Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 24/07/07 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Save the Cheerleaders !!
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!! I love it....AWESOME!!
Author's Response: Glad you did ...it was a lot of fun to write !! thanks so much for reviewing!!
Reviewer: gaelicspirit (Signed) · Date: 24/07/07 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Save the Cheerleaders !!
I swear to God, Sam, only time the Winchesters ever seem to ‘get lucky’ is when we get Bobby Singer involved. HA! Priceless! This was great, Jude -- action, comfort, shirtless Sam (although, I have to admit I felt a bit sorry for the lad in that moment) and they saved the cheerleaders! But... is hollowed ground going to be enough? Ready to tune in next week... ;)
Author's Response: Yeah, Amanda, between Dean always saying... this couldn't get much worse( and of course it DOES!) and Bobby being a great stop gap against more trouble ....we see some things as predictable..... Well, we'll try exorcism, crushing and hallowed burial and hope for the best....
Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 24/07/07 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Save the Cheerleaders !!
awesome chappy, jude!! now i need more shirtless Sam!! love the duct tape line!! way to go Zack!! brilliant!! did i mention i want more shirtlass Sam? love that bobby showed up to save the day...is there more shirtless Sam to come...Dean throwing basketballs at the crazed coach very cool....um...more Sam shirtless on the way, right? lol...anyway, awesome chappy, jude!!! bambers;) PS...did i forget to mention, i would like to see more shirtless Sam??
Author's Response: You know, Bambers, I was thinking about a little more shirtless Sam...but was afraid you might get bored with that quickly......what do YOU think?? Zack said that duct tape line one day and I swore I'd include it....glad you and Terry both liked it
Reviewer: sweetysmart0505 (Signed) · Date: 24/07/07 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Save the Cheerleaders !!
omg I was drooling when I read Sam had no shirt on. I would be screaming and chasing Sam if I saw him with no shirt. I am sweating over here. lol great job with that scene, you so should have written more of what Sam woud be doing, getting away from then or trying nervously to distract them. lol. but it was kind of off plot so that is ok. Anyway really great chapter. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Author's Response: you'll get a little more Sam (revealed) in the beginning of Chapter 9, sweety.....Dean to the rescue!!! ......so glad you enjoyed Dean tossing the 'lamb to the wolves" like that..... P.S. Thank you for the STARS they taste even better than 'cookies' !!!
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 24/07/07 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Save the Cheerleaders !!
here it is finally ! Great chapter Jude, a story's quality can only increase once Bobby jump in... Always love his view and insight when it comes onto the brothers... And poor Sam, abandonned in the hands of hysterical cheerleaders ! Oh love the chappy title by the way. Can't wait for the next one, more Sam, Damaged Dean and Bobby... gonna be so good...
Author's Response: Thanks for the written review, Fredo...... hopefully"HEROES" will forgive me for the chapter title...it seemed most fitting..... Yeah, Sam is quite the smorgasbord of fleshy delights!!!
Reviewer: maria noel (Signed) · Date: 22/07/07 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 7 Pulling the plug..
i love this chapter!!!! as a Deangirl with enough love to share with Sam i totally love to see the brotherhood, this unique bond they have. You caught their magic bond so well!!!!!!!!! Proud of you and your talent!!!!!
Author's Response: thank you, dear maria, so glad you enjoyed it....i really am enjoying writing this story as well....
Reviewer: catchme21 (Signed) · Date: 21/07/07 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 7 Pulling the plug..
Oh wait...that's the last chapter? Well crap haha I could have waited to review on your fight scene. Lol I just wasn't paying attention (like usual) so I was surprised to find no 'next' link. Hmmmm... So are the DVDs demonically influenced? I love how the boys are taking turns babysitting a movie dispensing thingy. Update soon! :) Kris
Author's Response: sorry...production shutdown while author had broken nose surgery....... I'm writing eight in between pain pills .........if i don't wait til they wear off it'll actually come out WORSE than Devour
Reviewer: catchme21 (Signed) · Date: 21/07/07 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 6 Movie Mayhem
Ok, so I'm going through and reading the whole thing. But I had to comment on this chapter. The fighting scene was awesome!! I'm not that great at them, but you managed to make it look so easy. :) Thank God Sam didn't rent Devour lol...
Author's Response: Thanks,kris...first one I ever tried so it was touch and go....thanks for the kudos... looking at jensen was the only good part of DEVOUR.............
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 21/07/07 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 7 Pulling the plug..
This is getting really good (well, it already is really good but...) ...can't wait for more!
Author's Response: hope to finish 8 this weekend in between pain pills...... have to wait til they wear off or it will turn into a comedy....
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 21/07/07 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 6 Movie Mayhem
Ohmygoodness! That was incredibly cool! Really enjoyed it! Glad Sam's okay and Dean's not dead...
Author's Response: this chapter had me terrified ...hadn't a clue on writing fight scenes ...glad you approved...thanks, shiny
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 21/07/07 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 5 Caught Napping !
Lots more cookies! This is incredibly creepy! Such a good story...
Author's Response: so glad you like it......i wasn't sure after a friend refused to read it saying I was 'disturbed"...... but in a good way i think !!
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 21/07/07 09:44 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Headaches
Ooooh....this is really intriguing!
Author's Response: thanks, shiny, wasn't sure how this one would go over....
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 21/07/07 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 3 Dinnertime
Yeah, that was really romantic...very creepy! Excellent job! I wonder...who's going to eat the shrimp?...
Author's Response: well, they are round like little doughnuts maybe the cops will eat them..... sooo glad you're enjoying it so far
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 21/07/07 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 2 A Haunting We Will Go
I think Dean and Sam have a new gig...!!
Author's Response: Yeah, but not the one they thought they had....
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 21/07/07 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 1 Let's Take a Break
Cookies to you, jude! Chocolate chip, oatmeal, M&M...I really like this beginning!
Author's Response: Thanks, shiny......wow nice rewards i like the way you think
Reviewer: sweetysmart0505 (Signed) · Date: 18/07/07 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 7 Pulling the plug..
You are right it was a little slow but if that angst was nessicary then it was just fine. So good job and I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks, Candy...really do appreciate you continuing to read & review...... next chapter more exciting
Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 17/07/07 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 7 Pulling the plug..
very nice...i like it.
Author's Response: Two Rivers, huh?? really liked that place...... so glad you're enjoying the story.... thanks so much for the many sweet reviews, Jackie...
Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 17/07/07 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 6 Movie Mayhem
Yeah i'm thinkin' it was bloody enuff..LOL Yikes...LOL Devour?????? OMG thats funny.
Author's Response: Our poor Dean..... and poor guilt-ridden Sam....... i hope Dean mends quickly because i'm already plotting their NEXT adventure....
Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 17/07/07 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 5 Caught Napping !
Very cool. You get a chocolate chip cookie...LOL I like the stories that arent always blood gore....stake 'em and burn 'em. This is really good.
Author's Response: If I'm really good in chapter 8 and 9, may I have walnuts with the chocolate chips ??
Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 17/07/07 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Headaches
very good. I agree.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for continuing to read my story....means a lot as do your reviews
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 16/07/07 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 7 Pulling the plug..
angst, guilt, domestic violence, tears, god these guys could need couple therapy !!! Hey maybe i should ask Bambi to write a story about that ! Seriously Jude, great chapter, surely less action, but very well writen dialogue, also loved all the patching up process, there's something so sad in the fact that it's so banal for them to always be so damaged. Can't wait for next chapter, are they gonna find the ladies who rented the movie before the massacre...Hopefuly Bobby will be able to help. And Dean in a chearleader camp, damn, even black-eyed he will make ravages ! Keep up the good work my friend...
Author's Response: Fredo, i always look forward to your lively reviews....thank you for making time in your busy day for my work............ it is very much appreciated.... What can I say about how routine their physical discomfort has become?? Kripke beats them up but not as badly as we do......Dean would be cute evenin a body cast !!! still trying to pull all of chapter 8 together...hope to complete by Thursday and post by weekend
Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 16/07/07 12:34 PM · On: Chapter 7 Pulling the plug..
darn, i started reading this like 5 times today...read it most of the way through at work...yeah, what can i say, i'm a slacker!! awesome job!! nice details with the fixing of Dean's injuries!!! waiting for chappy eight!!! great job, jude!! bambers;)
Author's Response: Glad you made time to finish......was hoping it wasn't my lacking something that made it hard to read all the way through... Glad you liked it, thanks for the review, B
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 15/07/07 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 7 Pulling the plug..
*sigh* Why is the patch up always as satisfying as the whumpage??? Awesome chapter!!! Great interaction/dialogue between the boys. Loved the sock AND the dreadful pun! As a Canadian girl, any mention of duct tape makes me all patriotic!!! Red Green aka Steve Smith is a staple in our house. You should see what I can do with the stuff! I can actually make a "shoe" for my horse - it's very useful and a very long story.... Ya know you'd have me at Bobby.... You totally rock! This story just keeps getting better - it's got everything! In fact, I'm sure there's more that I loved and can't remember it all... Can't wait for more....
Author's Response: Lam, I loved duct tape enough that I had the DUCK TAPE site in favorites for a long time... I'm blushing as I read the reviews from you and Gen.....thank you, thank you, thank you...
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 15/07/07 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 7 Pulling the plug..
Very nice very nice...as usual a great grasp of our fave heroes and their reactions to the situation you've put them in...Sam's guilt...Dean's attempt to take it away and to hide how bad he is...All PERFECT! Even making Dean human with the blood loss swwon was on par! I think my fave part...or one of them...was Dean's rant about his "baby" Keep it up Mom! I look forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks, Gen.....i really appreciate your reviews...this one in particular since it's the first since your online "adoption" Dean does love his "girl"
Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 15/07/07 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Headaches
Ya know anytime ya wanna stop with the descriptive descriptions of Deans anatomy is fine by me...damn woman you're killin' me...LOL I love it so far....rawr...LOL
Author's Response: Sorry.....I'll make you hate me in chapter 6....
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