Reviewer: Winchester (Signed) · Date: 08/05/12 06:48 AM · On: Chapter 6
This is really good, I love how Sam is being forced to rewatch what soulless Sam has done! His reactions to what he has done in the past are spot on too! Please update soon :D
Author's Response: Thank you, maybe your review will encourage me to finish it, I must admit it has been a little difficult to concentrate on this one, so much other stuff with RL going on but I will find a way. Thank you again, next chapter soon hopefully. Jacq
Reviewer: supernaturalfan (Signed) · Date: 16/08/11 12:54 PM · On: Chapter 6
Great chapter..excited to see another one to this story. Can't wait to see what happened with Rachel's baby...and between her and Sam. Keep writing and I'll be here to read the next. Take care, Jane
Author's Response: Thanks for sticking with it, it has been hard to pull the plot lines together hence the delay in posting, but I will battle on, the muse at least seems to have come back to play, lol Jacq
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 15/08/11 10:48 AM · On: Chapter 3
this demon bitch may have won this time but there will be no next time of success.
Author's Response: Angels and Demons can be as devious as each other, they all have their own agenda, I think we need Dean to sort her out. Thanks for the comment The next chapters are going to be hard to complete, I have so many plot lines to resolve. Jacq
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 15/08/11 10:38 AM · On: Chapter 2
i do hope dean gets there to vanquish the evil bad ass creature and send it to hell.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading thus far, appreciated and again for the stars Jacq
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 15/08/11 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 1
very explosive feelings of what the his demonic nightmare may have been and how dean is like overstating the welcome over his brother.
Author's Response: Thank you. :) I appreciate the review on each chapter and the stars Jacq
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 14/08/11 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 1
oh poor sam, and it may be a place that sam may have been but he cant remember because of the wall.
Author's Response: Thank you for the comments, yes so many things he could have done and places he could have been! Love the stars :) Jacq
Reviewer: supernaturalfan (Signed) · Date: 09/05/11 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 5
I love where your going with this story. Can't wait for the next chapter. Hmmm..Sam and Rachel together..this is gonna be good. Take care, Jane
Author's Response: Thank you for leaving a review., the Muse has decided to come back in when it starts raining! So it shouldn't be too long now! lol Jacq
Reviewer: Leigh Ann Wallace (Signed) · Date: 03/05/11 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 5
Now this is getting very interesting!
Author's Response: Glad you think so, back to the past for the next chapter, many thanks for leaving a few words :) Jacq
Reviewer: mamapranayama (Signed) · Date: 22/04/11 10:22 PM · On: Chapter 4
interesting story so far. hope you can update soon. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading all the way through so far, and you added stars :) Thank you. The Muse for this one is out playing right now, so when she comes back I promise to update... Jacq
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 19/04/11 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 4
Still don't trust Bath Kol, no matter who she is or talks to. I don't believe she will bother putting Sam back together if this shatters the wall completely. Damn, Cass can't interfere?? Well, sod it six ways from Sunday. Wonder if he'll change his mind....especially if the danger to Sam increases.... She's up to something, and not just getting her vessel back. Dean's going to have a spak attack when he finds out what she did to Sam and why. Jules
Author's Response: Well Cas may say he cannot interfere, but he's not always one to follow the rules, think the Winchesters have had that influence, so he may change his mind, again we'll see. I do have a slight dilemma though, another story has followed the same path I was heading down, mm this calls for a slight plot deviation maybe... Jacq
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 19/04/11 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 3
Being Bridget for an afternoon wouldn't be too shabby at all...*smiles dreamily*... And yep, I caught the continuity, Jacq - recognised Death's ravine from your beautiful little piece. But I have to say....what a first-class cow Bath Kol is. I don't blame Sam for saying no to her, not because he didn't want to help Rachel, but for not allowing himself to be manipulated/blackmailed by another angel. Because let's face it, even our beloved Cass hasn't entirely been upfront with the boys on occasion - letting a strung-out, detoxing Sam out of the panic room while manoeuvring Dean into making that promise to obey Heaven's orders comes immediately to mind. I don't think she can be trusted at all, given what she said. Either he helped willingly, or he would be forced into helping, but either way, she was going to make that existing crack in his wall wider so Rachel's own wall would be demolished and the angel could take possession (yes, possession - go, Sammy!) of her vessel again. I'm having trouble believing that Bath Kol would actually keep her promise and not discard Sam like an empty husk of corn once she was done with him. After all, when have the angels ever cut the poor kid a break? And this is the same kid who derailed their precious little apocalypse and drove Bath Kol from her vessel in the first place. If this is for revenge, she's just found a perfect way to get it. And poor Dean - he's going to be swimming in guilt now, since all this happened while he was having a few hours off. Hope he can find a way to reach Sam and pull him out of the hell that Bath Kol has plunged him into. As Dean would say..."Freakin' angels!" Jules oh - and so, a demon was soulless Sam's real target, eh? the plot thickens, as they say....
Author's Response: the plot does indeed thicken, and Bath Kol, she's as arrogant as any of the higher Angels, but there may be a soft side somewhere, we shall see Many thanks for the review much appreciated. Jacq
Reviewer: Leigh Ann Wallace (Signed) · Date: 13/04/11 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 3
Oooh, this is fun! Love seeing into Sam's past. Can't wait for the new chapter!
Author's Response: Hey there, thanks for leaving a few words, this time the muse is co-operating and the next chapter will be in process very soon. Jacq
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 05/04/11 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 2
Who indeed....and what has she done/is going to do to Sammy? And what has it all got to do with poor sad resurrected Rachel?? Hope that's Dean at the door, and he can at least get to his brother before it's too late. Oh, Sammy.... Jules
Author's Response: Poor Sammy indeed, I will unravel a little more in the next chapter, and reveal which Amgel this is! Thanks for the comment, much appreciated. Jacq
Reviewer: supernaturalfan (Signed) · Date: 05/04/11 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 2
So glad the boys are finally taking a break. I'm thinking though that this isn't the kind of break they were hoping for. LOL Who is this towel toting maid..an anget perhaps?..and what has she done to our Sammy? She better not mess with that wall..that's the last thing he needs. Dean will not be happy that she's messing with his little brother. I'm anxious to read the next chapter. You have definitely got me hooked. Look forward to the next!! Take care, Jane
Author's Response: An angel in disguise, all I can say is she knows about walls, small clue, won't give too much away. Glad you are enjoying it, Jacq x
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 05/04/11 12:32 PM · On: Chapter 2
Well that's the last time I'm ever requesting extra towels in a hotel! She's angellic I'm assuming? Guess I'm bound to read on to find out who! haha. Bev x
Author's Response: So you guessed then - lol. Yup tis an Angel, who she is will have to wait a little while yet, be patient! Thanks for the few words, much appreciated. Jacq x
Reviewer: Leigh Ann Wallace (Signed) · Date: 04/04/11 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 2
Okay, I like this story! But man, it's hard to wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you :), give us a chance! Only just finished this one lol. Your comments are appreciated. Jacq
Reviewer: supernaturalfan (Signed) · Date: 31/03/11 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 1
You have captured my attention. So many question..how does Sam know Rachel?..and if he killed her then how is she walking around? Lots of angst in the near future..can't wait to read your next chapter. Keep writing and I'll keep reading. Take care, Jane
Author's Response: Your comments are appreciated, the next chapter is in progress, sort of , but I promise that I always finish a story. Thank you Jacq
Reviewer: Leigh Ann Wallace (Signed) · Date: 31/03/11 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 1
Okay, this is good, you've definitely got my attention! Will eagerly be waiting for next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you I will try to completing in about a week, hopefully. Jacq
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 30/03/11 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 1
Well....talk about off and running. And what's with Sam's memory? True or false? And if true, how the heck is Rachel still walking around? What on earth is she? Great start, Jacq. I can see some big brother angst and anger on the horizon as Sam tries to convince him to risk pulling down the wall again while they try to find answers. Jules
Author's Response: Thank you Jules. Sam was so un-emotional as soul-less Sam that he didn't really care at that time if he was killing something that ...oops giving it away lol I do have a plan... just have to put it into words now! Jacq
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 30/03/11 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 1
Hey Jacq Oh I'm intrigued, what ever has our boy been up to. There's a nice air of tension slowly building. Looking forward to some more soon. Bev x
Author's Response: Hey Bev Thank you for leaving a few words, I shall endeavour to make it worthy of your continued enjoyment. And what has Sam been and done this time! Jacq x
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