Reviewer: Medusa (Signed) · Date: 12/09/11 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 10
Thank you so much for this new chapter! I've been waiting, perhaps not patiently, but as patiently as possible for an update. I love this story. I'm eagerly awaiting the ending. Medusa
Reviewer: Pet (Signed) · Date: 14/06/11 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 9
Please more, can't wait for more.Thanks a lot.
Reviewer: Pet (Signed) · Date: 14/06/11 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 9
Please more, can't wait for more.Thanks a lot.
Reviewer: Medusa (Signed) · Date: 12/06/11 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 1
I love this story and can't wait until you update again!! Please don't keep us waiting too long.
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 08/04/11 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 8
AAAAGH! Oh, that was an evil cliffie. I was hanging onto the arms of my office chair hoping that the worst wouldn't happen, but I still had a funny little tight feeling in my chest that all wasn't well. Oh, Sammy....I really, really hope that the doctors don't have to take the leg. But that phone call didn't sound in any way hopeful. Will be on tenterhooks until the next update, I just know it.... Jules
Reviewer: Leigh Ann Wallace (Signed) · Date: 08/04/11 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 8
Very good story. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: Leigh Ann Wallace (Signed) · Date: 08/04/11 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 1
I like this story a lot. Well-written, nice back references, good characterizations. God, John could be a real pain in the butt, couldn't he? Look forward to seeing more.
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 31/01/11 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 7
And now the hard part begins - the waiting... Oh, Sammy - poor kid, he really has a battle on his hands with the infection. And I think he'd have the same reaction as Dean about losing a leg. Let's hope the surgeon can get the infection under control and save the limb. Jules
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback. I'll try to update soon.
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 31/01/11 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 6
Ooh, poor kid's in a bad way now. And so fevered, he has no idea what he's saying half the time. Sad line of Dean's to admit that it's never been about what he wants when Sam let it slip about the SATs. And thank God for Caleb's ranger training and the radio in the cabin. Sounds like help has arrived - and just in the nick of time. Nothing wrong with this chapter at all, hun. Jules
Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 30/01/11 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 6
I didn't think this chapter was a dud at all. Sorry it gave you trouble when you wrote it.
Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 25/01/11 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 5
Usually, I type a line or two, then put my stars, then hit submit. Earlier, I put in the stars and hit submit and then realized that I hadn't said how much I enjoyed this chapter. I am looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you are enjoying this. :D
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 24/01/11 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 5
I love how Dean's acts of rebellion towards his father, though few and far between, are always in protection of Sam. That whole brother/parent thing takes precedence over being a good soldier. And speaking of Sam, thank heavens they found him. Looks like he was barely hanging on there at the end. Love the fact that the two hot-heads apologised to each other, too. Awwwww.... Ah! Mountail lion! Geez, poor Sam, from werewolves to big hungry cats of the natural variety. Talk about out of the frying pan... Oh, and that was a great move on Sam's part to use the alarm on his mobile phone to help Dean pinpoint his position. Really loving this. Jules
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and for the review. I'm having a good time writing this, so I hope to update soon. :D
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 24/01/11 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 4
Ohhh, Sam. That had to have hurt like merry hell. And all that ground he'd just covered - how defeating for the poor kid. Ah, so it wasn't a werewolf reanimated that got Sam, then. After Caleb popped the one John shot in the head, my theory went right out the window. So, what else was out there in the forest.... Felt so sorry for Dean, too, always being in the middle of his two headstrong and stubborn family members, both of them too much alike and not seeing the resemblance. Or what their constant head-butting is doing to Dean. Hopefully they can get to Sam before too much longer - thank heavens they heard the gunfire and at least know the kid's in trouble. Great story so far - really looking forward to where you're going to take this. Jules
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 16/01/11 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 3
Well, well, well....they were both wrong. Sam for forgetting to clean his weapon, and John for lashing out with his fists. So now we know how Sam managed to become separated. But where did the other werewolf come from? Was it separate from the pack? Hiding out? Or did someone get sloppy back at the cabin and forget to make sure that all three were dead? Perhaps the one John took down - he made a head shot, but it should have been through the heart. Oh, Johnny....that elementary mistake might just cost him one of his sons, one way or the other. Looking forward to the next chapter. Jules
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 16/01/11 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 2
Ah, me.....John never learned how to handle Sam, did he? But thank heavens for that innate stubbornness - Sam's going to need it to get out of this. Wonder how close the others are. And if they found trouble as well. Jules
Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 16/01/11 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 3
Great story. Love the way you've brought in elements from the show (demon prom date for example) into your story. I can't wait to read what happens next.
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 14/01/11 05:37 AM · On: Chapter 1
Ah! I didn't make the connection until her eyes turned black. Rachel, Sam's possessed prom date - one of Azazel's gang as Lucifer revealed. And of course, she had to drive that wedge between him and his family just a little deeper. Isolate and manipulate.
Had me fooled in the beginning too - wasn't sure if it was Sam or Dean. Finally settled on Sam, then switched back to Dean at the last minute - lol. Looking forward to the ride you're going to take us on. Jules
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