Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 15/07/07 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 7 Pulling the plug..

Nice Jude.. I was thrilled to find the next chapter ready to read (I was gonna beg for a preview)  Nice job on the chapter and can't wait to hear from Bobby - K

Author's Response: Thanks, Kel...hope I do the man justice....my Dad was a lot like him...good heart, few words, and somebody to be counted on...

Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 15/07/07 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 2 A Haunting We Will Go

wow...thats ummm...well...umm....errrmmm...eww. 

Author's Response:

what can I say, Jackie....some stories are like that.....

sometimes "EWWWs and "YUCKKKs" are as wanted as "sweet" and "awesome" (if the writer was aiming for gross !!

Reviewer: supernaturalpass (Signed) · Date: 15/07/07 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 7 Pulling the plug..

Another great chapter Jude!

Author's Response: And another sweet review...thanks, jen

Reviewer: gaelicspirit (Signed) · Date: 15/07/07 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 6 Movie Mayhem

Woman! You broke his nose! That adorable, perfect slightly turned up little nose! You did that just because of your fall, didn't you? Fess up.

Fight scene was well-done! And bloody. Fists, knifes, feet, the works. And I cheered aloud when I realized you had him rent a martial arts movie! Very cool. I was also laughing until I was teary when I saw you had him conside Devour. HA! Nicely played.

*grumbles* Can't believe you broke his nose...

Off to read chapter 7 -- been without Internet for a week (A WEEK!!) and I have a lot to catch up on...

Author's Response:

Bobby will fix it, Gaelic.....Bobby can fix anything!!!!

If it makes you feel any better, I really feel Dean's pain !! So SORRY!!  :0(     jude

Reviewer: sweetysmart0505 (Signed) · Date: 10/07/07 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 5 Caught Napping !

that is really good. I love it when Sam gets in trouble like taht. so far awesome. going to read the alst chapter now.

Author's Response: glas you're enjoying it so far, Candy

Reviewer: sweetysmart0505 (Signed) · Date: 10/07/07 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 3 Dinnertime

yea I figured as soon as yer said the guy was slumped soething was wrong with him. so really good job with it.

Author's Response: took awhile to show how much he loved his wife....   thanks again,candy

Reviewer: sweetysmart0505 (Signed) · Date: 10/07/07 05:55 PM · On: Chapter 1 Let's Take a Break

wow you are great at writing detail on chapters. and fight scenes are also really good. though because my vocabulary is so short and my mind is distracted I got lost at a couple parts ad I didn't know what you were talking about but it was awesome. so good job on this.

Reviewer: Thru Terrys Eyes (Signed) · Date: 09/07/07 06:58 AM · On: Chapter 6 Movie Mayhem

Go Jude!!!!

Devour as a movie sucked, but if you want to see the best Jensen Ackles crying scene EVER, it's worth renting just for that. Hell it's worth buying just for that.

 

 

Author's Response:

 I heard our boy was the ONLY reason to see DEVOUR !!!!

Thanks, doll !! will check it out tonight...in the mood for something sweet to watch.....

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 08/07/07 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 5 Caught Napping !

OMG!  Not Sam!  this is really amazing the suspense is killing me!  Boy am I happy I'm reading this now with the next chapter already posted or I might have had to harass you for the next chapter!  Again I am in awe of your writing!  You are SUPER talented JUDE DUDE! No ifs ands or buts! ;)

Author's Response: blushing whole bunches...*** Gen, Im going to have to put you on my payroll ....I've already finished 7 and Terry says the beta goes so quickly this story...some commas and a couple phrases edited here or there ...thank you so very much    :0)   jude

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 08/07/07 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 3 Dinnertime

A man cooking dinner is very romantic and sexy to me...almost as sexy as a man cleaning the house!  This was another exceptional chapter!  Again your brotherly banter was right on the mark and my curiosity continues to be tantalizd by this very suspenseful storyline!

Author's Response:

I agree,,,but not enough guys will bend to do so...to heck with the big gifts..hands on is the sweetest thing

So glad you're enjoying to this point...not sure I have the boys as down pat as I should, so thanks for that... 

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 08/07/07 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 2 A Haunting We Will Go

:D this story is making me smile...at the Dean parts at least...and is still keeping me wondering about this little Wisconsin town and this "one time view" movie...could that be what's making these guys go a little bit crazy?

Author's Response:

I hope you'll stick with me to the end, Gen....it's a decent little story for my first venture into the multi-chapters realm...

Thanks, for reading and especially the review..   :0)   jude

Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 08/07/07 09:56 AM · On: Chapter 1 Let's Take a Break

Heya Jude!

What a great opening chapter.  Sorry I haven't gotten to this sooner.  You've done a great job.  I'm looking forward to the rest.

Laura

Author's Response:

Thanks, Laura, since it's my first try at doing a story with chapters I was awfully shaky ....but now that I'm on chapter 8 I feel a lot more confident...

Whenever I get a review from my favorite authors and reviewers it boosts my belief that I can do this...not as polished as some of you but fairly effective

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 07/07/07 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 6 Movie Mayhem

What do I think...hmmm...What do I think...I think you have been taking evil lessons from someone on this site, haven't you?? Who is it...fredo?? loved the shout out to Oz!! very cool, gotta love that movie!! sam in a large flying monkey suit!! freakin hilarious!!  great job with the fight scene!! bambi;)

Author's Response:

a small tribute to one of my good friends and favorite evil/fluffy/serious writers....

You guys really don't know how terrified I was of that combat scene..... almost as terrified as I am of flying monkeys from OZ !!!