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Reviewer: Medusa (Signed) · Date: 11/01/11 05:18 PM · On: And I Will Give You Rest

I enjoyed this story, however if I can make just one small criticism, I felt that the ending was a bit rushed. I would have liked to see a little more about the brothers' rescue and recovery.
Medusa

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 11/01/11 01:47 PM · On: And I Will Give You Rest

That's nice. Not too sentimental but sorta sweet anyway.
Thanks for a good read
Bird x

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 11/01/11 01:43 PM · On: Yea Though I Walk Through the Valley

Oh a nicely gruesome chapter! That's a real funky big-bad.
I love your reference to Dean being drawn to weapons. It makes him sound so deadly.
Bird x

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 03/01/11 12:21 PM · On: Take Up Shield and Armor

I absolutely LOVE the banter!!!! And I love that they're single-minded about hunting the creature down and ending her/it/whatever... LOL
Great chapter!
Tree

Reviewer: leslie92708 (Signed) · Date: 30/12/10 01:34 AM · On: Grant Me Peace

oh....I don't think the house is a good idea. What is it/she/ hmmm. Thinking of her tongue gives me the willies! yikes!

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 28/12/10 01:06 PM · On: Grant Me Peace

Oooh Yay!- they're out- but something tells me- they aren't away and safe yet... Love the dialogue... very spot on...
Great chapter... cant wait for the next!
Tree

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 28/12/10 08:55 AM · On: Grant Me Peace

very nice descriptions hun. I'm ready for more as soon as you like.
bev xx

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 28/12/10 08:51 AM · On: Deliver Me From Evil

Oh i feel cold and exhausted just making the effort to move with them...or is that cause I'm full off christmas chocolate? heehee. Nice chapter
bev x

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 15/12/10 09:30 AM · On: Take Not the Breath of Life From Me

Hey Hun.
I'm liking this! Nice freaky-weird big-bad and nice descriptors.
Loved the '...Sam's voice is brittle like sheet metal pounded too thin'.
And of course Dean taste's best!
Waiting on some more please.
Bird x

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 09/12/10 04:27 PM · On: Take Not the Breath of Life From Me

Hmmm...I take it as season 1 before Sammy got all beefed up! What a strange creature. I thought perhaps she was Lillith but now that she did that turning into a monster who loves to taste Sammy and Dean (especially Dean, yikes, the poor boy!), I don't think it's her. Wonder how our Winchester boys are going to get out of this mess. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 09/12/10 11:10 AM · On: Take Not the Breath of Life From Me

Oooooh! I like this! Very intriguing and the little girl or whatever it is... is just chilling. You have the banter right on- not to mention the brotherly concern.
I gotta be wondering what they were ever arguing about to begin with... and now- its looking like they're up the creek if the girl comes back to feed again.
Nice mystery and monster and HURT! Awesome!
Bring it on!
Tree

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 07/12/10 05:36 PM · On: In the Morning, When I Wake

Hmmm...is it a demon like Lillith? The boys seem like they are in bad shape. I wonder what "the little girl" wants with them. Looking forward to more.

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