Reviews For Fights, Failures and Flagstaff
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 05/01/13 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 19
Wow, what a nail biting chapter! I absolutely love the AU twist you put here! It fits so well with the story you are weaving. Dean's flashback was quite chilling. Wonder what in the hell did ole YED say to Dean in the store? Something about Sam, no doubt? I am glad that John is sending his boys to Bobby's place because they are truly in danger here. I can't wait to read the next installment!
Reviewer: jeanne (Signed) · Date: 14/12/12 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 18
I've been reading and enjoying this one from the beginning. Sorry, I have not reviewed. After the last chapter, I wanted to throw a punch at John. After this one, he is still not quite off the hook... Can't wait to see where you take this story next.
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 01/12/12 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 18
Yeah! Another chapter, and I was just thinking yesterday about this story and how I missed it! John is right to blame himself with what Dean had to do to survive. Those guys didn't stand a chance with a revenge filled John! And thanks for the reminder that Dean is only 17 in this story, because John is right, no matter what Dean was doing, it was cowardly for those yahoos to gang up and beat up someone of that age. Sam is still dreaming of better things looks like. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. I hope everything is going better for you now.
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 16/01/12 10:31 PM · On: Chapter 17
I do believe that I will be sad when this story is finished since it is my favorite one that is a WIP. I can easily see John disciplining Dean this way. It was rather harsh but at least he gave Dean a chance at fighting back. I'm really curious as to John's plan to tell Sam what's been up with Dean. So, even Bobby senses Sam is planning to fly the coup. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: snseriesfan (Signed) · Date: 14/01/12 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 17
Great chapter. I've been waiting for this one, since you left the last one with such a good cliffie -- John friggin' Winchester. This was a good resolution. Now I only have to find out what great idea John has.
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 03/01/12 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 16
Yikes! I assume it was John that Dean saw and knew he was in trouble. And I'm hoping that John is referring to the man on the ground when he said, "Nothing that won't Heal." Gulp. I'm just hoping he reamed Dean a good one and sent him home. Hopefully, he heard Dean's refusal to the man. I'm also glad that Dean decided not to do the trick. I know he really thought about it but in the end he do choose the right course. I imagine that Dean is crushed about his Dad not trusting him because it is obvious that John set him up. I can't wait to read the next update!! Biting my nails until then.
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 05/12/11 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 15
Man oh man, I did not see this happening! John is testing Dean and I wonder if he'll pass. He just doesn't trust Dean right now and if Dean finds out it will literally crush him. I cringed when Sam mentioned the bodily fluids thing. Yikes, he doesn't know how close to hitting home he got. I'm really looking forward to the next part!
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 05/12/11 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 14
I'm glad that John seems to be listening to Bobby and perhaps he will start taking better care of his boys. I wonder if Sam suspects what Dean was up to on his nights out, seems like he suspects Dean was up to something that he had no business doing. I'm really looking forward to reading the next chapter.
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 08/11/11 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 13
I think John would be more pissed if he knew Dean was close by. Good thing that they were there though. Poor Sam, seeing the monster turn back to the woman. Perhaps he will get a better understanding of what Dean, John, and Bobby do. Thanks for another great chapter! Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: snseriesfan (Signed) · Date: 08/11/11 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 13
Good chapter. I like it when Bobby handles Dean. Thanks for being so prompt in posting chapters.
Reviewer: snseriesfan (Signed) · Date: 01/11/11 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 12
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 31/10/11 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 12
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 31/10/11 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 11
I absolutely loved this chapter. I'm glad Bobby discovered Dean's secret. Dean needs all the support he can get so he never reverts to that activity again. I'm also glad that Bobby is mad at John and not Dean. Dean would have never been in that position if John had taken better care of his boys. Dean does have really good instincts and Bobby is so right in believing in Dean. They need to get to John and Sammy before something terrible happens to them. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 18/09/11 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 10
Poor Dean, he is still in the middle of Sam and John's spitting contest. Loved Bobby here, he seemed like how I pictured him. I hope Sam has a great hunt! Looking forward to the next chapter, and congratulations on the nomination!
Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 04/09/11 02:07 AM · On: Chapter 7
I like how this is coming together. Nice that Sam's starting to realize how much he's missing Dean, and that he didn't mean to stay away for ten days. I also like the threat of the storm that you've put in the last few chapters, keep expecting the YED to make an appearance, somehow. The last bit with Dean going to Flagstaff makes perfect Dean-sense.
Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 04/09/11 01:17 AM · On: Chapter 3
I like that John took the Impala because it reminded him of the boys, also that John's starting to see things from Dean's perspective, and that the street kid gave John a good talking to.
Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 04/09/11 01:01 AM · On: Chapter 2
Well, I didn't like what Dean had to do in the first chapter to get the rent and food money, but I've gotta see how Dean gets Sam back. John was pretty harsh with Dean in this, but that's following canon, plus he's worried about Sam. I was a little surprised that Dean didn't hotwire the Impala; just because he didn't want to get the keys from the kitchen didn't mean he couldn't find a way to drive her. He'd make faster time looking by car, but then he might've missed getting the information from the trucker. It's obvious you've put a lot of thought into the plot here, giving Sam a reason to fight with Dean, and need to prove his independence by leaving.
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 03/09/11 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 9
Gulp, I don't think John is thinking too clearly. He is nuts to take just Sam on a hunt. Yikes! Dean is going to worry himself sick every night and day. I'm thinking that Dean may need to be at Bobby's for awhile after what happened. Bobby will take care of Dean. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 29/08/11 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 8
I absolutely loved Dean's reaction when he finally caught up to Sam! Perfect! This is really realistic because Dean would be angry and relieved all at once. I love how they were being brothers here at the end of the chapter. I could easily picture it. I'm worried that John will be harder on Dean than Sam once he gets off the bus. Having the YED at the bus station was creepy, too. Sam will probably have forgotten it once he's with both John and Dean. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 29/08/11 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 7
Uh oh, John is going to go ballistic once he realizes Dean did not go home. Does Sam have Dean's cell number? I can't remember! Dean's self worth is at an all time low right now. Everything John says and does Dean thinks he's a big disappointment to John. I hope nothing happens to Sam. Seems like it that was a great memory for Sam it wouldn't end with him in peril. I'm really looking forward to reading the next chapter! Thanks for posting 2!
Reviewer: JennyF (Signed) · Date: 26/08/11 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 6
Reviewer: POOKEE (Signed) · Date: 04/08/11 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 1
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 25/07/11 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 6
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 24/07/11 01:04 PM · On: Chapter 5
Poor Dean, he is so scared of facing his father because he knows that John knows what he did to make money. John is really conflicted about the whole thing. Not sure how to approach Dean about the whole situation but knowing he must. John is both angry and hurt and disappointed in himself as well as Dean. Dean snapping out at John is a sure indication that he is at the end of his endurance. Dean is about to completely shut down here. I hope John finds Sammy soon. I can't wait to read the next part! Definitely my favorite story in progress right now!
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 10/07/11 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 4
I just wanted to cry during the John's parts mostly. His thoughts of Dean and what he'd been probably doing to take care of Sam was just so heartbreaking. I too wonder how John is going to broach the subject to Dean? Talk about awkward! Poor Dean, I'm worried about his health now, looks like he is nearing his endurance. Sam is still being way to stubborn and he just won't give up being "free". I hope John finds Dean soon and then they both can be on the lookout for Sam together. Can't wait to read the next chapter!
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