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Reviews For Deprivation
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 16/05/11 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 4

Oh, Sammy - ROFL! When Dean stole his pillow, I have to admit, I laughed out loud. Lucky there's no one in the office right now - they've all sodded off and left me to do some work in peace.

Loved the tit for tat at the end with Sam pushing Dean off the bed and hogging it all so he could finally get some sleep. And ooer, yuck, when Sam could finally get his pillow back and found out it had been well and truly dribbled on - lol.

Thank you for providing my lunchtime reading for today - I needed the laugh.

Jules



Author's Response:

Great to read you enjoyed this; you might like the fic Aggravation where Sam gets his revenge in similar circumstances ...

Thanks for the fab reviews, really appreciate the support!

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Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 16/05/11 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 3

Ooh...ouch! That must've hurt!

Oh, gosh...poor Sam, scarred for life after Dean flopping all over him like a fevered, human-sized rag doll. And it would have just been Winchester luck to have Dean wake up at that moment - lol.

Thankfully it didn't happen. Oh, loved the roll to steal the blankets - that was precious!

Jules



Author's Response:

Heehee,  this was the chapter where I really let my evil bunny out to play ...

Once again, glad you enjoyed x

Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 16/05/11 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 2

Baby warthog...*chortle, snort*...

I can just picture it - my poor Deany-babe. Sick as a dog and dead to the world. And poor Sam twisted up like a pretzel, trying to fit onto that tiny little couch - loved the visual of his knees in his armpits, etc - lol.

Here's hoping Dean doesn't wake up and smack him one before the morning....

Jules



Author's Response:

Well, there's only so many places you can put a body that size!

Yes, I definitely see Dean as a fidgety sleeper, he's so full of nervous energy when he's awake, I've got him pegged as a flopper and a wriggler when he's asleep.  *sighs*

Thanks again for commenting!

:)

Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 16/05/11 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 1

Gross.....especially after my boss staggered in this morning coughing and spluttering all over the place before going home two hours later. I've half-emptied a can of Glen20 spraying the office to try to defeat his germs...but somehow I think the damage has already been done....

Loved the line about people from all over the US coming to see their succulents - that tickled me! And those poor boys - perhaps they should get tee shirts made saying "We're brothers!" - lol.

Reading on...

Jules



Author's Response:

Oh yuck, your boss is clearly the sharing type!

I had to throw in the 'two queens' bit - they wouldn't be Sam and Dean without it!

Glad you're enjoying!

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Reviewer: Leigh Ann Wallace (Signed) · Date: 14/05/11 06:06 AM · On: Chapter 4

Great story,well-written, and lots of fun!


Author's Response:

Thank you, glad you enjoyed; I thought I would give Sam a hard tme for a change!

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