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Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 04/09/11 11:25 AM · On: Chapter 5

Great chapter, Lets hope Dean isn't in a tight space and beginning to panic.  Is he even conscious yet? Hurt in any way from falling rocks? Is the rawhead dead?  More Soon, Please. Thanks. 

Author's Response:

Next chapter should go up as soon as I finish this <g> and hopefully some of your questions will be answered!

Thanks so much for the reviews and encouragement!

Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 04/09/11 02:21 AM · On: Chapter 5

Good old stubborn Sam, determined to find his brother. I like the little flashback, too, with the boys enjoying an unexpected vacation. Like the image of Pirate Dean, and Sam's curiosity getting Dean in trouble was totally believable.

Author's Response:

Oh, those stubborn Winchesters!  I'm glad you liked my flashback...I took that tour when I was a kid, and had pretty much the same reaction as Dean.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 04/09/11 12:30 AM · On: Chapter 4

Oh, just when I got used to first person Dean, you switched to Sam's POV. Sneaky. Lots of action in this, hope you update soon, I want to know what's going on with Dean and the Rawhead.

Author's Response:

I love being sneaky.  Besides, I had to show Sam's POV, too...just to show they weren't really *that* far apart...if they'd only *talk* to each other (*sigh*)  

I'll get back to Dean shortly. 

Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 04/09/11 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 3

This is shaping into an interestingly paced hunt. You've chosen an odd combination of episodes to blend together, Faith and Sex and Violence, with the boys at almost opposite ends of the brother spectrum in those episodes. But, you're making it work and you've got a nice grip on Dean's voice, even tho I usually don't like first person POV, I'm enjoying this.  

Author's Response:

Well, I wasn't trying so much to blend the episodes as to show how far the boys have gone off track in their relationship, and (hopefully) getting them to realize it. 

I'm glad you're enjoying this.  Personally, I love first person POV, because I love hearing what the characters *aren't* saying (and Dean, in particular, keeps so much inside...)

Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 03/09/11 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 4

Great update,  Lets hope Sam has done the right thing, letting the kids go off themselves. And that Dean doesn't take a hissy fit about it. Is Dean in need of help? Is the other kid dead? More soon. Thanks

Author's Response: Hmmm...often when I read comments, I think of different ways I could have/should have gone in my stories.  I hope you like the way I worked things out!  (And yes, I'll try to keep posting quickly.)  Thanks for writing, and I'm glad you're enjoying!

Reviewer: ange (Signed) · Date: 03/09/11 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 4

yes, please please keep writing i love this.

Author's Response: I'll keep posting as long as people still want to read!  Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: fitz (Signed) · Date: 29/08/11 07:41 PM · On: Prologue

Really enjoying the first person narrative.  It must be tough getting into Dean's screwed up noggin' but you seem to be pulling if off.  Looking forward to seeing that fugly going down - especially through Dean's eyes. Thank you.

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you're enjoying this!  I'm sorry to say that my own screwed up noggin is very similar to Dean's in many ways (not all, thankfully!) so it's not that much of a stretch to get inside it...good for writing SPN fanfic, not so good for real life!

Nancy

Reviewer: zuimar (Signed) · Date: 29/08/11 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 2

Oh, a rawhead again! That sure doesn't bring back good memories for the brothers! Great chapter, thanks for the quick update!

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it.  Yes, rawheads, rain, electricity (eek!).  Buckets'o'angst to come!

Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 28/08/11 10:02 PM · On: Prologue

"...hopefully watching my back..."

Oh, dear....there isn't a lot of certainty there, is there?

Great start, Nancy, and I love where you set this. I always felt there was a LOT of unexplored angst after 4.14, just waiting for some intrepid fanfic author to dive into the pool and stir some things up.

Reading on...

Jules



Author's Response:

Well, I love to stir things up with the boys!  Thanks, Jules, for all your encouragement, and I hope you enjoy this one.

Nancy

Reviewer: zuimar (Signed) · Date: 28/08/11 03:24 AM · On: Chapter 1

Hi, I'm on board for this fic. It will be interesting to find out how the brothers deal with a hunt while still dealing with the siren mess.

Author's Response:

Thanks for your comments, and I hope you enjoy the ride!

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 27/08/11 08:40 PM · On: Prologue

A great teaser! I can't wait to see what you have in store for us!

Author's Response: Thanks, Moira!  More to come...

Reviewer: Dolphindreamer (Signed) · Date: 27/08/11 05:22 PM · On: Prologue

Oh I do like this one. I love hunt stories.

I hope you post more. And soon!

Karen



Author's Response: I'm trying to post this quickly, so thanks for your fast review (and I'm so glad you're enjoying!)

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