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Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 14/07/07 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 8

Terrific chapter, had me shouting at the screen. Hope Bobby hurries, because now they're both restrained in the car! Love that idea, it's excellent plotting. Can't wait for the next update. Would extra cookies help? MnMs maybe?

Author's Response:

I love when I get people to shout at the screen!

Thanks...Laura

Reviewer: supernaturalpass (Signed) · Date: 14/07/07 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 8

Great chapter! Can't wait for the next.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.

 

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 08/07/07 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 7

Laura, here you go again with the cliffhangers! They'll be okay right?

~Kayla



Author's Response:

I suppose they'll be ok....eventually...hehehehe

 

Laura

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 08/07/07 11:22 AM · On: Chapter 6

whoa....Dean fired? What does that mean? Did he shoot Sam? Nice work Laura

~Kayla



Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Huntergal (Signed) · Date: 06/07/07 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 7

Interesting. Trying to figure out what Dean's doing, what he hopes to accomplish. Great action in this chapter. Glad Dean didn't have to shoot Sam :)  Loved that even when Sam was totally out of it, he still responded to Dean's command on instinct. Great job. Looking forward to the updates.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and for the reviews....I think all your questions should be answered by the end.

 

Laura

Reviewer: Huntergal (Signed) · Date: 06/07/07 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 6

Man, that vision thing is seriously screwing with Sam. Such an awful vision - and result. Now Dean's put in the position of having to shoot Sam to save the people on the train. Ack! I'm sure that Dean aimed carefully. Hope the boys can solve the mystery in time...

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: merashari (Signed) · Date: 05/07/07 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 7

Wow, that was pretty intense. I can't wait for more!!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: d6l2j7 (Signed) · Date: 04/07/07 10:48 AM · On: Chapter 7

WOW!  That was a seriously intense chapter.  Can't wait till the next one.  :)

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 03/07/07 11:15 PM · On: Chapter 7

he jumped ?!!! Good gracious god help them !!! I can't wait to see where this is going, but one thing's sure, love it when Dean's in control...

Author's Response:

I love Dean that way too fredo...lol

Thanks so much for all your great comments.

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 03/07/07 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 7

I have only one thing to say: Holy Shit!

Well, maybe two... loved Dean wanting to go back to when he could still carry Sammy to bed - given how screwed up their childhood was, it's kinda scary that they are ever nostalgic for it.

And, uh, Dean's right - stupidest thing ever....



Author's Response: Thanks so much Iam...glad you liked it.

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 03/07/07 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 7

Holy #^$*&$(@! Go Bayre! Forget about tiring the boys out, I'm wrecked! Love it that Dean has sussed out a way to protect them both, by following through on the vision. But if jumping out of the train kills them both I'll never forgive you! Just kidding, great work, see you again soon!

Author's Response: Hehehehehe....thanks so much!

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 03/07/07 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 7

Don't understand why Dean is trying to act out Sam's vision yet--I'm sure I'll get it when Sam does:).  I liked the way Dean leaned his forehead against Sam's head like the calm before the storm...and then they JUMPED!?!

Author's Response: Don't worry, it'll all be explained.  Glad you liked it and thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: supernaturalsam (Signed) · Date: 03/07/07 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 7

Yay!!! Dean didn't shoot Sam...not that I thought he would (Okay, maybe a small part of me thought he did...but then I thought how stupid I was for thinking that!).

Way for Dean to take control of the train...I just love when Dean's all business like that!

And you didn't lie about Limp!Sam...he is just so innocent when he's sleeping!

Great update and I can't wait for more! What can I say, I'm impatient!



Author's Response: Glad you liked it Steph.

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 03/07/07 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 7

Ugh, I'd love to see what it looks like if you had decided to tire out the boys...Great update and quick too...Love it  - Kell

Author's Response:

Thanks Kell.  Ok, let me rephrase, I didn't want to tire them out YET!  They've got more to do.

 

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 02/07/07 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 6

arrrghhhh !!! Dammit, awesome ! Love the train, excellent idea ! Hate you, leaving us hanging like that !

Author's Response: As always fredo thanks so much for your comments, your opinion is greatly appreciated.

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 02/07/07 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 6

Fantastic Bayre! I love it that the flashing lights and swaying room was a train - very clever! Awesome action and wicked cliffhanger of course, I've come to expect nothing less from you. Can't wait for the next chapter!


Author's Response:

ciel  thank you so very much.

 

Laura

Reviewer: supernaturalpass (Signed) · Date: 01/07/07 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 6

I can't wait for the next chapter! You're doing wonderful!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

 

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 01/07/07 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 6

OMG Dean did not just shoot Sam!

Author's Response: Guess we'll find out...thanks so much for reading and for all your comments.

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 01/07/07 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 6

Another great chapter, can't wait to see what the symbol is...Very nice...thanks for the read - K

Author's Response: Thanks or reading and commenting, I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: d6l2j7 (Signed) · Date: 01/07/07 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 6

All I can say is OMG!!!!!    Who was Dean shooting at?  I really do hope it wasn't Sammy!!!  

I think I am addicted to this story  :)



Author's Response:

What a huge compliment, thanks so very much!

Laura

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 01/07/07 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 6

Evil, evil, evil cliffie!!!! Great chapter can't wait to find out what Dean has figured out!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: supernaturalsam (Signed) · Date: 01/07/07 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 6

This evil cliffies you keep leaving us with...not cool! Not cool at all! Now I totally understand what you and Jules were talking about the other night and I just want to scream even more!

What the hell is going on with my Sammy? And please tell me Dean shot at something behind or next to Sam, and didn't actually shoot Sam.

I swear to you, I'm going to be in the hospital soon if you don't stop leaving the chapters off like this.

Great job!



Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the chapter Steph.....mmuuuwwwaaahhhhhhhh

Reviewer: stranded_chess_piece (Signed) · Date: 30/06/07 06:48 AM · On: Prologue/Chapter 1

Bonding Of Souls is one of my all time favourites, so I'm pretty excited about this one! Your stories are so complex and fascinating- you have a really great writing style and the plots are so well thought out. Keep em coming :]



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your kind words, it's so very appreciated.

 

Laura

Reviewer: Huntergal (Signed) · Date: 28/06/07 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 5

After reading your fabulous "Bonding of Souls", I'm back to see what else you can do to our poor boys :) And you don't disappoint! My Lord, what they are going through - attacking and killing each other, watching each other tortured, killed, Dean almost drowning, Sam scared to death at losing Dean. Whew! Poor Sam, constantly repeating:"You were grey. You weren't breathing" to Dean. He has a point, the other tortures were only illusions, the near drowning was real.

And now Sam's having a vision - somehow I don't think this bodes well for our boys. Can't wait to see where you're going with this awesome fic. Love your writing style - the action, dialogue, emotions, fears - all so real. Looking forward to the update.



Author's Response:

Wow, thanks so much, your comments are very much appreciated.  Thanks for reading.

 

Reviewer: Sweet Innocence (Signed) · Date: 26/06/07 12:14 AM · On: Chapter 5

This is an excellent story you have going on here! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and commenting.

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