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Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 15/08/07 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 9- Truths

I promise I'll stick with it....I'm looking forward to the big reveal!!! Great chapter
~Kayla

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 09/08/07 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 6- Old roles

I like the mini-monologue! It's confusing but deep, and very poignant. Please write more! This is great and I really want to see how it all ends!!!

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 09/08/07 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 5- Sleeping Memories

Oh yes! Liked very much! This mystery is getting very, very intriguing! So Jay's like Sam, huh? Hmmmm....curious to see what happens next!

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 09/08/07 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 4- Not so kind hostess

Indulging! Sounds worth it, of course! Great mysteries. I'm curious about Jay. Her story must be awful if she's been hunting longer than Dean! I'm really interested in this character...

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 09/08/07 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 3- Careful Mantras

Hm. What's this about Jay and the Winchesters knowing each other?! Very interesting...interesting...!!!! This is absorbing!

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 09/08/07 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 2- Nerves of Rusted Steel

Heh heh. Poor Bobby. Interesting idea--creepy demon! Wondering where this is going and can't wait to find out!

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 09/08/07 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 1- Surprises

Ooooh, interesting start! Liking this...yeah, Bobby's rarely portrayed as a main character even though he's so awesome! Very nice.

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 27/06/07 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 6- Old roles

Wow, I don't wanna kill you for the mini-monolouge! I thought that was a excellent part of this chapter! Really good, and I seriously cannot wait for more!
~Kayla

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 27/06/07 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 6- Old roles

okay, now I'm confused.......thoroughly...
obviously Bobby made a real mistake in expecting help from her

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 27/06/07 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 4- Not so kind hostess

fast putdown....hate to see Jay & Dean butt heads

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 27/06/07 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 5- Sleeping Memories

Great update! I was waiting for this for this! Nice work!
~Kayla

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 27/06/07 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 2- Nerves of Rusted Steel

like these quickie takes....easy to read

Reviewer: fireball10 (Signed) · Date: 26/06/07 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 6- Old roles

hurry with the next chapter great job

Author's Response:
I will...I promise

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 21/06/07 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 4- Not so kind hostess

I like Jay, smartass and all. Nice work!
~Kayla

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 21/06/07 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 3- Careful Mantras

Fabulous update! I would comment more here, but I need to keep reading!
~Kayla

Reviewer: rebecca (Signed) · Date: 21/06/07 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 4- Not so kind hostess

is great!!! want to know more about jay? i like her already !!!
post 2 ch more, please!!!! soon. am curious..... about her background and her "friendship" with bobby. by the way i love that he have the "father' role" now!

Reviewer: rebecca (Signed) · Date: 19/06/07 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 2- Nerves of Rusted Steel

is cool! keep going
please!!!!!

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 19/06/07 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 2- Nerves of Rusted Steel

What kind of demon is it?!!!! I hope that they get rid of this evil soon! Good job!
~Kayla

Author's Response: That's still being worked out, but you will love the person Bobby's going to see.

Reviewer: rebecca (Signed) · Date: 12/06/07 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 1- Surprises

ok, is fine!
who is that demon??? like u said is fron the past? for who is it coming?? DEAN or sam???????

Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 12/06/07 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 1- Surprises

Ohh this looks good. great job will be looking for updates.

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 12/06/07 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 1- Surprises

really short but quite interesting.....so Bobby knows who or what this is....??!! thank god, our dear Bobby is the resident demon expert....who better to have in your corner !!!!!!

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 12/06/07 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 1- Surprises

Interesting beginning, Bobby's always been a fav. with me, I'll be waiting to see where this goes - K

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 12/06/07 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 1- Surprises

I'm already hooked! Update soon please!
~Kayla

Reviewer: bopeep (Signed) · Date: 12/06/07 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 1- Surprises

i liked it! lots of potential, and well written. may i suggest hurt!sam and protective!dean? i love those stories, and i think the time-setting is right for it. i look forward to the next chapter, so please upd8 asap!! :)

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