Reviews For Hesitation Dance
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 04/09/11 11:25 AM · On: Chapter 5
Great chapter, Lets hope Dean isn't in a tight space and beginning to panic. Is he even conscious yet? Hurt in any way from falling rocks? Is the rawhead dead? More Soon, Please. Thanks.
Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 04/09/11 02:21 AM · On: Chapter 5
Good old stubborn Sam, determined to find his brother. I like the little flashback, too, with the boys enjoying an unexpected vacation. Like the image of Pirate Dean, and Sam's curiosity getting Dean in trouble was totally believable.
Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 04/09/11 12:30 AM · On: Chapter 4
Oh, just when I got used to first person Dean, you switched to Sam's POV. Sneaky. Lots of action in this, hope you update soon, I want to know what's going on with Dean and the Rawhead.
Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 04/09/11 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 3
This is shaping into an interestingly paced hunt. You've chosen an odd combination of episodes to blend together, Faith and Sex and Violence, with the boys at almost opposite ends of the brother spectrum in those episodes. But, you're making it work and you've got a nice grip on Dean's voice, even tho I usually don't like first person POV, I'm enjoying this.
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 03/09/11 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 4
Great update, Lets hope Sam has done the right thing, letting the kids go off themselves. And that Dean doesn't take a hissy fit about it. Is Dean in need of help? Is the other kid dead? More soon. Thanks
Reviewer: ange (Signed) · Date: 03/09/11 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 4
yes, please please keep writing i love this.
Reviewer: fitz (Signed) · Date: 29/08/11 07:41 PM · On: Prologue
Really enjoying the first person narrative. It must be tough getting into Dean's screwed up noggin' but you seem to be pulling if off. Looking forward to seeing that fugly going down - especially through Dean's eyes. Thank you.
Reviewer: zuimar (Signed) · Date: 29/08/11 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 2
Oh, a rawhead again! That sure doesn't bring back good memories for the brothers! Great chapter, thanks for the quick update!
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 28/08/11 10:02 PM · On: Prologue
Reviewer: zuimar (Signed) · Date: 28/08/11 03:24 AM · On: Chapter 1
Hi, I'm on board for this fic. It will be interesting to find out how the brothers deal with a hunt while still dealing with the siren mess.
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 27/08/11 08:40 PM · On: Prologue
A great teaser! I can't wait to see what you have in store for us!
Reviewer: Dolphindreamer (Signed) · Date: 27/08/11 05:22 PM · On: Prologue
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