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Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 05/04/11 08:49 PM · On: Trucks and Tricks

LOL!  Lisa named her car Gilbert....LOL!  Good chapter!  

Author's Response:

I know. It was probably her son that made her, mine's did. He christened my car Thomas (the tank engine) It's blue and it's a Panda, looks like Thomas!!

Mary x

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 03/04/11 03:04 PM · On: I had a type

I'm glad you found your very own 'Dean"

Bev x



Author's Response:

So am I! (even if he is quite as yum as Mr Winchester, he's still all mine! :)

Mary x

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 03/04/11 02:59 PM · On: Small Steps

Oh that's sad but hopeful in a quiet way,

Bev x



Author's Response: I liked this chapter, glad you did too, Mary x

Reviewer: Leigh Ann Wallace (Signed) · Date: 02/04/11 06:22 PM · On: Trucks and Tricks

I like this. It's good to see Dean smile!


Author's Response: Thanks. Needed to lighten this a little. Mary x

Reviewer: Leigh Ann Wallace (Signed) · Date: 02/04/11 09:01 AM · On: Small Steps

I like this. Good to see what happened with Dean during that year. Hope he had some happiness!


Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: saltnburnem (Signed) · Date: 22/02/11 11:08 PM · On: I had a type

I love that "The Dean" set the bar so high!  Perfect!


Author's Response:

Hey there

Yup, you don't get much better than Dean WInchester!

Thanks, Mary x

Reviewer: saltnburnem (Signed) · Date: 22/02/11 11:06 PM · On: Small Steps

It's sad that all Dean has is a little duffle bag with all his non-weaponry worldly goods!  Of note, I assume you meant for Lisa's bedroom to be homey, which is nice and comforting.....and not homely which means ugly!


Author's Response:

Yeah. I have so much stuff that's sentimental and he hardly anything. I used homely because it was a place rather than a person, need to check that one! lol

Thanks honey, Mary xx

Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 21/02/11 10:09 PM · On: Life In A Box

I don't like this step!  This is a BAD STEP!  I hate that he put her away in favor of a pickup.  *sniff*

Author's Response:

Hi

Don't like this step either. Bad Dean putting baby in the corner of the garage!!

Thanks, Mary x

Reviewer: Star (Signed) · Date: 21/02/11 08:37 PM · On: Life In A Box

Ahhh the Impala. Never before or since has a car been so much a part of a show. Sure Bo duke had a car but i dont think many people would've cried if he changed it. I know i would cry if the Impala was no longer Dean's.

Does that make me a geek? lol! Great, great scene with Dean speaking to his baby. If there ever was a scene that needed to be included in the flash backs on the past year it is this!



Author's Response:

I think it's the car I like best in the shows!

Showing my age - there was the Gran Torino in Starsky and Hutch, the Capri in the Professionals (UK tv), and now the Impala in SPN. I would only cry over the Impala though too, you should have heard me when I watched the S1 finale!

Thanks, Mary xx

Reviewer: Star (Signed) · Date: 21/02/11 08:32 PM · On: I had a type

That was really refreshing. A back story on the year Dean and Lisa spent together might not be too out of the way.

It seems like sucha  Deanthing to do to be a little shy about his feelings particularly after loosing Sammy.

Loved this scene!



Author's Response:

Hi

Glad you like the idea, didn't want to write a full story but I liked the idea of snapshots.

Thanks, Mary xx

Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 11/02/11 12:27 PM · On: I had a type

I like the idea that all of Lisa's "type" may have been inspired by Dean.  It's a romantic notion. :)  MY spark didn't happen all at once.  We had known each other for 3 years before one day it hit me like lightning.  That's the short version.  The long version is even better :)  

Author's Response:

Thanks. It was a little last minute thought as I was writing this, my own little explanation as to why they ended up with each other.

My spark was instant, met and married within a year and that is NOT me. Now I want to know the long version! Tease! :)

Mary x

Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 11/02/11 05:27 AM · On: I had a type

Well she was still single, and it was almost as if she was waiting for him to return. 

Re your end notes - you lucky thing!

Nice one.

Jacq x



Author's Response:

That she is! I just wanted a little explaination of why her, and this for me fitted.

I need to be lucky in something Jacq, doesn't mean I wouldn't swap him for Jensen! lol

Mary xx

Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 09/02/11 01:31 PM · On: Small Steps

This is a great idea!  It can't have been easy working Dean into her life, and the awkwardness involved.  Good one!

Author's Response:

Hi Jules

Thanks. I've had it for a while and since my muse actually wanted to do this I went with it! lol

I love awkwardness, it's fun to write. Mary xx

Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 06/02/11 05:31 AM · On: Small Steps

A simple start, maybe not unpacking the bag is a past life Dean, just in case he needs to grab it and run. Small Steps to a 'normal' life - nice one.

Jacq x 



Author's Response:

Hi Jacq

Thanks. Yeah I saw it as a not really sure what I'm doing here yet gesture. I'll come back to that bag again I think!

Mary x

Reviewer: blackcatswhiskers (Signed) · Date: 06/02/11 03:37 AM · On: Small Steps

This is really nice, looking forward to more

Author's Response: Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it! Mary x

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