Supernaturalville
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 15/06/07 12:17 AM · On: Bar Room Brawl

You have really named your story aptly...... the demon situation is just going from bad to worse! A very entertaining read, thank you.

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 14/06/07 10:04 PM · On: Bar Room Brawl

Fantastic update! I mean my heart was pounding the entire time! They have so many demons they need to fight, what are they going to do?

~Kayla

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 14/06/07 09:54 PM · On: Bar Room Brawl

Ohhh, that was mean, drawing Dean into traffic like that,  I'm really enjoying this story - Thanks for the read - K

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 13/06/07 12:53 AM · On: Overwhelmed

Great start Native Star, you describe the overwhelming nature of the Winchester's current predicament really well. It warmed my heart that Sam had already started to research a way to get Dean out of the deal, and I liked this line:

The thought crossed Sam’s mind that, while they may have won a twenty three-year-old battle, it hadn’t come without a price.

Too true. 

 

 

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 12/06/07 05:03 PM · On: Overwhelmed

Very nice beginning, makes the wait for fall not seem quite as long - Thanks for the read - K

Reviewer: rebecca (Signed) · Date: 11/06/07 02:32 PM · On: Overwhelmed

cool! great idea!!!!  to know what they all thinking, feeling and doing after killing the demon.

who's the new demon!!?!!

sam's feeling?! about dean' actitude and feeling to the deal!!!!!!

anyway is cool! good idea to explore and see that part of the story! if u know what i mean.?!

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 11/06/07 01:47 PM · On: Overwhelmed

Great start! You do a really good job capturing the boys and picking up where the season left off - typical Dean  - totally "forgetting" about the deal... Can't wait to see who this demon is....

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 11/06/07 11:27 AM · On: Overwhelmed

Good start. I really hope that Sam can find something to get Dean out of his deal. Looking forward to more!

~Kayla

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