Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 11/06/08 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 2
go Sara, fast!
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 11/06/08 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 1
okay, thought i should honnor that dedication made one year ago by a re-read... But didn't remember that, "Well if you liked it please leave a review. And if you didn't you can blame Fredo" ! Sure blame the poor foreign girl, so thanks for that dedication, jerk!
Author's Response: LMAO, well thank you for the re-read....and yeah, I am gonna blame you cause you're the one that assured me that people wanted more Sara...good thing you were right ;)
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 23/04/08 02:39 AM · On: Chapter 9
Kel, great story; Sara to the rescue. i love how you have Dean melting around Jessie too funny; Dee is pretty........LOL Awake in the Dark is next i am sure i will like this one as well. Renee
Author's Response: Oh, don't we all melt around Dee...lol. Glad you enjoyed - Kel
Reviewer: PropGal (Signed) · Date: 22/04/08 12:34 AM · On: Chapter 9
very nice. great storyline, the witch and the curse that wasn't. and the ending, it's adorable how Jessie has everyone wrapped around her little finger.
Reviewer: CricketBee (Signed) · Date: 08/03/08 04:11 AM · On: Chapter 9
I loved this one. I am currently sitting with a box of kleenex next to the computer and a trash bin next to my seat filled with snot rags, and also coughing up a storm from time to time, I could relate to Dean's cold experience. One nice thing about being sick -- you can stay home from work and read great SN stories! --c
Author's Response: Aw, Cricket, personally speaking I feel ya, we've just been through two weeks of hell here fighting off a nasty flu bug. Glad you enjoyed and I'm glad I could keep you busy - Kel
Reviewer: Candice (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 05:12 AM · On: Chapter 9
I really enjoy all your Sara stories..........your characterisation is awesome and your stories flow really well. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm glad you're enjoying, The Power's family have always been so much fun to write - Thank you for taking the time to let me know you enjoyed - K
Reviewer: Nilah (Signed) · Date: 30/11/07 10:51 AM · On: Chapter 1
I’ve just read all six chapters in one go.I don't know how I let it get away. Well kinda... was hanging onto Awake in The Dark which I totally love. Just a little one for correction- he actually felt better, not great, but defiantly improved. It should read definitely
Author's Response: Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed, as for the correction I'm heading over to fix it now... thanks K
Reviewer: Synera (Signed) · Date: 21/10/07 10:56 PM · On: Chapter 9
i love Jessie she always has me in stiches
Author's Response: lol, yeah well she always has me in stitches also. She's based on my little girl and trust me she's spot on in the story..So glad you enjoyed the story, K
Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 1
This is good. Sara to the rescue...girl power!!
Author's Response: You're making the rounds here Winch..lol. cool you're checking out these stories. THey're some of my favs, full of fun. Hope you enjoy the rest - K
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 14/10/07 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 9
Very nice! All the loose ends neatly tied. It's too bad Ida had to die, though. That town owes her.
Author's Response: Ahh, Shannon normally I leave a response for every review because I appreciate them soo much, however you blew through this story..lol. So I'm gonna settle for one. So glad you enjoyed and I appreciate you reading the older ones.. thanks much - K
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 14/10/07 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 8
Oh no, not a cliffhanger! I'm glad Sara has befriended Ida.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 14/10/07 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 7
I really enjoyed this chapter. I love the chapters that fill in the blanks and help tie up the loose ends. At least now I have an idea what's actually heppening. Mystery is good up to a point, but I like knowing what's happening, too. Very curious as to who is paying for the groceries. My guess is it's the doctor or it was set up in trust with a lawyer.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 14/10/07 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 6
Ooohh! Too wicked! Love the under the table hand explorations. My kind of payback!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 14/10/07 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 5
A wonderful chapter. There's just something right and relaxing about having Sara with the boys. Wherever she goes she makes it home.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 14/10/07 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 4
Hilarious! I love that the town gossips have banded together to run out the heart-breaking much older woman.
Author's Response: lol, so glad you enjoyed, poor Sara being branded the scarlet woman ;)
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 14/10/07 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 3
This is definitely not their gig! Their misfortune makes for some good reading though. Sam's sarcastic remark about Dean always being fine is great! I love it when the brothers bicker.
Author's Response: Yeah, well you know the saying "if not for bad luck....." Thanks for reading - K
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 14/10/07 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 2
Wonderful! I love the use of flashbacks to tell the story! So Jack loves skittles. I'll bet watching him eat the chewy sweets is hilarious. I had a dog who loved jellybeans.
Author's Response: Jack is a hound for skittles, literally.. the big dog just loves those small candies..lol - Glad you enjoyed - K
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 14/10/07 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 1
Love it! I hate that Sara has to leave her children so much, but love to read about her and the boys. The old woman at the end is great! Just a taste of what's in store. I really like the knee-popping. I know what that's like.
Author's Response: I have to admit Shannon, you're one up on me. It's been so long since I last went over this story..lol. Glad you liked the beginning and glad you're enjoying Sara. thanks - K
Reviewer: karate girl (Signed) · Date: 07/07/07 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 5
i thought it was good,but why did you make it where sara was in love with dean and not sam?
Author's Response: Wrong Sara, I'm not referring to Sara that was in Provenince, but rather a character I based a story on called Thank you.. Sorry about the name confusion...Hope you enjoyed anyway. = K
Reviewer: Sammygirl1963 (Signed) · Date: 24/06/07 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 9
Awesome story K! I love the character of Sarah--she is awesome with the brothers. Poor Sam and Dean went thru so much with that curse they were under! I felt so sorry for them each time something went wrong--and then Sarah came and she definitely helped! I'd lovwe to see another story with Sarah helping out the boys! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much, I love that you guys dig Sara, she and her family are fun to write....Thanks as always for reading and especially reviewing..It makes things so much more fun..K
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 23/06/07 11:14 AM · On: Chapter 9
now that very ending scene I would pay to see...... sweet ending to a really interesting tale.......so glad it was the town and not the boys that carried the bad luck....
Author's Response: Jude, glad you enjoyed it...I guess everyone has a run of bad luck every now and again, huh...Thanks as always for reading and taking the time to review....TTYS
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 23/06/07 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 8
Glad Ida's a sweetie...poppa leaves a lot to be desired though, doesn't he ??
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 23/06/07 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 7
c'mon now, kel ...where's the Impala ???
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 23/06/07 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 9
Loved the ending very much. Sam scared by Jess the beast, too funny, lol. Dean found a way to not be next Jess victim, camouflage paint is way better. The impala was in the middle of colorful VM bugs, lol. The only thing that made me sad, it's Ida, I felt sorry for her, it's all her father fault. I enjoyed very much this story, you did a wonderful work K.
Author's Response: Thanks Ocean, I was really happy with that last chapter myself...I was a little worried as I was writing and you're right, poor Ida...Thanks so much for reading and reviewing...K
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 23/06/07 10:34 AM · On: Chapter 6
really good storytelling, Kel.... if it wasn't for Bad Luck I guess they'd have none at all huh??
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