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Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 27/12/08 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 1

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...*takes breath*..Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww..:D

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 15/06/08 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 1

I loved this story soooo much!!!!! awesom job!! haha I loved your summery!!!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: calUK (Signed) · Date: 14/01/08 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 1

Awww...

NOW i can say schmoop - didn't know what the hell it was before!



Author's Response: HEhehee...thanks so much.

Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 11/12/07 08:29 AM · On: Chapter 1

This is sweet. Love the whole M&Ms thing.... :)

Author's Response: Thanks...M&M's are the best! 

Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 09/11/07 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 1

I am in love with this fic! Schmoopy, hell yeah!

 I loved everything - the story structure of three minutes past midnight triggering each memory was clever, hypnotic. The topic of each memory centred around Dean watching out for Sammy, each one emphasising a special need for Sam, just divine. The birthday scene was awesome because of Dean's excitement and Sammy's graciousness. The scene at the creek was gorgeous because you wrote Dean to show intuitive, sensitive side when Sam was so low. Your words - "He wished he wasn't sixteen and taller...because all he wanted to do right now was cry into his brother's chest' - stole my breath, brilliant writing!

Your funny moment was a crack-up - "if he didn't he's hear his name as a lost child over the loud speakers, not like THAT had never happened before" - too funny, yeah we know Dean would do it again!!

Your ending was so cute, Sam surprising Dean, at three minutes past twelve, and Dean's little 'thank you' ackowledging the gesture *sigh*

 This little ficlet is the epitomy of the Winchester brothers connection - a shared history and a deep understanding of each other. Thanks heaps for this. New term?schmoop!dean, schmoop!sam ?? works for me!!!

 



Author's Response:

HEhehhee....thanks so much Cookie.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.  I had a great time writing it.

Laura

Reviewer: aripagetx_uk (Signed) · Date: 03/10/07 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 1

Loved it... I truly enjoy your writing and your stories.  You know your characters well. 

Author's Response: Thanks so much.

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 05/08/07 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 1

Awe, that was so sweet! I'm so used to expecting angst from your stories it never ceases to surprise me.

Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm glad you like!

Reviewer: Katieelessar (Signed) · Date: 28/07/07 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great story. It always brings a smile to my face when I'm feeling blue. Good job!

Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad I made you smile.

 

Laura

Reviewer: ThePasserby (Signed) · Date: 26/06/07 01:14 PM · On: Chapter 1

i liked it mucho! it made me all smiley. :) definately schmoopy, but definately good.

Author's Response: THanks!

Reviewer: supernaturalsam (Signed) · Date: 18/06/07 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 1

Awww, Laura.....

That was so sweet and I totally agree with the sentiment. Yes, Sam never had a typical father; he didn't have the father that was alaways there for him. He had Dean and that was always enough for him. It was so nice to see Sam being grateful for what Dean did for him by giving him the endless supply of Peanut M&Ms.

Very touching Father's Day story!



Author's Response: THanks!

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 17/06/07 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 1

Schmoopy...yes, but it is a really sweet and wonderful story. Good job! :0)

~Kayla



Author's Response: Kayla thanks so much for reading and commenting, very much appreciated.

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 17/06/07 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 1

Naw, not schmoopy....just terribly Winchester.....  

Truly enjoyed this sweet little read........Thank you so very much....



Author's Response: Thank you for reading and commenting.  I enjoyed writing it.

Reviewer: Andromeda171 (Signed) · Date: 17/06/07 04:46 AM · On: Chapter 1

More than wonderful, very touching nearly made me cry, Dean is the best of all fathers, really Thank you hun for sharing

Author's Response: Ohh you're so welcome.  Thank YOU for reading and commenting...glad you liked it.

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 17/06/07 02:16 AM · On: Chapter 1

It's schmoopy, but it's GORGEOUS!!!!! Awwww, it's Fathers Day where you are, right? It's not where I am, but that didn't lessen the effect one little bit. I adored all of the flashbacks, but especially the computer one ...... no, the lame date one... forget it, I loved them all. Have to say though, that this story had a rather distressing effect on my sookiness levels -  and I'm holding you entirely responsible! Many thanks.

Author's Response:

Hehehehhe...I've been held responsible for worse.  Thanks for the comments, they mean a lot to mean, and mostly, thanks for reading.

 

Laura

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 17/06/07 12:54 AM · On: Chapter 1

terrific ! What else can i say... Well, thanks !!

Author's Response: Welcome fredo!

Reviewer: SUPERNATANGEL67 (Signed) · Date: 16/06/07 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 1

This was sooooooo good!!! Loved it!!!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 16/06/07 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 1

AAAAAWWWWWWW!!!!!!! This is just so DAMN good!!! Love it. Dean and Sam - what would we do without them! And a hundred packets of M&Ms for you too.....

Author's Response:

Hehehehe...Thanks so much!

Laura

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 16/06/07 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hey if this is shcmoopy, then I've decided I love schmoopy.  I'm a sucker for a weechester and this one was beautiful - Thanks for the read -K

Author's Response:

So welcome.  Thank you for reading!

 

Laura

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