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Reviews For Line of Fire
Reviewer: ilovefundip (Signed) · Date: 30/05/12 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 1

dude...this story was pretty freaking good. nice writing and a good sense of how dean is so protective.

loved it

                                       -ilovefundip



Author's Response:

So glad you liked it, and thanks for writing! 

Nancy 

Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 19/09/11 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 1

Wow.  This was one intense amazing story!  Well done!

Reviewer: JennyF (Signed) · Date: 29/08/11 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow - what a great insight into how Dean's mind worked even at that age.  It's all about protecting Sam at any cost and knowing that John will make it all okay.  That final 'stand down' and his immediate relief is just perfect.  Great story and an original approach.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review (and stars!) and I'm glad you enjoyed it.  Dean had such faith in John....

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 21/06/11 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow, what a one shot. Poor Dean, he just learned that humans can be way worse than any monster. It's sad that he had to kill someone at his age but that man was going to do terrible things to Dean and probably kill him, too. I want to smack John upside the head for leaving the boys alone for such a long time. I hope this teaches John a lesson as well. Dean may be capable 10 year old boy, but he is still only 10 years old. Thanks for the great one shot!

Author's Response:

Dean lost all innocence at age 4 (*sniff*)  but he just keeps on going...

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Amberdreams (Signed) · Date: 21/06/11 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 1

Aw Dean.... A very sad and scary look inside his head - all alone and trying to stray sstrong while he grows steadily more desperate...

Cleverly written, I liked the short sharp sections and the young kid voice was authentic, as was the way he refused to acknowledge his growing fear.



Author's Response:

I love to go rooting around in Dean's head (even though it's a very scary place to be...)

So glad you like this, and thanks for writing!

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