Reviewer: lillelouis (Signed) · Date: 01/05/08 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 14

Oh dear...

Reviewer: lillelouis (Signed) · Date: 01/05/08 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 12

Oooohhh the 'Mountain girl-person' cursed Benjamin because he betrayed her, and then he became some insane monster thingy who likes to kill for kicks?????

Reviewer: lillelouis (Signed) · Date: 01/05/08 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 8

How heartbreaking... you can actually feel the pain and sadness radiating from the words.

Reviewer: lillelouis (Signed) · Date: 01/05/08 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 6

Raven? Mysterious woman perhaps?

Reviewer: lillelouis (Signed) · Date: 01/05/08 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 3

Awsome... Not much else to say... the last chap.-15-review will be a real ddozie... promise...

Reviewer: lillelouis (Signed) · Date: 01/05/08 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 1

Oh my god that was good... Humor and angst bundled together in a great big ball of Winchester. Moving on to chap. 2. I'll try to review every chapter, but I might get too caught up and forget. If that should happen i would like to apologizes in advance :D On we go...

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 06/12/07 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 15

This was a great read, complex and convoluted but logical and  humerous with well observed characters.  I really liked how you knocked cocky, (wonderfully!)irritating Dean down to size by having him break his arm flubbing his leap onto the train.

The interplay between hurting(both wrist and dented pride) Dean and Sam as Sam bandages his arm is spot on.

I could feel menace from the 'Train' people and Raven was spooky.  The keep calling him child was manacing too!

Nice ending too - very Dean Winchester!

Bird x

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 10/11/07 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 15

Amazing chapter!  I always love it when Dean ends with his favorite expression.

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 06/11/07 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 15

Bravo!  Nice wrap up to the story! 

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 06/11/07 03:47 AM · On: Chapter 15

Sad that this is over but elated at how good this story was. Everything came together nicely at the end and you've still left me wanting to read more - which is a good thing as I'll be watching out for your next story.

This one was a great ride Maggie, as always! Thanks for entertaining us all with it!

 

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 05/11/07 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 15

That was a great finale to an amazing story. Sam got to Dean in time and saved his life. Pete deserved to die in the hands of the Cur and Ben is free and can finally rest in peace. Poor Dean, they must take the train to get back to the impala, lol. Maggie, you did a terrific work with this story.

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 28/10/07 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 14

Fabulous chapter devonshire. The dialogue between Dean and Pete just rockets along, and you've left us an amazing cliffhanger as well. Hurry back!

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 27/10/07 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 14

OMG!What a cliffhanger. Sam, hurry up, Dean's time is running out. Gripping chapter Maggie, can't wait for the next update.