Supernaturalville
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 09/06/11 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hey,

I like your portrayal of John as a concerned and loving parent. Too many writers have him as an uncaring monster, I think your description is much more realistic. Nicely done.

Bird 

Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 08/06/11 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 1

It has been a long day, and I'm so tired that I'm about to fall asleep, but this story was so good that it kept my attention.  It is a really good story.   Thanks so much for posting it so that I could enjoy it.

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