - glad he became a burster. But I can only imagine the horror of that back room. Sheriff Nick was right - they're animals. But - but - geez, I hope that was a dream!!!!!! Uh - must be a dream - Dean saw dreadlocks - didn't she not have the dreadlocks any more, just soft curls? This little Pollyanna is hanging onto that fact, and hoping it means it's just a normal run-of-the-mill Winchester nightmare.....*clutches worry beads* Jules
Author's Response: Doncha just love a cliff hanger? I ain't saying' no more... Just thank you so much for the review!!!!
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 28/02/12 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 1
That filth... I think this is going to be a bit of hard story to read, but I'm on a mission to see how Angie's been tied into all this, and why she's going hunting. I remember that she's protector of animals and small children, but I'm also remembering that she was pointed in the direction of a molester by that newspaper left in the room when she woke up. And I also want to see whether her mysterious benefactor finally shows himself - or if we find out more about him. But that filth....he got what he deserved. And I couldn't help but picture Sammy in that description of the young boy Aiden, with his big eyes and floppy hair. Glad the boys are on their way. Well, Caroline - looks like we're off and running again! Oh, and I'd love to read more of Angie's backstory, just quietly, including her connection to John and the fact that she was so taken with him that she now 'watches' over his sons. Jules
Author's Response: Welcome here! Yes, I kill the dirt bags off... There are a few more. I never get graphic with what they do, tho, the show wouldn't, and I couldn't even if I wanted to... Scum of the earth...
Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 08/12/11 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 16
Very good story, I read this one and Dogs of War..I really liked Angie..she was weird in a good way..lol..Glad you filled in some of her backstory. If you write another one i'll read it to..lol..Thanks for writing.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review! I have two ideas for another Angie story, one where she first meets John & thier 'relationship', and one where she comes back, many years later in her timeline, but not that long in the boys', having survived the confrontation with her makers... What do you think?
Reviewer: TrippleP (Signed) · Date: 24/09/11 03:02 AM · On: Chapter 16
this was a GREAT story. I wish the cop has made it. I get the ending, but I defiantly wouldn't be opposed to more of Angie.She's the only woman that could survive a relationship with those three.
I'm a fan. keep th good stuff coming!
Author's Response: Thank you...I am grateful, and humbled by your review.... I have lots of requests to bring Angie back. So...you never know...
Reviewer: TrippleP (Signed) · Date: 24/09/11 03:01 AM · On: Chapter 16
this was a GREAT story. I wish the cop has made it. I get the ending, but I defiantly wouldn't be opposed to more of Angie.She's the only woman that could survive a relationship with those three.
I'm a fan. keep th good stuff coming!
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 22/09/11 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 16
This story was great; even better than the last. I didn't want her to go. I am hoping you decide to bring her back. again great job Rbliss
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review...I've had enough requests mto convince me! I've got two stories, then she may pay us a visit...
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