Supernaturalville
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Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 13/08/11 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 1

Interesting one-shot, just a suggestion, try breaking up the block of writing by adding gaps between paragraphs, and the dialogue. it just makes it easier to read.  Have a look at how others have done it.  Otherwise it's not too bad. :)

Jacq 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I'll certianly keep that in mind.

 

Sam

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