Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 18/05/11 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 12

Leave it to Bobby to put everything into perspective! Just love the guy!!!

Awesome ending- good wrap up with just enough chick-flick to be satisfying. I like your character of Tom- nice addition to the group! I'll have to check him out in your other story.

Wonderful story overall- and quite surprising from a full-out H/C fic. Didnt expect the angst over the baby worms... but that was a nice spin!

Tree

Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed it all through to the end. 

I haven't got round to posting 'Dry' where Tom first appears over here yet, but you can find it on my account over at Fanfiction.net under my author name Dizzo

Thank you very much for your lovely comments and making me feel so welcome over here!

x

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 18/05/11 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 10

"jeez S-AH-AH-AAM, their freakin' tongues are going places I - GAAAH - don't wanna even think about!"  Okay- and now my mind is TOTALLY in the gutter now.... Oh to be a baby Lyndworm- hahahahaa.....

Author's Response:

Oh my mind is very comfortable in the gutter, it clearly likes it there because it keeps going back!

 Yep, when I wrote this chapter, I had never, in my entire life, so wanted to be a snake!

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 18/05/11 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 2

I just LOVE your dialogue. Its sooo spot on that I can actually see the J's playing this out as if an eppy. The line  ""So Sammy, remind me why I'm standin' here at the end of world, freezin' my awesome ass off in the middle of the friggin' night?"  nearly had me in fits of laughter induced tears cause its soooo Dean... but then I no sooner recomposed myself then you gave me - "I don' know what scares me more – the fact that we're looking for a 20 foot snake or that you used a word like vestigial … what in the friggin' hell are vestigial front legs?"

And even though I KNEW what was coming... I didnt expect Dean to get "squished" too.

Okay- off to the next chapters!

T

Author's Response:

Glad you're still enjoying.  As a Brit writing American English dialogue, it makes me immensely happy to hear that people think I'm getting it right!

Thanks for the awesome review x