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Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 05/10/07 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 11

No action Maggie, damn  you have both boys teetering on the edge of a train.. I don't know that I could stand more action..lol.  Great update, - K

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 05/10/07 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 11

Superb update!  I so love this story.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/10/07 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 11

Great job!  I want more!

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 05/10/07 04:19 AM · On: Chapter 11

Great update - glad the boys are getting back together, they don't seem to do to good by themselves! Keep it comming!

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 05/10/07 12:44 AM · On: Chapter 11

Great description, really enjoyed this chapter too!

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 05/10/07 12:11 AM · On: Chapter 11

Oh hey - and LOTS of action in this one.....

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 05/10/07 12:11 AM · On: Chapter 11

Awesome chapter!!!!! I was sooo glad to see a new chapter of my fav. train story up! Now I can have some more Dean on train dreams.... Love the boys desperation to get back to each other. Love that Dean finally thought 3 dimensionally and made it to the roof of the train.... Can't wait to find out what this creature is (suspicious that it and Raven are both crawling about....) and why do they want Dean? Not that that is surprising.....

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 02/10/07 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 10

Your explanation of lost is so beautiful and sad.  I think it's a very accurate perception.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 02/10/07 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 9

Finally someone tells the story!  There's nothing nastier than a woman with a broken heart.  This is getting so good!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 02/10/07 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 8

Ah ha!  Now we're getting some good information.  I'm holding on because I know this story is going to move fast now.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 02/10/07 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 7

I'd also like to know why the transients have taken such a keen interest in Dean.  Do they recognize his restless spirit?

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 02/10/07 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 6

I just love Dean's smart-ass remarks.

Did you spend time in a hobo camp?  You describe it perfectly, the hierarchy, the organization the way they care for one another.  I'm impressed.



Author's Response: thank you so much for all your great reviews :) no i've never spent time in a hobo camp, but i must have watched a lot of movies about them. lol. i love researching and everything i write is thoroughly studied, but i've always been interested in that trasient lifestyle. :)

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 02/10/07 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 5

The action was great and the idea of the tormenting visions is superb!  I always enjoy your stories!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 02/10/07 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 4

Funny and spooky with a cliffhanger thrown in.  My favorite recipe!  Love when Dean imitates 'the girlfriend' lecture!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 02/10/07 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 3

I had to laugh when I read the dialogue between Sam and Dean as they traversed the boxcars.  So funny!

What a hoot!  Dean getting rejected by a 17 year old girl.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 02/10/07 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 2

Freight hopping?!  Is this some crazy desire you have?  Dean won't ride in a plane but he will walk on the outside of a moving train?  I'm totally with Sam on this one!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 02/10/07 01:49 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great beginning!  I love watching the boys tease one another!  It's a nice break from the death and destruction that starts most stories.

I, also, wondered what would happen to the Impala.  Gotta watch out for her.

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 28/09/07 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 10

“Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned.”

Loved that line! Well done. 

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 26/09/07 04:33 AM · On: Chapter 10

awesome! I. Want. More. Asap, of course. Love this story, great job with Sam analizing his condition as a hunter. And separated not good? Major understatment!

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 25/09/07 03:45 AM · On: Chapter 10

Argh, great time to end the chapter! I really wanted to review every chapter, but got so caught up with the story, I completely forgot, just kept pressing the next button. This is a great mix of fast paced and beautifully described that it's compulsive reading. Awesome as ever Maggie.

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 25/09/07 03:18 AM · On: Chapter 7

 Love the Raven character, great description has made her very real. Great plot move making Dean almost immune to the creature. Moving on.

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 24/09/07 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 10

Things are never good for the boys when they seperate, boy that's an understatement - Great update Maggie -K

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 24/09/07 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 5

Great suspense in this chap. Great monster, Great dialogue. As always, will catch up on next five chaps tomorrow. Been a great ride so far though!

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 24/09/07 05:19 AM · On: Chapter 4

OOh Love it when the plot suddenly thickens like that! Great banter.

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 24/09/07 05:00 AM · On: Chapter 3

I NEED to hear Dean singing that song! Please forward this story to kripke now, maybe he can film it for season 4. Another great one Maggie.

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