Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 22/01/09 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 8

Wow..Sammy's a powerful little dude. ;D

Reviewer: rahne (Signed) · Date: 10/10/08 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 21

Much better than the last two. Moving the story forward again. Not sure I'm willing to buy that Dean can suddenly astral projec just because he is now bound with Sam, but with Sam's incredible power boost, it's not impossible, I suppose. That Sam would drive John away is a good read of the situation-Sam has never tolerated his father's awkwardness at emotional bonding, and Dean seems especially fragile right now. But Sam has always had trouble with John's ability to compartmentalize, and function as hunter and protector even in an emotional crisis. I don't think of that as a weakness in John; it has kept them all alive more than once, and I think Sam acknowledges that when he is thinking straight. Dean has, in the past, but even he loses his head to his heart sometimes, when it comes to his brother. And with his disability, he would be especially vulnerable to his usual self doubt about his worth. I hope he gets out of this slump soon. He really is the glue that holds the family together.
P.S. You are still having problems with the same few words in context. Most of your 'thens' should be 'thans', you're and your are not interchangeable, and objects are laid on a surface, while people lie down , lay on the floor, or were lain down. You never use laid for living things. Sorry, I'm a nit picker when it comes to spelling and sntax. I promise not to complain about obvious typos. Thanks for the good read.

Reviewer: pranami3 (Signed) · Date: 08/03/08 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 21

So does the ending of this story mean a sequel......if no oh please, This wonderful indeed needs one. GREAT job ........really enjoyed it, kept my heart racing to no end :)

Author's Response: there is one more story in the series :)  no worries. 

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 20/02/08 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 21

hm....gotta say, I'm just dying for the poor Winchesters, makes me wanna start 'Dark' right now..lol.

So here's my review for Again, that means I get a chappy of Pawns tomorrow, RIGHT!...lol.

Great story as always Maggie and I look forward to your next posting - Kel

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 20/02/08 01:52 AM · On: Chapter 21

Thank you for this amazing story - it has been a great read from the very beginning on! Awesome work as always, Maggie! I am looking forward to the next part of this series :)

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 18/02/08 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 21

it would be ready... cool! This is one broken Winchester family we have here now... Happy there's gonna be a new instalment to deal with all that happened...

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 17/02/08 11:26 PM · On: Chapter 21

Damn that Iblis!  I guess it will be back in the next installment of the series.  (Yay!  Another story!)  I hope in that one the Winchesters will be able to heal a little.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 17/02/08 10:56 PM · On: Chapter 19

Wow!  Sam slammed his dad and Bobby into a wall!  Dean better get to him fast!

And poor Dean's leg is infected---cant' that guy catch a break?

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 17/02/08 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 21

Poignant chapter. Dean is left, broken, physically and emotionally, Sam at his side not great emotionally either. John leaving his sons, thinking that they'll be better without him around. Thank goodness Bobby'll be there for them. And the Iblis is out there, waiting for the right moment to strike once again. I'm so looking forward for the last installment of this series. Amazing work, amazing writing Maggie.

Reviewer: tvbatina (Signed) · Date: 17/02/08 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 21

So painful. Poor Winchesters!

Can't wait for your next installment in the series. Hope it happens soon. 

Great job!

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 10/02/08 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 20

oh god, heartbreaking Maggie. Can't wait for the final chapter...

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 05/02/08 05:51 AM · On: Chapter 20

What an amazing chpater, Maggie! Sam's fight was heart wrenching, you once again did an amazing job describing all threee Winchesters and their inner turmoil. I could almost feel the sheer desperation out there when John thought he lost both his boys. I hope they will be ok! Looking forward to the final chpater! Thank you :)