Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 22/02/12 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Moving on
"And if you die?" "Wouldn't be the first time." I got a weird look from my daughter when I laughed loudly at that. Priceless! 'Emma ran her eyes over the smooth, hard muscles of his impressive looking body and silently agreed. Dean caught her looking and smirked as she blushed and covered him over with a sheet.' Hell yeah! Who wouldn't? I knew it was a bad idea for Emma to go to the Impala. And why is it that kids can be so creepy? A strange little girl waving at you. Okay if you live in the real world, but definitely hinky if you live in Supernaturalville. Come on Monday!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 22/02/12 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 3 The Plan
Another great chapter! I liked when Emma leaned against Dean thinking it was Sam. It was also nice that they both actually like one another and regret their bad behavior. It showed the layers of each character, made them real and believable. There's humor even in your dramatic moments. Very cool! Good one liners from the demon. Is it one that we know?
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 22/02/12 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 2 - The Assignment
Emma and the Winchesters have a lot more in common than they thought. Their fathers were both difficult men to understand but Emma's takes the prize for nut-job of the year. "And six days," responded the pedantic angel. That's so Cas. Loved it! The last argument between Dean and Emma while they were laying ground rules was another gem. No? Not a virgin any more?
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 22/02/12 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 1 - She's back
Fantastic chapter! You captured all the characters perfectly. Dean's wisecracks to Cas about seducing a girl were spot on and hilarious! "They're much more spite and smite than sweetness and light." Yeah! Loved that one!
Reviewer: MelBo (Signed) · Date: 22/04/11 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 1 - She's back
Loved this! I like your Cas and Sam and Dean sound about right. I haven't read your first story so I'm not sure about Emma. I think I'll go see before I read the next chap. Loving it so far.
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