Reviewer: aripagetx_uk (Signed) · Date: 19/08/07 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 13
Wow... very good writing... I wasn't sure how Sam was going to get out of the fire... I could probably re read the first story and start... again...
Author's Response: I'm thrilled you like them well enough to want to reread....thanks so much. Laura
Reviewer: supernaturalsam (Signed) · Date: 19/08/07 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 13
I absolutely looooove this chapter! I loved that it was Bobby's POV watching this all happen. Bobby understands these boys so well and it was amazing to get into his thoughts as he is watching them get ripped apart. And you gave me a Winchester hug! The best birthday present a girl could ask for! *Hugs Laura* But you left it at a damn cliffie...why do you always do this to me!? WHY!? Update now...I mean as soon as you can...
Author's Response: Now you know it seems impossible for me not to work some hug type thing in somewhere....and if I'd been sitting on a lit pyre I'd want one...hehehee Thanks...I'm so glad you looooove your birthday gift. Laura
Reviewer: katie_kiss (Signed) · Date: 19/08/07 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 13
i love this story and i cant wait for the next update!!
Author's Response: THanks!
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 14/08/07 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 12
Oh, Laura you are an evil woman, what a cliff hanger..lol. Great update and I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for more - K
Author's Response: Consider that payback for the spiders...hehehehe Thanks so much..Laura
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 14/08/07 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 11
Oh, great chapter Laura. Loved that Bobby felt that he'd met his match in Dean - Moving on....:) K
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 14/08/07 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 12
OK ... so... you just didn't leave us all with a burning SAM!!!!!!!!!!! Your stories are like a letter-box film in my head- that's how I "see" these stories. PLEASE..... another chapter .....I can't get that visual out of my head. You are a master storyteller-but you need to save your readers from anxiety attacks-AWSOME writing.
Reviewer: Huntergal (Signed) · Date: 13/08/07 11:30 PM · On: Chapter 12
Oh Jesus, girl! How can you do this to us? The visual at the end of this chapter was horrific...and extremely well done. Sam with the torch, Dean crashing outside to stop him...whew! Reviewing Ch 11 & 12 here. Just loved the scene at Bobby's with the spirit impersonating Dean - afraid that was going to happen. At least Bobby and Sam knew the difference. Yeah, can't imagine anything scarier than Dean Winchester possessed. And Dean coming in and shooting himself (shades of "Skin"). Dean shooting Dean = hot! ;) Fabulous story! I feel so sorry for both of the boys - they are going through hell. Hope that this ritual goes better than what's happened up to now. Looking forward to the update.
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 13/08/07 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 12
Nooooo!! You're leaving us hanging again?!! Please update asap!!!!! ~Kayla
Reviewer: stanfordchick (Signed) · Date: 13/08/07 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 12
oh noooo... hurry up too much suspense!!!
Reviewer: d6l2j7 (Signed) · Date: 13/08/07 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 12
NO! NO! NO! NO! Sammy is not allowed to play with fire. Didn't Dean teach him that as a little boy! I thought that Sam was afraid of fire, why would he willing let himself be set on fire. Even to save Dean that is a little harsh don't ya think. Those spirits really need to be taken care of soon!!!!!!!
Reviewer: aripagetx_uk (Signed) · Date: 13/08/07 12:33 AM · On: Chapter 12
OMG!!! Okay... haven't been so hooked on a story since... hmmm well the last one you wrote but this is painful... I am working on my PATIENCE.... I keep praying... your keyboard doesn't jam or you don't get writer's block cause I have to know WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT!!! How soon... and please... don't make it so long before the next chapter...!!! xxxx
Author's Response: Thanks...I'll have the next chapter up soon. Laura
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 12/08/07 11:49 PM · On: Chapter 12
wow, breathtaking !
Author's Response: Thanks fredo, I'll take that as a done good.
Reviewer: merashari (Signed) · Date: 12/08/07 10:45 PM · On: Chapter 12
Wow! I can't wait for the next installment! Great job and welcome back! Hope your vaction was fun!
Author's Response: Thanks so much.
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 12/08/07 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 12
Okay, this is VERY BAD! I mean, very good .... you know what I mean! I loved this part: The same diligent way Dean cared for their car…their home…cared for Sam. If Sam could be granted any wish in the world it would be that Dean would learn to care for himself the same way. I wish that for Dean too, and I'm so glad that your Sam wants to do it for him. Well done, see you soon!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked that part...I think that's how Sam feels. Laura
Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 12/08/07 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 12
OMG....RUN DEAN!!! RUN!!!!!!!!!! This is awesome. Keep up the good work
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: Sammygirl1963 (Signed) · Date: 12/08/07 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 12
Holy crap! What an awful thing for Sam to have to do to himself in fer for his brother's life. And for Dean to have to see it--totally heartbreaking. Bobby better be quick in getting some water out there to keep Sam from burning himself alive!
Author's Response: Yes, it's awful, but then the spirits aren't very nice Thank so much for reading and commenting.
Reviewer: ThePasserby (Signed) · Date: 12/08/07 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 12
OH C'MON!!! ARE YOU STINKIN' KIDDING ME?! YOU CAN'T LEAVE US HaNGING THERE! THAT IS SOOOOO WRONG! I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU'RE MAKING US WAIT WITH THIS DREAD HANGING OVER OUR HEADS!!!! *sits in corner with knees pulled up and rocks back and forth, whimpering...* dangit, i hope you update fast...
Author's Response: I'm working on the update. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: supernaturalsam (Signed) · Date: 12/08/07 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 12
I was so excited to see a new update!!! And now I'm trying to see if I can get my stomach unknotted...seriously, that was a very intense chapter, one that had me shaking! How could Sam do that after me made Dean promise the exact same thing to him. And you know I'm a Sammy girl, but the IDIOT! OK, so I need Dean and Bobby to hurry and get their asses to Sam right now! So update very soon! I don't know how much longer I can sit on the edge of my seat here before I fall off!
Author's Response: As always Steph, thanks so much for your comments. I'm glad you're enjoying your story. Laura
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 12/08/07 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 12
I am officially on the edge of my seat here - I'v loved every post from you and can't wait for you to update this. Nailbitting stuff!
Author's Response: Thank you so much.
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 12/08/07 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 12
Wow! Definitely a contender for most evil cliffie ever.... Loved how this chapter rolled back on the rest of the story - taking us back to Dean's earlier vision. I was so glad that Sam realized that the only reason Dean didn't ask him to promise not to sacrifice himself is because Dean didn't feel anyone should. Nice touch having Dean so anal with the salt ring - and so good at it... really looking forward to the next chapter - hint, hint, hint!!!!
Author's Response: Lisa thanks so much. Your comments are very much appreciated. Laura
Reviewer: reece6521 (Signed) · Date: 12/08/07 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 12
Dear sweet JESUS. How can you leave it like that ! Please update fast I'm not sure I can wait to long. SAMMY CAN'T BURN. SAMMY CAN'T BURN.SAMMY CAN'T BURN. ok I need to remember to breath.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 12/08/07 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 12
Oh no you did NOT just end it there!!!! This is as bad as when Sam jumped off the cars as the shot gun went off....Dean's not gonna be pissed his gonna be broken.
Author's Response: Ya, Dean's going to be a bit upset. Thanks so much for all your great comments.
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 10/08/07 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 11
amazing chapter, and amazing Dean, beeing all breakdowned and crying when alone, and confident again, even trying to be funny when he's around people. Next Laura, asap !
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: katie_kiss (Signed) · Date: 08/08/07 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 11
still love the story!! cant wait for the next update!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 06/08/07 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 11
Laura, again you surpass expectations. I so want these horrors gone. I can't wait to see how you rid the boys world of these nightmares. I really liked the way Dean took care of "Dean"- and gave Sam what he needed most- his brother beside him. You have truly captured the boys strenght-being together. You are a master storyteller. Bravo!!!!!
Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much for your kind words. Thanks for reading. Laura
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