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Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/09/07 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 1

I love a good fight between brothers! It's so entertaining.
creepy chapter ending.

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 28/06/07 12:34 AM · On: Chapter 16

Terrific ending, I really enjoyed the whole story. Thanks so much!

Author's Response: thank you so much for all the great reviews, i am glad you enjoyed the story.

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 28/06/07 12:27 AM · On: Chapter 15

Awesome action, and great timing too!

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 28/06/07 12:22 AM · On: Chapter 14

Hey good thinking, I'd forgotten about the amulet! And poor Dean, his feelings about his family - and his ideas about their feelings towards him - are just so painful!

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 26/06/07 01:24 AM · On: Chapter 13

I have decided I hate Joshua. Evil cliffhanger devonshire, and I can't read more now until tomorrow! But I'll be back then...can't wait.

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 26/06/07 01:16 AM · On: Chapter 12

Loved this line:
The thing went into an evil monologue. What else would the bad guy do?” LOL

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 26/06/07 01:08 AM · On: Chapter 11

Liked the insight into John blaming himself for Mary's death, the way Sam did for Jess. And that Dean knew that those ideas weren't right. Very perceptive!

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 25/06/07 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 10

Love the banter - it's such an identifying feature of their relationship, and one of the reasons we love them so! But it's not always easy to do. Well done Devonshire!

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 25/06/07 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 9

At last they found him. I'm really enjoying this devonshire, they're not out of the woods yet - physically or emotionally!

Author's Response: i am so glad you are enjoying it, ciel. and no, they arent out of the wood by any means, not even close. **evil laugh**

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 25/06/07 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 8

Oh, they're so close to him! Come on John and Sam......Dean's right there. Obviously I am getting too involved in this story!

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 25/06/07 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 7

I've gotta say, it serves Joshua right!

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 25/06/07 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 6

Just in the nick of time John! Hope they find Dean soon, that 26 hours WOULD have been brutal!

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 25/06/07 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 5

Poor Dean! The emotional pain is worse than the physical pain in my opinion - and I think they are both going to get him into massive trouble!

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 25/06/07 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 4

I had a bad feeling about Joshua! Tthe traitor!

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 25/06/07 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 3

Wow, very spooky, almost Twilight Zone" feel about it. I love it! It's nice to hear Sam say he won't leave without Dean. Atta boy!

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 25/06/07 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 2

I kind of like the idea of John having the boys followed. In the normal world that would be kind of stalkerish - but they don't live in a normal world!

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 25/06/07 01:41 AM · On: Chapter 1

Hi Devonshire, I'm enjoying "In Transit" so much I thought I would try and catch up with some of your other work ....although lord knows I have enough trouble keeping up with the "Most Recents"! This is a great start, love the dialogue between the brothers, it sounds just like them. But I have to say that I think Dean stalking off into the night alone is probably a bad move. Maybe very bad? I guess I'll soon see!

Author's Response: i'm glad you are enjoying the stories. that you so much for the reviews. and yes, dean stalking off alone was a very, very bad idea.

Reviewer: Sammy (Signed) · Date: 18/06/07 05:25 AM · On: Chapter 6

Maggie this chapter is fantastic so mysterious so making me want to find out what happens but then all your work is fantastic. Amy

Reviewer: pizzapixie (Signed) · Date: 19/04/07 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great first chapter, love the brother-banter!

Reviewer: pizzapixie (Signed) · Date: 19/04/07 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great first chapter, love the brother-banter!

Reviewer: Ice54 (Signed) · Date: 15/02/07 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 16

Hi
That was a good story.
I've read your story in one go
great!

Author's Response: wow, thank you. you have quite the attention span, that was a long story. :

Reviewer: auroradannon (Signed) · Date: 31/01/07 12:25 AM · On: Chapter 16

I liked it! A Lot WOOT!

Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 27/01/07 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 3

Ohhh....very good chapter.

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 08/01/07 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 16

nicely done...loved the ending with sammy having the gray eyes and all...very cool that he should take away some of that darkness with him as he left the forest!!

Author's Response: thank you so much for the great review. i am glad you liked the story.

Reviewer: jensen7587 (Signed) · Date: 08/01/07 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 16

great story i loved it just glad i have unlimited interner access!!! lol!!

Author's Response: thank you so much, sorry the story was so long, but once i get started i cant stop. lol

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