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Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 25/10/07 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 14

eeeeeekkkkkkkkkk! Had to leave it there, didn't ya! I love this!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 25/10/07 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 14

This is so good! I love that Dean says he's going to smack Pete if this whole mess is over a girl. So Dean!

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 25/10/07 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 14

argghhh, Maggie! You are evil! Come back here right now and write some more! Okay, i have a busy week, so you win you some time, but not much, so write and type, 'cause this story is great, and i'm lookin for more asap. Soon. Okay?!

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 25/10/07 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 14

OMG...this is AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!
I can't let go of this story. You have really created an outstanding piece of literature.
Every chapter has built up the suspense. every encounter has added more and more to the pot.
you have given us leads and hints-you are a master storyteller.
I really want to just punch Pete out.And Raven-no sympathy for her either. The visuals you created have been fabulous.
Dean on top of the train-unbelieveable- Sam with the Cur-poor Sam never gets a break-
it figures the thing is killing younger brothers-just what Dean needs - another failure to protect his brother. Right on the mark.
mystery, action,horror,brotherly love, suspense-its all here.
OUTSTANDING!!!!!
I can't wait for the last chapter.!!!
BRAVO!!!!!
a fan

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 25/10/07 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 14

Tension overdrive!!!!
Great chapter - fantastic description of the house and Dean's quips are right on the nose. Gotta hand it to you, I love this story, hope it's not ending anytime soon!

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 25/10/07 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 14

Oh, wow--I so cannot wait for the next chapter. Hurry, please!! What a cliffy. I love it.

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 25/10/07 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 14

this is a seriously evil cliffie!!!! Great Chapter though Maggie - chock full of great lines:
"bad guys just seemed to have really lousy realtors."
"creepy bug dude" - hehehehehe
"Oh man, if you tell me this is all about a girl, I’m gonna smack you.”
Ok - so next chapter soon???? Pleasssseeee????? Don't make me send the leplurodon (how do you spell that creepy dinosaur's name!!!???)!!!!

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 13

Yay for a really speedy update, and yay for another intriguing chapter. Thanks devonshire!

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 17/10/07 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 13

Maggie, what an intense and suspenseful chapter. The Cur is going after younger brothers it's why it went after Sam. Pete's gone to Kathy's house, can't wait to know what'll happen next.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 17/10/07 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 13

Yay! Finally all the pieces are locked in place. You had my mind spinning with all the possibilities. What a great story!

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 17/10/07 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 13

Great update Maggie, and quick..yeah. Loving the way you're tying this up. Can't wait for more - K

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 17/10/07 07:28 AM · On: Chapter 13

well, i love quick updates! I love quick updates coming from my favorites stories. I love quick updates so well-written. I'm waiting for the next quick update...

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 17/10/07 04:38 AM · On: Chapter 13

Great update - and good to see such a well thought out plot. I love stories that push the SPN mythology, invent new supernatural threats etc... and thats one of many skills you excell at! Fantastic!!

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 16/10/07 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 13

Great update Maggie! Love me some Dean on a train - though I guess he's getting off now - *pout*
Cool revenge-seeking-hitman demon.....

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 15/10/07 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 12

“I thought this was your childhood dream?” "Yeah well, my childhood was twisted.” - LOVED that line Maggie, great update looking forward to the rest - K

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 13/10/07 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 12

It's getting more and more intriguing. What's Pete plan that involve Dean and Sam. Pete saw Ben in Dean and the creature saw Pete in Sam. They must figured out what's going on before Sam got worse. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 12/10/07 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 12

Aha! Great final sentence.
This line cracked me up devonshire:
“Well, now that I think about it, it may have been a moth.”
Great chapter, thank you!

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 12/10/07 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 12

I agree with lam, Dean on a train just never gets old. Mmmmm.
And him lying on top of the train as it speeds through the tunnel with mere inches between him and the top. With the friction burning his back-------LOVED IT!
Nice update.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 12/10/07 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 12

I love Pete's thought on how the present erases the past. You have very philosophic thoughts. That's one of the reasons I enjoy your writing so much. All your character have depth. You bring up ideas that make me pause for consideration.
I'm still not any closer to figuring this out than Sam and Dean are. Just when I think I know who it is and why, you add more and muddy up the mix. You rock!

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 12/10/07 08:24 AM · On: Chapter 12

Dean on a train - *sigh* it just never gets old.... Great chapter! Loved Dean in the tunnel. I am totally in the dark as to what is happening... not even sure that I can speculate - I love it!!! Way to twist it up! Can't wait for the next chappie - Raven and Pete are going to wish they had left Sammy alone once Dean gets a hold of them...

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 12/10/07 08:17 AM · On: Chapter 12

okay,that's bad. Not that chapter of course, which is awesome, but bug dude thinkiing Sammy's Pete, that's sooo bad. And that,
“I thought this was your childhood dream?”
“Yeah well, my childhood was twisted.” is frigging excellent!

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 12/10/07 04:26 AM · On: Chapter 12

You got that right - Childhood was definately twisted!!
Another great chapter. This reads so well it could be an episode. And the 'in the tunnel' description had me wondering when was the last time you were on a train cos you can sit inside you know! Way too real. lol Great job! Louy

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 06/10/07 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 11

I hope that Sam's nightmare won't happen, that both of them'll be ok. Where's Raven and why she took off, she's an intriguing woman. Suspenseful chapter Maggie, what's next, can't wait to know.

Reviewer: JMDoody (Signed) · Date: 05/10/07 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 11

You know, I had just been thinking about this story yesterday and really really wanting to read more of it. So, it was quite a nice surprise when I logged on this morning and saw that you had updated.
I am in love with this. I grew up in the Hudson Valley so anything that has anything to do with trains, or old shipping yards and things like that call to me.
Your an excellent writer and I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 05/10/07 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 11

no no no, damn, you can't do that, arghhh! Evil evil cliffie girl! Great chapter Maggie. The boys are so desparate to rejoin each other...

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