Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 28/02/12 03:25 AM · On: Chapter 10
Ooookay......flaming sword of heaven.....at first I started to wonder whether she might have been from another dimension - or even galaxy or universe (the boys' first alien...?) when she started talking about the fact that she shouldn't be here and her 'people' were hunting her. And she barged into hell a millennia ago???? And spiflicated half the demon hoarde while she was there????? Pickle me grandmother....just how long has she been loose?? Oh! And I think I missed another Trek reference in the last chapter...when Dean said something about a demon thrall - Gamesters of Triskelion, anyone? (only because I've not long watched the digitally remastered episode on dvd - ooh, they've cleaned it all up and made it shiny and pretty - you should see some of the 'outdoor' shots now - blow your socks off, they would) Love all the boys - including Cas - staring at Angie when she emerged from the shower - ROFL! Dean, roll up that tongue before you trip on it! And ooh, the big bad's coming - can I sneak in another chapter before tea? *checks time* No....bugger.... Jules
Author's Response: You might have her pinned down...don't doubt yourself, here!
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 27/02/12 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 9
"I don't think you appreciate the gravity of the situation" Cas stated. Star Trek reference? If so, that was hilarious, especially as it was Cas delivering Spock's deadpan line. But they didn't need gravity boots for this one. Well, the mystery only deepens! What is Angie going to tell them? I have to admit, I'm burning with curiosity as to what she really is, and why the angels have branded her an abomination. And the pain that she feels...is that from past injuries? Curiouser and curiouser.... Loved Angie's diversion with the disposable lighter. But I'm also with Cas - they have to keep her out of the demons' hands. Just not on board with the way Cas would have it done - but then again, I'm not sure she even can be killed...perhaps she's an immortal... Oh, and I'm with you on the age thing - I'm only two years behind you...well, one and a half....but who's counting - lol. Still here, still poodling along - not giving up on the story by any means. Just have to organise real life so I can get some more reading time. Jules
Author's Response: I was so excited to log on and find a review from you (Yay! Doing a little happy dance..at work..hmmm...better sit down) Yep, you got it, treckie from way back! You are the only one to pick that up! You are so close to what she is, and I explain even more in the second story (Sequel) to this. I'm also writing her an orginal story.... more on that, later. For now, jsut so happy you are reading my story! Thank you!
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 01/02/12 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 8
Finally, Cas pulled his shoulders up, and turned, all signs of trauma gone, no blood stained shirt, no facial bruises. I need to borrow Cas' laundry powers to get a coffee stain out of a favourite tee shirt....don't think NapiSan is going to work for me this time.... Well, well, well - even the angels don't know what Angie is, apart from being an abomination...something tells me Sammy will be sympathetic towards her even more now, as that's the same label the heavenly hoard stuck on him. Wonder why she's appearing a bit more ragged these days - and if she is an abomination, how come she's wearing all that silver? Does it not harm her? If she's any way angelic, it probably doesn't. Hmm....and she chose to save the hunters and Cas rather than herself. Surely she can't be bad. Can she? Hope Dean's got a Plan B! Jules ps - so sorry to hear you lost a beloved pet. it's so hard to say goodbye to them - they become like our kids, don't they? I lost my 18 year old cat in 2010, and it was so hard - I saw her around the place for weeks after I buried her. J
Author's Response: Thak you, thank you, so much! I always wondered why the writers never let Cas change his clothes... Angie? She hasn't got Angel super laundry powers, life on the lamb has left her a bit bedraggled. I so love logging on and finding a comment from you, this was my first story since I was a child (I'm fifty now) so it warms my heart so, that it got read, let alone that someone may be actually enjoying it a bit!!!
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 31/01/12 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 7
In-tri-guing! So even Cas isn't quite sure what Angie is. And she not only got through demon but angel traps as well. The plot thickens..... Is she a product of Heaven or Hell - or neither.... Well, the fact that she changed her mind about rescuing Cas is a plus in her favour. But her initial reaction...definitely a puzzling minus. And I'm betting that there definitely will be a conversation concerning the multiple times John met with Angie. But it looks like the demons might have the upper hand at the moment, needing - and getting - Cas' blood to trap her. Hmm....angel's blood - she's got to be connected somehow to Heaven. Yikes - this is doing my head in! As for a sequel - there already is one, isn't there? I haven't read it yet, but I intend to. But I can tell you from experience, if the idea is there for another sequel, and it feels good to you to do one, then do it. Follow your instincts. I had never intended doing sequels to any of mine, until a random comment from a friend and reader set me on the path to my first sequel. And it turned out bigger than the original story! Hope that's not too confusing an answer - basically, listen to your muse, fickle creatures though they are. Traitorous, unreliable, just plain mean...oh, wait - that's my muse.... Jules
Author's Response: The swqual to this has never had many hits, or reviews, but that could be due to the fact it contains adult content and can only be viewed if you log in...I don't know. I haven't had any bad comments on Angie, either in this story, or the next....
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 30/01/12 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 6
Hmm....we're still no nearer to finding out just what Angie is. Demon? Angel? Vampire? A weird hybrid of all? I wonder whether her blood spell ever truly wore off on John, or if he fought the addiction for the rest of his life. And why do I immediately think of poor Sammy when addiction is mentioned.... Let's hope Bobby's successful with that two-way spell tracking. Jules
Author's Response: Hello stranger! Nice to see you back. I'm getting a lot of requests to do another sequal to this story.. I'll wait and see what YOU think I should do...
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 30/10/11 10:57 PM · On: Chapter 5
Hmm, so John had encountered her, eh? And her blood - what is it about her blood that she was so worried about? Obviously from the way John was reacting, it had some sort of bewitching effect, since he suddenly felt overcome with a sense of protectiveness, even after he found out she wasn't human. Because let's face it, like him or hate him, we all know John was pretty black and white when it came to anything supernatural. It's poor Sammy who always sees the grey. So, she kills evil, her blood has a very strange effect on humans, she can vanish at will - and we seem about to find out a little more. And I'll have to wait till tomorrow, as lunch break is over and I've got a pile of work I can't jump over....*sigh*...what else is new.... Jules
Author's Response: I so enjoy knowing a fantastic writer like you is reading my work...and kinda intimidated, as well!
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 30/10/11 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 4
I'm back...did you miss me? LOL. Not quite out of hibernation yet, it seems. But it's Hallowe'en, and this bat is actually celebrating this year. Go figure, eh? Right....well, I felt sorry for poor 'little' Alice - lol. Fancy waking from such a nice nap only to be confronted by two big, scary strangers. Good move on the mysterious vamp-angel's part to predict where the demons would strike next. And now she knows the Winchesters are after her too....but I'm thinking Sam's puppy eyes might just get her to trust them long enough to let them know what's happening, and possibly why. And of course, what the flip she is. Looks like Bobby's got some intel to share as well - let's see what he's got to say on the subject. Jules
Author's Response: Yes! I so missed you! I hope you're enjoying my story, this was my very first one! I hope it's not too poorly writen, I hope that I got better as I went along.....
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 16/10/11 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 3
Love the shout-out to Kim Manners. OMG - weird girls with wings that might not be wings, demon dogs, and angel-nappers. Just what is going on? Wonder what Cass expected the boys to see on the mysterious girl if it wasn't wings.....and just what is she? Obviously she must have some power or significance for the demons to be so keen on trapping her that they captured an angel to do it - even an underpowered one. The boys will need to move fast on this one, I'm thinking..... Damn......out of coffee, and out of lunch break. Have to come back tomorrow...*sigh*..... Jules
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 16/10/11 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 2
Aha! Cass obviously knows what she is. Up till that point, I was with the boys - what the.....??? Angel-vamp inpervious to silver? And just why did she kill the dogs? Whose side is she on? Is she really the big bad, or is this a little red herring? Have I got enough coffee for another chapter? Good theory on Jesse, though. And I can't help wondering whether we'll see him again in the show. A powerful, potential weapon, and he just 'poofs' himself off to Australia and vanishes from SN forever? (hope he's closer to Sydney than Brisbane.....no offence....) That's a bit of an interesting loose end that the writers have left us. My aunt asked in passing the other day whether Jesse might be a key to season seven's big bads. But I digress, so my caffeine intake is obviously decreasing..... Thankfully the pound people believed the boys' stories about the dogs going berko on each other - that could have been rather sticky otherwise, even though the dogs were scheduled to be put down anyway. Hmm - too many questions. Need another chapter. Jules
Author's Response: Heloo, another Aussie? Oi Oi Oi! thank you for your review, I respect your work, you are a winner here!!! I hope you like my stories, and again, thank you for your reviews...I'm not gonna comment on the story line too much, as I tend to give things away...
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 16/10/11 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 1
Hullo, fellow Aussie. And a very belated welcome to the site. Now that the weather is (rapidly) warming up, it's time for me to come out of hibernation and see what's happening - lol. Hmm....mental note - don't read this while eating lunch.... The opening scenes were truly creepy, especially the poor beggar being ripped apart on his garage floor. I could feel that creeping cold chill along my back as he turned to see the glowing red eyes in the dark. And Ruby? Love the name you picked for the Rottie, especially as she seems to have gone all demon on her poor pregnant mistress. And yeah, ouch....*cringes*....that was pretty horrific. I see you fixed whatever formatting issues you had, too, that Birdie was commenting on. It reads very nicely now. Great start, loving the hunt already, and very curious as to what is infecting the dogs, especially with the mysterious noises and lights blowing out - and of course, those lovely red hellhound eyes. Reading on.... Jules
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 29/08/11 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 12
I wonder if Dean will feel the pull of Angie if she is ever in his presence. Of course, Sam is just naturally enthralled with her! I must admit that some of the British terms you use are kinda confusing to me (torch, bonnet,), especially if the boys are using them (doesn't sound natural for them because they are Americans). Anyhow...another great chapter (I just love me some hurt/Dean!). I wonder what the demon would think and do if it realized that Angie has removed some of her protective silver. Looking forward to the next part!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for you're valuable feedback...I can edit to correct the grammar. I appreciate your reviews, it was a wonderful surprise to log in and find them!!!!
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 29/08/11 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 11
Gulp, I am so worried about the boys and especially Dean. Looks like he may need devine intervention. I hope she has something up her sleeve since she is so powerful! Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 29/08/11 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 10
Uh oh, seems like the big, bad demon is on its way! I love the teasing Dean is doing with Sam. Very big brotherly. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 29/08/11 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 10
Uh oh, seems like the big, bad demon is on its way! I love the teasing Dean is doing with Sam. Very big brotherly. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 29/08/11 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 9
I hope she can keep them at bay, poor girl. I like some of her human vices, makes her more human. I do believe Dean has decided she is worthy of his trust. I'm looking forward to the next part.
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 29/08/11 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 8
Yikes! Angie risked her own life for our boys. I think the demon needs glasses, it's Dean who is the "pretty one"! LOL! Anyhow, I hope they can get her away from the demons. Looking forward to reading more.
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 29/08/11 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 7
I wonder why she doesn't want to help angels? Could be because most of them are dicks (according to Dean!). I'm glad that she was able to get Cas back but now she is in danger. I hope they help her out. You really have Dean down quite well. He's not too trusting of her (who could blame him?). I look forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 29/08/11 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 6
I really enjoyed the back story with John and Elkins. Luckily, Elkins wasn't able to kill her. Now Dean and Sam are thinking perhaps it would be a good thing to work with her. I'm looking forward to reading more.
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 29/08/11 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 5
I'm pretty sure she isn't evil but I'm not sure what she is. I wonder why she didn't want her blood to touch them. Seems like John touched it though. I'm very curious as to what she has to say to the two hunters. Somehow I lost track of this story and plan on finishing it along with the sequel. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 12/07/11 11:51 PM · On: Chapter 4
Seems like this creature isn't evil. Wonder if she will ever get a better read on Dean? I'm looking forward to finding out her story and hopefully getting Cas back.
Author's Response: I am so grateful for your review! Thankyou!!!
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 12/07/11 11:46 PM · On: Chapter 3
Hmmm....that demon sure sounded a lot like Meg. I hope they can get Cas back. I'm wondering still what the creature is that is trying to kill the dogs. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks heaps!!! I am so grateful you took the time to review!!!
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 12/07/11 11:41 PM · On: Chapter 2
Awhhhh....Cas had turned up, perhaps he will enlighten Dean and Sam with what that creature was? And perhaps about the dogs, too? Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you...for reviewing, and making it a good review!!!
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 12/07/11 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 1
Wow, now that was really gruesome and creepy with the dogs. I do believe Dean is right, it is right up their alley and is probably tied to their current mission. I'm looking forward to the next chapter and their reaction to the "pets".
Author's Response: Thanks for your review, I really, really appreciate your comments!!!!
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 08/07/11 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 1
Hi. it's an interesting start but I'm finding the formatting makes it difficult to read on screen. Is there any particular reason for the 'half screen' formatting? Bird
Author's Response: I didn't set it that way, how annoying, I don't know how to fix it....
Author's Response: I've tried to fix it, hopefuly chapter four reflects this. If it doesn't please let me know!
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