Wow. What an intense, fast-moving story.
Lots of gripping images, nice banter/bickering and cries of "Dean!" and :Sammy!" Tons of hurt, struggling Sam and frantic Dean. Question: did Sam get the "collar" off poor Al and I somehow missed it, I don't recall reading anything about how the collar was ditched.
Oh, thank you so much, Swellison, for the amazing review. So cool of you!
This was fun to write...took some time though, for some reason. Wasn't like it was complicated. Anyhoo...again thank you dearly!
And as for the Collar on 'poor Al' I didn't mention it in detail how it got off....just let it hang that it was Dean who got it off during his clean-up efforts of the pup and Sam back at the motel. I never mentioned it out right. Now that you mention it, I probably should have drawn the cleanup out a bit. Good to know for the next story.