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Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 08/04/11 11:29 AM · On: Hurt

that's a nasty wound, need to get him mended soon.
Bird

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 06/04/11 07:42 PM · On: Hurt

How sad that Dean is still trying to please his father. I have a sad feeling that John wouldn't be proud of Dean here but disappointed because of Dean's serious injury even thought Dean and Sam did the impossible and killed the monster. I think Dean is treating Sam the same as always. He wants to be the protector and make sure his little brother is always ok. I don't think it's a trust issue even though evidently Sam thinks so. I'm glad that Dean has decided to let Sam treat him first and "try to be a good patient". LOL! Looking forward to reading the next chapter.

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 06/04/11 07:31 PM · On: Easier Said Than Done

I do believe I've read this elsewhere, perhaps FF.net? Anyhow, I'm really enjoying rereading this story and getting caught up. The fight scene with the boys and the snake was really nerve wracking. I was holding my breath the whole time. I can't wait to see what happened to Dean. I do believe this is as far as I got in the story before. Looking forward to reading the next chapter!!

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 06/04/11 07:18 PM · On: Easier Said Than Done

I do believe I read this elsewhere, perhaps FF.net? I'm really enjoying rereading the first few chapters and look forward to the rest. The fight scene between the snake and the boys was quite nerve wracking. I wonder how injured Dean is? Going to read to find out!!

Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 05/04/11 02:52 PM · On: Easier Said Than Done

I can't help but feel a little sorry that the monster's dead. What are we going to tell stories about now? :)
I hope the next chapter comes soon, because I'm very worried about Dean!

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 02/04/11 12:17 PM · On: Easier Said Than Done

Oh that's mean! Leaving us hanging there! Wicked woman...write the next chapter...
Bev xx

Reviewer: SpikesSire (Signed) · Date: 30/03/11 11:14 AM · On: The Bear Lake Monster

great story, reminds me of season 1 where the brothers were more bickering and the monsterns were more fun.
Love the camper comments by Dean *lol*
And your banner is gorgeous. Do you have a bigger version somewhere hidden? Would love to see more of your art *nods* it's definitely art
luv
Susi

Author's Response:
ah yes, good times -_-

thank you soo much for the encouragement! I'm so glad you are enjoying it.

awww -^_^- im so happy you like my banner! i drew it and its on my deviantart website. I intend to have the full illustration posted soon. heres the link to the banner : http://zinfer.deviantart.com/#/d3c6un7

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 28/03/11 09:13 AM · On: Physics

I'm desperate to know how bad Dean's hurt! Maybe Sam could borrow another Airstream (those are cool trailers) and we could put Dean to bed and tend his wound?
Next chapter please!
Bird x

Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 27/03/11 10:36 AM · On: The Bear Lake Monster

Hee Hee! We've vacationed at Bear Lake, and I have heard a LOT of stories about the Bear Lake monster. It's fun to see the boys tackle the legend!

Author's Response: really?! that's awesome! it makes me so happy that you're enjoying the story ^_^

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 24/03/11 02:45 PM · On: Mud

hey Zinfer.
That's a freaky wild creature, I have an image or a cross between a snake and a giant centipede with those sort of snappy pincer mouth parts. Scary!
Enjoying your dialogue, loved the "Iz Sammy upset cause he got his shoes muddy" line, I could so see Dean saying that with that beautiful grin on his face.
Liking your banner too. Did you draw that?
Write some more soon.
Bird

Author's Response:
I'm sorry its taken me so long to respond

thank you soo much for the encouragement! it makes me very very happy that you like my monster ^_^

i did draw it :) thanks

Author's Response: and ya know, i do believe my mind was thinking centipede when i designed it in my head... but i didn't really consciously make the connection so thanks for pointing it out for me XD

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 23/03/11 03:12 PM · On: The Bear Lake Monster

Hello Zinfer and welcome to UnGen.
Nice first chapter with some nice lore and back-story. Your dialogue is good and I am looking forward to the action you promise.
Bird

Author's Response: Thank you for the warm welcome ^_^

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