Supernaturalville
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 14/09/07 12:48 PM · On: G. I. Jake

Excellent!  I love that at the end Jake returns to the caring person he was before the demon took him.

Reviewer: ThePasserby (Signed) · Date: 26/06/07 03:01 PM · On: G. I. Jake

ok, loved the end. the reall meaning behind his final words - i just knew they had to speak to his better character! yes! i love that ou made Jake's good come out - kudos.

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 10/06/07 01:34 AM · On: G. I. Jake

Nice work Armaita, loved the explanation behind Jake's last 3 words. Well done!

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 09/06/07 10:14 PM · On: G. I. Jake

Everything that I thought that was going through Jake's head. Good job!

~Kayla

Reviewer: Ice54 (Signed) · Date: 09/06/07 04:06 AM · On: G. I. Jake

Hi

That was a good one!

Thanks for this

Reviewer: clclemmons (Signed) · Date: 08/06/07 12:56 PM · On: G. I. Jake

Very cool.  Great insight on Jake.

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 08/06/07 09:28 AM · On: G. I. Jake

hey, this was very cool. Unusual to find others pov, and really well done !

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