Supernaturalville
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 24/11/08 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 5

The feature of display that you have devotedly writen in this story, of Sam haveing an enxsighty attack that something would happen to his brother. Reminded me of how i use to be with my second brother so thank you.

Author's Response: Thank you so much.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 24/11/08 07:28 AM · On: Chapter 4

This spirit is definetly a psycho. A very vivid image about the fire revolving around sam.

Author's Response: Yep, it's a nasty spirit alright. Thanks for reading and for your great comments.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 24/11/08 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 3

See I even missed my place was in scene 6 i guess.

Author's Response: ooopp...thanks for reading.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 24/11/08 07:01 AM · On: Chapter 3

This one was very intens . . . like sam I have slept early and delt with my responsiiblities, but like him all of a sudden I finished reading this story; but I can't remmber ever being tired and ever finishing a story like this or a chapter. This was highly intense and very, very discriptive and sesnative. How your directory of writing sent messages of hidden messages in sams mind that he could actully feel that its trully happening a dejuave. I like it.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 24/11/08 04:24 AM · On: Chapter 2

Okay this is getting a bit scarry even for me. I do like the way you published the dream of Dean attacking his own brother and how his dream was re-in-acting of what could have been a trajedy for both of the brothers. As well as the true relationship the dog is to the boys and how the dog will alarm Dean that something is happening to Sam and also how he is having a bad dream the dog would act very defensive. I do like this story. Thank you.

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you like it and hope you enjoy the rest.

Laura

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 23/11/08 08:33 PM · On: Prologue/Chapter 1

Okay this is one interesting reading material and I do like the vivid image of Samuel playing with his eggs. " Quite thinking with that mind. " This should be not rated X!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 10/06/08 02:03 AM · On: Chapter 14

awesome story..I loved everything about it..Thanks for writing..


Author's Response:

I'm so glad you enjoyed it...thanks so much for reading and for the comments.

Laura 

 

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 10/06/08 01:13 AM · On: Chapter 12

Poor Sam and Dean..can't wait to finish the story, thanks so much for writing..

Author's Response: Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 09/06/08 07:11 AM · On: Chapter 9

aww I can't take it when Dean cries..lol..Ialways have to cry with him..


Author's Response:

Awww...that's sweet.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Laura 

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 09/06/08 06:46 AM · On: Chapter 8

wow..you are an awesome writer..I love the story so far..

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 09/06/08 04:36 AM · On: Chapter 6

man I hope this is another dream..

Author's Response:

That's the big question.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 09/06/08 03:33 AM · On: Chapter 4

OMG...

Author's Response: LOL...thanks for reading.

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 09/06/08 01:30 AM · On: Chapter 2

what is up with Sammy...Great Chapter..


Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Winchester_Warriors (Signed) · Date: 31/01/08 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 14

Fabulous!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: danny (Signed) · Date: 21/12/07 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 14

I really enjoyed this whole story i have a little sister and i don't know where i would be without her. Our relastionship is just like sam and dean. I'll always protect her and i will always be there for her.

Thanks for the story is was arwsome



Author's Response: Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 17/12/07 12:43 AM · On: Chapter 14

Love this story...especially when i reach the last part when the dog came with them,..... :)

Author's Response:

Awww..thanks so much.  I like that part too.

Laura

Reviewer: bonnie (Signed) · Date: 13/10/07 04:05 AM · On: Chapter 14

Very illusive and uncalming nerves of mine. It was well preped. I think if the head director of SUPERNATURAL would simply read this as I have it could probably hit for an episode in the third season. A rate of 200++++++ I loved it .

Author's Response:

Aaww...what a kind thing to say.  Thanks so very much.

Laura

Reviewer: ghostwriter (Signed) · Date: 11/09/07 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 14

I've read this story twice and cried both times....Excellent STORY TELLING......

Author's Response: Oh wow...that's such a compliment...thanks so much.

Reviewer: supernaturalpass (Signed) · Date: 03/09/07 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 14

I LOVED the story! Loved the ending, you did so a wonderful job! Great, great sequel! Two thumbs up!

Author's Response: Thanks so much.

Reviewer: katie_kiss (Signed) · Date: 03/09/07 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 14

i loved this story!!! it was amazing!

Author's Response: Thank you so much.

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 30/08/07 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 14

This is a great story and a fantastic final chap. I'm a big Bobby fan and like the way he is so instrumental in the plot.

Get on with the next story!



Author's Response:

Thanks.  I'm a Bobby fan too...the man is just too great.

Laura

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 30/08/07 12:01 AM · On: Chapter 14

Awww Bayre! What a lovely end to the story. Loved Bobby's role in their emotional healing...

I promised Sam you wouldn’t be angry, you would be proud of him and happy.  And you will be or boy I’ll beat you with a two by four until you are.

 ... and the way that Sam could pick Dean's heartbeat out of a line up. *sigh* Fantastic job from start to finish. Thank you so much!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading, and always giving such encouraging comments.

 

Laura

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 29/08/07 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 14

Okay Laura I read this a bit ago, and just now realized I didn't review. Bad of me I know.  So here goes.  This story was terrific in every way, a perfect capper to bonding.  Great ending and thanks for the read - K

Author's Response:

Kelly, thanks so much, I'm honored you feel that way.

L

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 28/08/07 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 14

Yay, a happy ending at last! Very well written! I'm sad that this is over though. I enjoyed reading it, and I got excited every time I saw that you updated it! Hope to see you soon in another story!

~Kayla



Author's Response:

Thanks so much.  I'm going to be working on What You Feel, and will have new things posted soon.

I'm a sucker for a happy ending.

L

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 28/08/07 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 14

Great ending!

Author's Response: Thank you so much.

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