Supernaturalville
Reviewer: WendyLee (Signed) · Date: 23/03/11 02:01 AM · On: Chapter 14

I really enjoyed this story along with Bonding of Souls.   Thank you for allowing me to get lost in the lives of Sam and Dean for a few hours.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 13/07/09 11:23 AM · On: Chapter 14

I wonderif there is a possibility to use your quote for our 2nd or 3rd aniversery invatations? 

Two souls bonded together through eternity.  Without one there truly would not the other.

I adore this one and the other one and I'd like to make a copy of it please.

I'd like to give you my rating:)Precious Sibling Bond. +++++ 400

If you do onot like that could you please let me know at lamix1mana@yahoo.com

Once again thank you for your stories you never seem to amaze me keep doing a killer job.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked the story. Thanks for your comments.

Sure, I don't mind if you use the quote. 

 

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 13/07/09 06:07 AM · On: Chapter 13

They hurt SAM those basterds.

This was a chapter that i trully was not prepared for this is better then superb. WOW!!!!! I don't think there is a supieror word  . . . wait i found it and I may have used once before UNITY ETERNAL!!!!!!!



Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the chapter. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 13/07/09 04:39 AM · On: Chapter 12

This is not nice to be playing with Sams' life.

Author's Response:

No, it's not. They'll get what is coming to them.

Thanks for reading. 

 

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 13/07/09 03:04 AM · On: Chapter 11

Lets hope to the man upstairs that they don't attack SAM 'cause this time they both will lose him forever.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 13/07/09 02:38 AM · On: Chapter 10

This was a grotesque chapter both of those deead basterds hurting the character of Dean emensly.

Author's Response: Yes, they are evil. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 13/07/09 02:11 AM · On: Chapter 9

Dean, please hurry.

Damn you, yes I know its only a story. Though its effect are so soreal and my mind is sending messages to the other side.

Anyway, sincerly I do award this story. Such deplomacy in the images that keepme attached to it its like all my sense are doing something.

If i have not stated it yet THANK YOU for your imary and writing this story.



Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying the story, thanks for reading.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 13/07/09 01:26 AM · On: Chapter 8

Them two should have been sent to hell and never to return, but they both had to save themselves. Did I say that you are one hell of a freakish writer like myself, but not realy like me 'cause I real don't have a talent for it; but someone told me that after reading my diary I could basicly work well for the music industry.

Funny that my major is in compruter graphics and my second is music itself.



Author's Response: Good luck in school. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 13/07/09 12:50 AM · On: Chapter 7

Damnit Dean . . .

This is horrifing to even me  . . . maybe my very close friend is right that I can see things and feel things that others can weather they are fictional or non - fictional like a psyicic preminition, but that statrted when I was a child at 4 or 5.

lamix1mana@yahoo.com

 



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Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 13/07/09 12:37 AM · On: Chapter 6

 Damn, McCreedys and Redding bastereds. This is not fair for Sam. Don't hurt him Dean knock him out, but don't hurt him . . . PLEASE!!!

Now I'm with a headace. This is an impact of a story. It haunts me just a little . . . the TRAIN teraffies me and the image I keep getting is that it is posses by a banshee and moving at a high speed.

Now, I'm feeling dripps of sweat stumbling down my spine. You are good. I keep getting an image of a very long train with big cargo, and the car is waiting for the clearing of the train passing so the engine is off, and then all of a sudden a rapid fear that a high speed car is behinde and is going to hit the car at a maximum speed and kills all except for me.

why? I think I just had an awakening dream again.



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Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 11/07/09 01:06 AM · On: Chapter 5

This has graphic images that it scared me into almost stoping to breath and you know what I'd should kick your ass, but I can't 'cause you are one of the best writers that I'd say is a profesional and i'm simpley jelous.

I felt tremors rippling through my body as if it where to be in a body of water and I was a boyu I'm not sure if that is how you spell it, but you'd understand.

 



Author's Response: Thakns for reading.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 10/07/09 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 4

I thought that it was only 3 siblings not four.

This is getting a bit out of hand that not even a demon would have a brain to strat with.



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Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 10/07/09 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 3

NO . . . no its not have to its must.

The ending got a little complicated, but I got it and it sent shivers down my back very gresevly.



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Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 10/07/09 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 2

Okay he's going through INSOMANIA! Like if he were to be in the dream state.

This story is trully killing me.

I don't want SAM nor DEAN hurt.

I am a devoted SAM fan.

Each line that I read is so controlling that it even haunts me to sleep.

I keep getting electrical shocks through the spine and shoulders and thats a bitch.

My Mind can see and view the hotel room and I try to approch them, but its like a force field that I can't get through.

You are an amazing writer.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 10/07/09 01:35 AM · On: Prologue/Chapter 1

Well then happy be lated birthday . . . I do hope you got what u asked for.

This story again is getteing to be scaryer.



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Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 01/02/09 06:55 AM · On: Chapter 14

Awesome story, thoroughly enjoyed it. 

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 31/01/09 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 10

I thought I'd read this story before, but I'm beginning to think I never got all the way through. Sorry. The beginning was familiar, but since the train nothing is familiar, and I have to say its gripping. I don't want to leave but I must at least until tomorrow. This time I can guarantee I will be back See  you soon.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for commenting and reading. I hope you enjoy the rest.

Laura

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 26/11/08 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 13

This is I hope the fanilly to those worry brothers and I do hope the character of sam and dean have been successful in amping more there powerful blood bonding as not only family, but as brothers.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and for your comments.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 26/11/08 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 12

These entities are one evil SOB and they are trully not jerking around.The composition of vivid sng rsphic perception of what is happening to not only Bobby, but to the boyz them selfves this is a very delicate writing material that you have writen. Thank you.

Author's Response: Thanks so much.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 26/11/08 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 11

This is one hell of a ride for the kid. I did enjoy the imagry u placed on the enteites attacking the boys and bobby, but why didn't the dog start growling the other Dean? I am enjoying this story thanks.

Author's Response:

I think I had her hiding from him. The dog is based on my dog, and she's not what you'd call a brave dog...hehehe

Thanks again for your great comments.

Laura

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 25/11/08 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 10

Visual words truly are grand. It felt as I was there and became a witness to the abuse that the spirts where doing to Dean and now there full attack on poor SAM. Sucks.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 25/11/08 06:02 AM · On: Chapter 9

In the show I have only seen him as a man, brother, son, and best friend cry. This is a hard chapter to read. It was interesting the way you made it vivid when bobby put that drug in the glass of water for sam. how dean did not want to lose the trust of his brother and how explaining it to him he understood. very keen.

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 25/11/08 04:32 AM · On: Chapter 8

Your vivid imagination can carry your writing process to major possibilities. You may even be able to work for a guy like Kripke . . . who knows. I like it trully, but it does scare the hell out of me at times. I think thats what you maybe looking for. The way the possition was transfered magicly from sam to dean. Simply amazing.

Author's Response: Thanks! Your comments are very much appreciated.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 25/11/08 03:15 AM · On: Chapter 7

WOW!!!!!! I had a visualization of what happend. You are defenetly a good writer. Oh yeah you idjet it is the most stupidest thing. This is a pwerfull chapter and I like it.

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 25/11/08 02:54 AM · On: Chapter 6

This is getting a bit serious and to the fact that his dream is comeing true.

Author's Response:

Yep...Sam's dreams are starting to happen.

Thanks for reading.

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