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Reviewer: Star (Signed) · Date: 05/08/10 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 1

Sam's description of Dean is so apt. Its like all his self-preservation instincts are completely shot to hell when Sam is endanger.
The YED made it seem when he was possessing John that it was a want of self-worth but that doesn't sit right with me because when crunch time comes, when the sh** hits the fan, most people, everyone chooses themselves. I think it takes someone stronger feeling a stronger emotion to choose to help someone else. And Dean has that!
Great story.

Reviewer: Star (Signed) · Date: 05/08/10 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 1

I am having the weirdest case of deja vu with this story but I am really not that sure if I've read it before.
But that doesn't take away from its awesomeness. I'm a little worried about the fact that they have gone on a hunt so blind but we'll see...
Thanks for posting in the vaults! Thoroughly enjoying

Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 21/01/09 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 15

Hehe, loved the ending...great story. :D

Author's Response: thank you so much for the great reviews. i'm glad you enjoyed the story.

Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 21/01/09 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 12

*sighs* Great!...Poor boys..*shakes head*..never get a break..:P

Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 21/01/09 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 3

HA! I love the part with Dean singing, it made me laugh so long *chuckles* :P

Reviewer: youthere (Signed) · Date: 18/01/09 07:26 AM · On: Chapter 14

I really enjoyed this story. It was well written and I LOVED the setting. The image of the hunter caught in a trap so much like a devil's trap was very appropriate, somehow :)

Reviewer: youthere (Signed) · Date: 18/01/09 07:24 AM · On: Chapter 14

“Oh man, if you tell me this is all about a girl, I’m gonna smack you.”- That made me laugh out loud :)

Reviewer: youthere (Signed) · Date: 17/01/09 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 1

Oh I so wanted to be a freight-hopper when I was a kid! And my country doesn't even have trains :)
I loved “We can sing hobo songs.”- made me laugh :)

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 09/07/08 04:08 AM · On: Chapter 15

Its just a reminder for me on how much my next of kin loves me. Thank you. I know my rating is wiered, but at least what I read and think after each chapter and make statments to the writer. I'd personaly would give you a hug then formally kick your cute ass and mind for playing the boys like that, but really and trully it to me was a masterpiece maybe even better then Shakespear. Don't Know Yet! Thanks! 300 ++++

Author's Response: hi sam, thank you so much for all the great reviews, i'm so glad you enjoyed the story. it was a lot of fun to write. better than shakespear-- don't know about that ;) i'm flattered, he's one of my favs. 300++++ sounds good to me. :)

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 09/07/08 03:50 AM · On: Chapter 14

I would obveously tell DEAN to just kill both it would save many lives. This is a sick story, but a very, very good one. SUPERB I SAY!!!!!!!!!! 250 OF MY RATING SCALE!!!!!

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 09/07/08 03:31 AM · On: Chapter 13

Sorry Kathy, but Damn Pete! Not nice. Rating:200+++

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 09/07/08 03:10 AM · On: Chapter 12

If Raven is this entity and Sam just stated that that thing thinks he's Pete then her real name isn't Raven its kathy. You are too good, damn you, but I think i got it right now.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 09/07/08 02:31 AM · On: Chapter 11

RAVEN, that bi***! What could ever go wrong now then what it has now.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 09/07/08 01:49 AM · On: Chapter 10

Told ya, RAVEN is the b**** that almost killed SAMMY. I do not like her and there better be a way to get Dean to Sam. So, how can you kill a demon like her?

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 09/07/08 01:07 AM · On: Chapter 9

Now, the truth comes out. Its all within the year 1962. I do think the entity has to dell with that girl and Benjermine whom has more to blame for leading a poor innocent young lady.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 09/07/08 12:23 AM · On: Chapter 8

This is like the legend that my uncle told me La LLorna, except that delt with water, children, white, bridge, and un unlawful husband. Its soomewhat like it. She hunts for unlawful men when this being just scares the hill out of people. This could be a legend whom knows.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 08/07/08 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 7

The name state's it all . . . Raven like something from Edgar Allen Poe's historical poetry much less.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 08/07/08 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 7

The name state's it all . . . Raven like something from Edgar Allen Poe's historical poetry much less.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 08/07/08 06:47 AM · On: Chapter 6

This is like viewing the Twillight Show not very much of a fan like the Crepp Show. This is more than good. I don't think there is a name for it OSCAR yes, but I'm still never going on a TRAIN ride for a swcond time!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 08/07/08 05:17 AM · On: Chapter 5

OKAY!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am never going to try to be on a train ever again. It won't happen I'd have to ask if anything has ever happened. It sent me shivers and I felt like i was witnessing everything that was going on.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 08/07/08 01:20 AM · On: Chapter 4

Okey, this is something like RESIDENT EVIL, and I did not do so well with that either. Damn you this would probably be a best seller for KING.

Author's Response: thank you so much for the great reviews, i'm glad you're enjoying the story. :)

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 08/07/08 12:58 AM · On: Chapter 3

It's a bit scarry, but its okay. Iguess, wich I also did during my school year day, but never did it again.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 07/07/08 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 2

Thank you for that translation. Or could it be that the train may have dead body parts or the material itself maybe placed from an old wreckage from another train and the spirits are pissed to hell about it!

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 07/07/08 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 1

This is deffinitly funny. I like it, but why did it have to be a train? I have a problem with trains still and airplanes all I need is a lightnigbolt to finaly state that I am an amazing kid for surviving two different types of accedents. I have a feeling that the image of Jessica may appear.

Reviewer: lillelouis (Signed) · Date: 01/05/08 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 15

First of: great writing. your descriptions are animated and vivid. you really understand how to bring life to the pages.
Second: Your understanding of the brothers is amazing. It's very insightfull and riveting. The way you switch from banter to deep, concerned thoughts is amazing.
Your story has an air of sorrow about it. It's very somber, but light at the same time which is exactly how the brothers actually feel on the show. It's like the lightness in your story is very superficial and underneath is a very thick layer of guilt and fear and sadness...
Read it. Reviewd it. LOVED IT!!!! SO adding this one to my favorites...

Author's Response: thank you so much for all the great reviews, i'm really happy you enjoyed the story, it was a blast to write :D.

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