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Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 25/06/07 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 5

You're just a mean, mean girl Bayre, first drowning poor Dean, then freaking out Sam and now a vision...(thanks, I'm loving it)...Kell

Author's Response: Welcome Kell!  Thanks so much for your comments, very much appreciated.

Reviewer: supernaturalsam (Signed) · Date: 25/06/07 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 5

Yay! The boys are okay and I am doing the happy dance!

Sam pulling Dean out of that lake and constantly reminding him that he wasn't breathing was so intense. I loved him reminding Dean of that every chance he got...it was something that really scared Sam especially since he thought Dean was pulling a joke on him (I have no clue where he got that idea from...)

And Valkyrie...I still love that damn dog!

Sam going into the bathroom while Dean was trying to take a shower was friggin hilarious...I actually saw that in my head!

And now my poor Sammy is having another vision...that boy just doesn't catch a break?

Oh, and Dean...you were grey and you weren't BREATHING!!!!

Great job and I can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it Steph...now all together...

 You were grey and weren't breathing....lol....it'll be mentioned again.

Laura

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 25/06/07 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 5

Good grief, what next? I loved it that Dean really WAS in the lake, but Sam really wasn't about to be barbecued. You are really messing with their heads  - and with mine! You have great action and great brotherliness too  - an unbeatable combination. Hope this story goes on and on and on and on.....

Author's Response:

Hehehee, thanks so much ciel4!  Well, it's not going to be the never ending story, but it's got a few more chapters to go yet.  Things are just getting warm.

Thanks for commenting and I'm so glad you liked it.

Laura

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 25/06/07 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 5

Did I tell you yet how glad I am that you made a sequel? I LOVE this story, its addictive! The way Sam keeps repeating "you were grey, you weren't breathing..." like a mantra just tugs at my heart. *sigh*

I was wondering how long it would take for them to figure out Valkrie was onto something.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, your comments mean a lot to me.

I'm so glad you like this and the first one.

Laura

Reviewer: d6l2j7 (Signed) · Date: 25/06/07 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 5

Thank goodness that Sammy and Dean both made it out of that nightmare ok!!!    Poor Sammy seems to be having a really hard time with these little excursions. 

I have one question, if Redding and Joey McCreedy were both cremated then how are the boys going to stop them?



Author's Response:

Well that's an excellent question..and I can't answer it without giving things away.

Thanks for reading and commenting, it means so much to me!

Laura

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 25/06/07 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 5

wow, terrific chapter ! "You weren't breathing",Sam's repetition of that same sentence over and over again shows just how big his distress is. The bathroom scene was excellent, and Valkyrie's so damn lovely ! Hope that this vision's gonna help them. The whole last paragraph is great. Planning on some laundry ?!

Author's Response:

Hmmm fredo, don't know if they'll get the chance to do laundry, but I knew you'd like the mention at least.

Thanks girl for all your great comments.

Laura

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 25/06/07 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 5

Wow, that's not fair! You keep doing this...leaving us waiting...tisk tisk Laura! ;0) Now I'm going to go insane wondering what Sam's vision was all about. Anyway, I loved this chapter!

~Kayla



Author's Response:

Hehehehhee...but...but...but everyone wanted to know how they were going to get out of the fire/drowning thing...lol

Thanks so much for you comments and for reading!

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 25/06/07 12:42 PM · On: Chapter 4

Ah, now I know why I planned on waiting till you were a couple chapters ahead to read..Instead I couldn't wait and now here it is the evilist of cliffy's,  *sigh* guess I'll just have to join the line of followers begging for an update.  Really great read- Thanks K

Author's Response:

Thanks so much kwater.  You picked a good day, next chapter is up, how's that for fast?  LOL

Laura

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 24/06/07 05:54 PM · On: Chapter 4

ArRRRGHHHH! You're killing me here! You always get me with these dream sequences. Wait, it IS a dream sequence right? I mean, Dean really couldn't have been able to still see Sam if he was underwater so it HAS to be a dream --right? "Breathe" *hooo* You keep making me forget to breathe. I hate you (but in a good way:)

Author's Response:

Dean's in the lake...that's all I'll say...hehehhee

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 24/06/07 01:05 AM · On: Chapter 4

Loved this chapter Bayre, principally because at the start of it they are in such terrible trouble emotionally, and by the end they are in such terrible trouble physically! Loved the whole sequence where Dean tried to work out the "wrongness" Sam was seeing - it really shines a light on the rightness of their normal relationship. Sure hope you are hurrying back, because you have one brother drowning and one brother burning - and one reviewer in serious distress here!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much, I'm glad you liked it.  Next chapter will be up soon.  I appreciate all the comments!

 Laura

Reviewer: ghostwriter (Signed) · Date: 23/06/07 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 4

A SEQUEL TO BONDING OF SOULS.........AWESOME! BRING ON THE NEXT CHAPTER.

Author's Response:

Next one will be up soon.

Thanks so much.

Reviewer: fireball10 (Signed) · Date: 23/06/07 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 4

Hurry with the next chapter have to find out what happenes

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 22/06/07 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 4

OMG !!! Ok, i join Steph, don't let us like that !!! Wow, what a chapter. Great brotherly moments, the wrong place wrong time speech was really good. As for the end, damn, what's reality and what's not. Let's say Sam's not really gonna be burned alive, but Dean really is in the lake, for a damn twisted reason you only know for now. So against who is he really struggling ? Against Sam who tries to help him ? Oh god, that's too much at 5am, let's just say, UPDATE FAST !!

Author's Response: Hehehehee...thank you fredo!

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 22/06/07 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 4

Wait, you're leaving it here! Are you crazy? You can't leave it here! I'm addicted! Please update soon!

~Kayla



Author's Response:

Was that a bad place to stop?  Will be updating soon.

Thanks so much.

Laura

Reviewer: d6l2j7 (Signed) · Date: 22/06/07 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 4

This was a very creepy chapter.  I hope that last part was a dream on one of the boys part.  This story is getting more interesting by the minute. 

Author's Response:

Nope, last part not a dream...lol

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.

 

L

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 22/06/07 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 4

Another freakin' awesome chapter. But, oh, what an evil cliffie!! Please tell me you are planning on updating sooooon. I love the interplay between the bros. Dean hesitating to call him Sammy - gah! Redding and McCreedy are going down as two of the most evil bastards yet! I'm going to simply believe that the ending part is just a dream...... Hurry and wake me up!



Author's Response:

Thanks, and will be updating soon.

Laura

Reviewer: supernaturalsam (Signed) · Date: 22/06/07 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 4

Well, I certainly got my wet Dean and hot Sam all in one chapter! Trying to calm my stomach down after that chapter! That was damn intense, but you're giving me exactly what I asked for!!!

Ok, so the only thing I am hoping, of course, is that this is another one of those freaky little dreams one of the brothers is having...

Now you know you have to get an update up there fast! And you know I will bug you every day until you give it to me!

So, save yourself a lot of trouble and give it to me already!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it.  OH and not dream, or vision or anything like that.  Dean really is in that lake.

Laura

Reviewer: aripagetx_uk (Signed) · Date: 22/06/07 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 4

OMG!!!! can't wait to read the next... scary stuff

Author's Response: Thanks so much.

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 20/06/07 11:47 PM · On: Chapter 3

Fabulous chapter - dragged me along at such a  furious pace I'm gasping! Love it that Dean has a psychological repair arsenal...... he has amazing resources when it comes to Sam's well-being, and it's nice that Sam recognises that in your story. Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you ciel4!

Reviewer: fireball10 (Signed) · Date: 20/06/07 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 3

Hurry with the next chapter what is going on and what is with them having the same dream

Author's Response: Ah, that would be the question...lol  The next chapter will be up in a few days.  Thanks so much for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 20/06/07 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 3

Can't believe he jumped from a moving car!  "divide and conquer"...Dean would have made a great detective in another life. :)

Author's Response:

Me thinks is a great detective...just not the tradtional kind..

 

Thanks so much for reading.

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 20/06/07 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 3

What a fantastic update! I hope our boys will get pass this!

~Kayla



Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and commenting.  Glad you like it.

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 20/06/07 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 3

You are really putting these boys through the wringer, and I gotta admit I'm loving it..K

Author's Response:

Why thank you so much K!

Laura

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 20/06/07 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 3

wow, Laura, long and gooood chapter ! god, this guys' heads are completely messed up. Can't wait to see more, who or what the hell plays with them like that ??!!

And of course, loooove Valkyrie !



Author's Response:

Hehehehe..thanks so much!  The who and the what...well you'll see.

Laura

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 20/06/07 10:07 AM · On: Chapter 3

Another terrific chapter! And the plot thickens! Is it possible that they are both somehow being possessed by the evil spirits of Redding and Mcreedy? Can't wait to see what's coming next - we've had all the spoilers now, haven't we?

Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  The spoilers were through ch 5....course there's more now.

Laura

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