Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 06/07/11 12:21 AM · On: Chapter 3

Ouch...John just learned a terrible truth at what Dean had to do in order to feed Sam. And Max is right about Dean. That kinda of work is something Dean is not made for and Max knows it. I wonder what this will do to John? Will he look for Dean as well as Sam and make sure both are safe? How will John approach Dean now?

I'm so glad the truck driver (Frank) turned out to be a good guy. Dean needed someone like that. Someone on his side. Dean is still out there alone with little to help him. He is in as much danger as Sam.

Sammy is so oblivious to what his stunt is doing to his family but that is so like a young teen. Very self centered at that age. I like how he thinks about showing his skills to Dean when he returns home so he isn't really planning on staying away for too long! 

I'm biting my nails until the next chapter and I'm thrilled that you are planning an extended story. Yeah!!!

 

 

 

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 27/06/11 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 2

Wow! I absolutely love this story! I think the way John treated Dean was worse than if he had slapped him around! To throw Dean out on the streets with just 40 dollars and to tell him not to come back unless he found Sam, was just beyond cruel. I hope that truck driver is an honest person and doesn't try to take advantage of our young Dean here. I'm worried that John will find Sam, or Sam will come home on his own and John won't tell Dean. I can't believe John is still hanging that Strigna thing over Dean's head after all these years. I wonder if Dean ever felt that John could trust him. I'm biting my nails until the next chapter!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks. Glad you are enjoying it and thank you so much for the lovely reviews! Mary xx