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Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 24/09/07 04:50 AM · On: Chapter 2

I love the 'Dean as a natural nomad' it's such an accurate description. So do people actually do this in America????

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 24/09/07 04:42 AM · On: Chapter 1

How did I miss this gem! Yet again you've got the voices just right, so many classic lines, there's just not enough space to quote them. Nice to see your work getting the stars it deserves.

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 23/09/07 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 10

And if Raven was the creature and she wanted after Sam again. I hope that Dean is ok. It was worth the wait Maggie, can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 23/09/07 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 10

Nuts!!  A cliffy!  Doggone it.  Love the update though.

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 30/08/07 12:08 AM · On: Chapter 9

Hmmmmm... Sounds like Kathy's on the warpath! Great chapter, more please!

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 29/08/07 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 9

Raven is a mysterious woman. Poor Kathy, what a sad story. She could be the vengeful ghost. Captivating story Maggie, I'm looking forward for more.

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 29/08/07 03:59 AM · On: Chapter 9

great great Maggie! So, this Kathy girl, our avenger here? I like Raven's character. And i like the fact that the chapter ends at the same time as the last one, from Dean's pov, thinking like Sam that separated is probably not a good thing. Murphy's law is gonna hit on full force isn't it?!

Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 29/08/07 02:36 AM · On: Chapter 9

Hi Maggi, thankyou for the update i really love this story. Lorraine

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 29/08/07 12:57 AM · On: Chapter 9

Great chapter! Lots of intel in this one - soooo Kathy is the nightmare ghosty maybe??? Why do I think that Benjamin in going to end up looking a lot like Dean? Hence all that staring? Loved how you ended the chapter with Dean thinking much the same things as Sammy from the previous chapter.

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 19/08/07 04:33 AM · On: Chapter 8

Maybe splitting up wasn't the smartest thing to do ??!! Understatment of the year !! Mooooore please Maggie...

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 17/08/07 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 8

Great chapter devonshire. I love how Dean is so much in it - even though he's not actually IN it! If you know what I mean! See you again soon.

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 17/08/07 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 8

Splitting up is never a good thing, Sam.  Haven't you learned that by now... Great update Maggie, as always waiting for more - K

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 16/08/07 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 8

Great update devonshire. Sam is still suffering from what the thing did to him and it's getting worse. What Peter is hidding. And yes Sam, splitting up is not the best idea you got. Can't wait for more

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 16/08/07 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 8

Very, very dumb, Sam.... No Dean - *pouts*.... Yes, never good when the boys separate... Please, please more soon....? Pete is getting a little creepy too....

Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 16/08/07 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 8

so sorry have not been able to review before was on dial up, slow expensive and always cutting out.

At last on broadband so i am gradually catching up on all stories i have not reviewed. Have loved this story and was thrilled to see update today . Many thanks Lorraine

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 02/08/07 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 7

Excellent dialogue in this chapter, and the way you described Raven was great. Can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 02/08/07 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 7

Raven is a very mysterious woman, who is she. Dean is going alone in the train car and Sam got a bad feeling, hope that everything'll be fine. That was great devonshire, can't for more.

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 02/08/07 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 7

ok, separating usually leads to disaster for those two... Then i just wait to see how it will be this time...

Reviewer: ackles7587 (Signed) · Date: 02/08/07 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 7

aw come on that's mean.  What happens to Dean!?!?

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 02/08/07 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 7

SOOOOOO worth the wait!! Awesome chappie!!! "I'll be fine" - famous last words, Dude!

But this one is an instant classic: "When bug man was melting your brain" _ LMFAO!!! don't know why but that is just about the funniest line - ever! These train people are very creepy - especially Raven, and while I can't blame or fault them for being taken with Dean, they are creeping me out - why are they interested in Dean?

It is very cruel of you to have 3 awesome storie on the go - I never know which one to beg for next......

 

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 02/08/07 07:28 AM · On: Chapter 7

“Aw, come on, Sammy, you can’t be everybody’s favorite.”  Love that line... Chapter looks good, can't wait to read more - K

 

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 17/07/07 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 6

Excellent chapter, really wonderful description...I could see it all playing like a movie in my head. This is a great line:

"But my mind is still wonderfully intact.”

That's Dean all over. Well done! 

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 16/07/07 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 6

Great update. Like Dean said, now that they're in maybe they'll learn more about that monster. Captivating so far. 

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 16/07/07 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 6

awesome chapter Maggie ! Very interesting context, those people living like that, never thought about such a life style before... And the thing, yikes yikes yikes, poor Sammy, way to emotionaly fragile to fight this thing. Although Dean's psyche is quite shattered to but he's probably more used to protect himself behind the walls he putted up his whole life... Can't wait for more...

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 16/07/07 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 6

Just great, love that Dean was strong enough to break the trance,  can't wait to see what's on the train - Thanks for the read - K

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