Supernaturalville
Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 31/07/07 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 10

Thankyou so much for this fabulous story, can`t wait for the next update. Many thanks Lorraine

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, and for your kind comments.

Laura

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 31/07/07 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 10

OMG - you can cut the tension with a knife! poor Dean! Awesome chapter - gotta love Bobby! Can't wait for Dean to get back to Sam and Bobby - I'm really hoping he's going to beat those bastards back there....

Author's Response:

Oh Dean willl get back all right (insert evil laugh)...thanks so much for all your great comments and for reading.

Laura

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 29/07/07 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 9

bobby would be crushed to know he's not truly trusted with the care & feeding of Sam

Author's Response:

Hehehehhee...Jude, thanks for all the great comments!  I think Bobby would understand.

Laura

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 29/07/07 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 6

omg!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 29/07/07 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 4

nightmares....oh yeah we're going join the boys after this one

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 29/07/07 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 3

this is a kind of WRONG we have to set right and soon before they do accidentally kill themselves or one another.........Tension mounts...

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 26/07/07 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 9

You are awsome .  I can't stop reading your work.  You have the ability to paint the picture with your words. I'm one of those people who is cursed with visually seeing  what someone writes.

 

You tore my heart out with Sam's simple qustion...Will I wake up?the tears just fell.

You more than accomplished  your goal. I can't wait for the next chapter.

 



Author's Response: Thank you so very much for your kind comments.  I'm thrilled to know you can see what I write.

Reviewer: d6l2j7 (Signed) · Date: 24/07/07 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 9

That was a terrific chapter!!!  I am really becoming a Bobby fan.  loved the way he thought of the boys as part of his family.  Poor Sammy has so much faith and trust in Dean.  Dean is having is heart broken with all of this torment.   

 



Author's Response:

Yes, they do have some torment....and a bit more.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: merashari (Signed) · Date: 23/07/07 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 9

Oh that was so great! I love Dean so much!!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 23/07/07 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 9

made me cry. good job.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 23/07/07 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 9

You know he never cries enough in the show....:)

Author's Response:

No. 

 

Thanks for reading and for leaving all your comments.

Laura

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 23/07/07 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 8

Impressive, Sam held his own pretty good considering he didn't have use of his hands. I like the way Sam is aware of what Dean is afraid of and how both the boys are more concerned with the other. Two great lines!-- "Guess I couldn't stay in the car again." and "I remember enough."

Author's Response:

Shining, thanks so much.  I was hoping I could pull off that fight, wasn't sure.  Glad you liked it.

Laura

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 23/07/07 06:45 AM · On: Chapter 9

"Dean you turned grey ans stopped breathing." Sam's distress epitomized in one sentence... "Am i going to wake up ?", heartbreaking... Wow Laura, a wonderfull chapter you wrote here. Always love seing the brothers through someone elses eyes, even better if the someone is Bobby. And Dean having a breakdown on the verge of the road, all alone, terrible. And i assume his little mission won't be easy... Poor guys, terrific author !

Author's Response:

Hey Fredo, thanks so much.  Me loves Bobby too...and wanted to give an outside view of the boys.

Laura

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 23/07/07 02:21 AM · On: Chapter 9

OMG that was awesome, the last part was so sad. And I loved it that you worked this line in again:

"Dean you turned grey and stopped breathing.”

hehehe! Please hurry back! 



Author's Response:

Ciel thanks so much.  Yes, not something Sam has forgotten, or got over yet.

 

Laura

Reviewer: Huntergal (Signed) · Date: 22/07/07 10:40 PM · On: Chapter 9

Great chapter. Our poor boys, really broken. I liked how you portrayed Bobby - the way he watches Sam and Dean, sees their "innate communication", sees how in tune they are to one another. Oh gah, when Sam asked if he was going to wake up!  Duh - did he think his brother was going to kill him? Is he that out of it?

Hoping things go well with Dean's mission - somehow I don't think they will. Looking forward to see how this plays out.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

No won't be simple for Dean.

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 22/07/07 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 9

Awww, poor Dean! I just want to give him a big hug right now. Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the comment!

 

Laura

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 22/07/07 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 9

oohhh I've got a bad feeling about this.... It's never good when the boys split up... Can't wait for the next chapter - even while I thank you for this nice long, juicy one. Love Bobby. Why do I think that Sam is going to wake up long before Dean returns 'cuz Dean is going to have a hard time getting back.... Please post sooooon!!!! Many cookies for you to keep up your strength - or would you prefer pie????

Author's Response:

Pie, cookies, it's all good!

Thanks so very much Iam, your comments are always so much appreciated.

Laura

Reviewer: supernaturalsam (Signed) · Date: 22/07/07 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 9

Oh, I love this chapter! You know how much I love Bobby and it was so wonderful for us to get a feel of Sam and Dean from another perspective. Sam asking Dean if he would wake up broke my heart! So sad, and so Sam-like!

But I have to admit my favorite part of this chapter is Dean breaking down and crying...reduced me to tears here! That was so beautiful and I thank you for that! It was refreshing to see Dean so vulnerable!

Looking forward to more and have I told you thank tou lately?



Author's Response: You're welcome!  And thank you for the comments..Laura

Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 22/07/07 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 8

AHHHHHHHHHH love it.

 Tell that beta to hurry!!! 

I really it. awesome 



Author's Response: Hehehehehe....thanks for reading and commenting.  My poor beta, I bug her to death I think.

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 16/07/07 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 8

Ugh, soooo glad Dean asked for help.  Can't wait to hear, Bobby's response about the trouble they're in...Great update and I'm now torn between this and your other one....lol   - Kell

Author's Response:

HEhehehhee....sorry about that Kel.

Thanks for the comments, glad you're liking.

Laura

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 15/07/07 02:44 AM · On: Chapter 8

damn bastards spirits !!! Poor guys, the guilt trip doesn't seem to have any end in sight... Hope Bobby will arrive soon and be able to help them...

Author's Response: Thanks so much Fredo!

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 15/07/07 12:22 AM · On: Chapter 8

I loved the update! Thank you so much for giving this story to us! You are doing such a fantastic job! :0)

~Kayla



Author's Response:

Kayla,

Thanks so much for all the great comments and compliments you are s kind to offer.

Laura

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 14/07/07 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 8

Great chapter. You've really captured the torture this is putting the boys through. I can hardly wait for Bobby to ride in to the rescue!

Author's Response: thanks so much....Bobby is on the way to give them some help.

Reviewer: supernaturalsam (Signed) · Date: 14/07/07 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 8

Yay, you updated!!!

Love this update....tormented Dean is just so damn delicious! And McCreedy possessing Sam in order to talk to Dean...soooo creepy!

And the fight...loved the fight! Sam can still manage to kick ass even when his hands are tied!

Dean needs to realize Sam still trusts him! What's it going to take ot drill it through his head?

Bring on Bobby...you know how much I love him!

Great job and looking forward to the next update!!!!



Author's Response: I'm so glad you like this, since it's your story and all.

Reviewer: d6l2j7 (Signed) · Date: 14/07/07 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 8

This was another really great chapter!!   I am so happy that Bobby is going to help the boys this time around.  Hopefully this will give them an advantage. 

I hope they find out which brother is tormenting them soon.  

 



Author's Response: Thanks so much.  Yes, Bobby will help them out...of course!

You must login (register) to review.