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Reviews For THE BEAST WITH NO NAME (revised re-posted)

Reviewer: X5 494 (Signed) · Date: 10/12/11 01:27 AM · On: Chapter 3

mah!!!!! well, where is the rest of it! I need more

Author's Response:
Sorry about the delay in posting the rest of The Beast. But as you may not be aware I've had some health issues and major spinal surgery that led to 5 weeks in hospital. But I am working on the next revised chapter, so hopefully it won't be to long???
Thanks for the review.
Silvertayl 57

Reviewer: Glitterbelle (Signed) · Date: 04/09/11 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 3

Nooooooo!!! You can't leave the chapter like that!! I forgot about the Ranger Tarni. I'm really glad she found Sam and hes on his way to hospital now. Brave lady looking for Dean on her own, what a relief she found him.But he really is a mess. I liked how you described Dean's thoughts of heaven, and thinking that he'd find Sam there because he must think he has failed to save Sam now and that his brother is probably dead. Keeping me on the edge of my seat. Can't wait for the next chapter. Hope it won't be too long a wait. ;-)
Gem x

Author's Response:
If Dean only knew he was being lifted into a hellicopter and not to heaven his mind set might be a lot different. Glad you like Tarni.
Thanks for another review. I will try not to keep you waiting to long for chapter 4.
Thanks again.

Reviewer: Glitterbelle (Signed) · Date: 04/09/11 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 2

I thought that the brother with the hurt leg who fell off the cliff was Dean. He used one of Dean's best words, fugly. What a gruesome chapter with chunks of flesh and claws digging into to body parts. The boys are definitely in trouble now. Even though at this point we now that Dean kills the second beast too, he's heading for a bad situation and we can't stop it. Wish I could warn him somehow lol!!! Poor Sam, I wonder how he is going to survive he's pretty beat up and Dean won't be in any shape to help. Aother great chapter.
Gem :-) x

Author's Response:
Hi again
Another review. YAY! I'm very pleased you read on and are still enjoying my gory tale.

Reviewer: Glitterbelle (Signed) · Date: 04/09/11 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great start to the story. You've got me hooked right away. Not sure which brother is which in the beginning but I think I can guess. Sounds like their both in bad shape and I really fear for the brother who fell off the cliff and killed the beast. Mean cliffhanger(hehe!) in the middle by jumping back 3 days. Really adds suspense to the story and we need to know how they got to this point. I enjoyed this chapter. Loved Dean annoying Sam with his M'n'Ms.
Gem xx

Author's Response:
Hi
Thanks so much for the review. I'm pleased you enjoyed the first chapter. I hope you continue to read and review.

Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 06/06/11 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 2

I guessed right - and I'm thinking Dean's not far from going over the edge of that cliff.
Man, Sam's wounds sound bad. I'm hoping that the hot ranger who was checking Sam out might not wait the prescribed time before heading out to find them. A bit worried that the sour-faced colleague of hers might give her a bit of stick for it, and hamper the rescue efforts.
But they won't be fast enough to stop Dean from falling over the cliff, along with the second beast.
Scary times coming....
Jules

Author's Response:
Cudos to you.
1. you were correct in your assumtion that it was Dean who fell over the cliff
2. for reading on and...
3. for reviewing.
I apprecite you taking the time to let me know what you think.
Chapter 3 is not far away, catch you then?
Elaine

Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 06/06/11 09:36 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hmm....no wonder Dean hates camping.
And whatever this no-name beast is, or beasts (just remembered the little prologue thingy - gah, hate sinus headaches, they make my brain melt...), they certainly have a modicum of intelligence. Enough at least to recognise the boys' weapons as threats to their existence and know that they have to be removed.
Dean's right - Sam won't be sleeping any more this night.
And who ends up lying bleeding and who goes over the cliff? I'm going to take a stab in the dark - hey, I've got a 50/50 chance, right? - and say it's Dean who goes over the edge.
Reading on....
Jules

Author's Response:
At last I have got a review HUZZAH!!!
Thank you so much cuz I was beginning to think posting this was waste of time.
Anyhoo, glad you're enjoying and yes these beast's are intelligent.
Now I'll answer your second review, moving on.

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