Reviewer: Winchester (Signed) · Date: 21/04/12 03:23 PM · On: Part IV
That was amazing! I love the plot and that Pepper turned out to be the baddie after all that time she spent with Sam. And when Sam found out that Bobby had died, I really felt for him and that he absolutely shattered inside. I think you really captured Sam's POV brilliantly too. Well done and thank you for sharing! Will definitaly be checking out your other stories!
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 14/06/11 10:06 PM · On: Part IV
So Pepper was a djinn. Huh. I started to have a bad feeling when I read where her apartment block was, and the tattoos on her arms just finished it off for me. But wow - she put Sam through all that, when in reality he'd been gone for just minutes. What a biatch.... Loved Dean's none-too-gentle prodding at Sam to get him to spill what was on his mind. And his honest reaction at the end - just shows how much they've both learned over the past few years. Don't take things for granted. Not surprising that Sam didn't really want to look at his face in the mirror for too long, seeing that pale, wasted djinn-created mask in his mind. And can understand Sam's fears in regard to what could happen to him once that wall lets go. But Dean would never give up on his little brother. What a great ride you took us on. Thank you for that - I loved the twists and turns until the final reveal. Thank you for sharing this. Jules
Reviewer: Leigh Ann Wallace (Signed) · Date: 14/06/11 09:42 PM · On: Part IV
Great story, love it. I totally had NO clue what was going on, but couldn't stop reading. Whew! Leigh Ann
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 14/06/11 09:40 PM · On: Part III
Yep, Dr Morse is definitely on my list of people that need to go down, Winchester-style. Hmm....the last hunt Sam remembers has got me thinking - abandoned warehouse down by the docks, the smell of death and decay.... And now the sudden convenient appearance of Pepper, her suspension, and her boots-and-all attitude towards helping Sam out - I've gone from liking her immensely to wondering whether she might have something to do with all this mystery. If Sam is trapped in something supernatural, what part is Pepper playing in it? Hmm............*taps finger against chin* Jules
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 14/06/11 09:28 PM · On: Part II
Good on Pepper for taking Sam's side. And now I like the horrible Dr Morse even less than I did at the start of the chapter, after finding out what he intended to do to a helpless, comatose Sam. Still....can't help wondering now if there is something supernatural going on. The fact that Sam's rib tatts didn't show up on an X-ray report is pretty weird. And this weakness and malaise that he keeps experiencing - is it just a normal reaction after waking up from a ten-year coma? Or something a little more sinister.....? And ack! If this is real, you killed Bobby!!!! *sniffles* Jules
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 14/06/11 09:17 PM · On: Part I
Oh, Sam! What has happened, and where are Dean and Bobby? Ten years!!! If Dean is still alive, did he just give up on Sam ever waking? And how did he end up there in the first place? Was it something to do with the wall coming down? Ack! *waves arms*....too many questions. Reading on. Oh, Sam's shock upon waking was really well done, as was his panic when the nurse told him it had been ten years. Yikes.... Jules
Reviewer: Leigh Ann Wallace (Signed) · Date: 14/06/11 12:35 PM · On: Part I
Wow, great story! Can't wait to read more. Love your writing.
Reviewer: blackcatswhiskers (Signed) · Date: 12/06/11 11:31 PM · On: Part IV
Great story - really like to twisted ending!!
Reviewer: Star (Signed) · Date: 12/06/11 09:35 PM · On: Part IV
I have to say I was taken by surprise with the djinn. All types of scenarios came into my head, alternate timelines, angel-wiping but somehow not a a djinn. This was a great story and I love the description of Sam's physical state after a ten year coma. Though I wished there was more to come. I also got a kick out of Dean as a soccer (really baseball!)Dad with a kid and a pot-belly.
Reviewer: Medusa (Signed) · Date: 12/06/11 08:36 PM · On: Part I
What a great story! I really loved this one. You very artfully built the clues before the reveal, and i have to admit I didn't guess it what it was until just before you revealed. I just love me some Sam-Suffering and you captured it beautifully. Thank you!!
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 12/06/11 03:58 PM · On: Part IV
I loved it! Have to admit, when I started reading your story I wondered if I might really like it but curiosity peaked and I'm glad I kept going. After "future" Sam kept digging up one bad information after the other I started wondering if this was all just a fake reality. Oh yes! Once I read the word "tattoo" I knew right away what was going on. Brilliant idea! I really enjoyed how you played with our minds. Very good writing. Thanks for sharing this with us!
Reviewer: supernaturalfan (Signed) · Date: 11/06/11 12:10 PM · On: Part II
Great start to this one..I love a mystery, and this one certainly is. I can't wait to read your next chapter. Keep writing and I'll keep reading. Take care,
Jane
Reviewer: Aaleiyah JoRayne Hunter (Signed) · Date: 10/06/11 07:33 PM · On: Part I
Ooh, awesome beginning. I can't wait to see the rest...
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