Love the third chapter- and Cas showing up. Love how it follows the Passion ( although I'm sure there are probably some that have read this and probably got their noses bent) But I think it's highly creative in light of the mythology of the show and the season... (yep- repeating myself in the review here because I think you deserve to hear it)
Its hard enough to be original- much less creative- and then much less to put it all together and make it rhyme. Keep an eye on the read count even if the reviews dont come in!
Well done! I- for one- am VERY impressed!
Well, thats the nicest thing anyone has said about my poetry, I find it a lot easier than writing the fics! And I did have the story laid out to use, more or less; so that helped.
I guess some noses may be a little bent by this, but 'Supernatural' is what it is, slightly off track of the norm, I just go with the flow of it. (Unless I want Sam mmm, or Dean :) in a prolonged shower scene!).