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Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 06/06/07 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 9

love dean's "what obsession?"  ....well, a gymnast, huh??   that could prove interesting but Dean and Tammy Faye make-up just don't go well together...... and how cool is that ??! some type of diary to help guide the boys.....WOW, Kelly!!!    thanks for the awesome fast chapters.........really, really like this story......

Author's Response: Thanks much, glad you're diggin it Jude, yeah haven't been sleeping well lately so instead I've been writing, should post again tomorrow - K

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 06/06/07 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 9

  why do those chapters always have to end ?! More more more, i want to now... And you finally bring up Randy, so funny...

Author's Response: Thanks much Fredo, we're getting down to it now.  I may even update again tonight - Thanks as always for taking the time to read - K

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 06/06/07 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 8

Solid chapter, Kel.....liked the airhorn.....very believable ....and what could be more reassuring or endearing than our heroes devotion to one another....i really like this tale of yours...

Author's Response: Thanks much Jude, glad you enjoyed the chapter, I've just posted another, hope you enjoy - K

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 06/06/07 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 8

Your story flowed so smoothly and , yet , kept the reader waiting for the next point to be revealed. The culture and feel of a small town only added to this story. As always , you have captured all things Winchester perfectly. Their interaction, trust  in one another, and overwhelming love that binds them together was palpable from the start.

Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with us.



Author's Response: Hey thanks so much ReccaF.  You don't know just how much your review meant to me.  As much as I try not to let self doubt stop me from writing it's hard not feel dissapointed over a lack of reviews.  So I really appreciate that you took the time.  Next chapter should be up.....tonight????? Maybe tomorrow morning.  Thanks as always for reading - K

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 06/06/07 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 8

must be nice to have such a reliable big brother, you can put yourself in whatever mess, you know he'll come for you, cool. Very good chapter here K, like the dog, loved the horn !

Author's Response: Thanks Fredo, my big sister once woke me in just the same way - unlucky for me she apparantly had no conscience - LOL  K

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 06/06/07 12:30 AM · On: Chapter 8

I am so glad that Dean found Sam! I thought McGregor was going to get him for sure. Always can count on the big brother to get you out of situations. Lucky for me, I have two of them! :0)

~Kayla



Author's Response: Ah, lucky you Kayla, though I've found out that big sister's are also passing good at getting you out of trouble - LOL Glad you enjoyed the chapter - K

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 04/06/07 03:33 PM · On: Chapter 7

  looks like the guys find themselves a pet !!! Great chapter, can't wait to know who the unexpected help is, and what happens to little-sammy-lost- in-the-big-and-dark-forest.

   Update asap K !



Author's Response: Thanks Fredo, I'll do my best to update soon, was working on the next chapter in the Catherine series.  Next update'll be for this one though - K

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 03/06/07 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 7

Great update! But what happens when Sam runs out of rock salt? Hope Dean finds him!

~Kayla



Author's Response: Thanks as always for reading Kayla.  I'm glad you're enjoying the story. ;)

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 03/06/07 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 7

well, at least we're getting somewhere and it's a bit positive.....Our Black Dog is a friendly force....glad for that......only wish Sam could have stayed closer to the house.......Poor Dean must be frantic at this point .......Save him, kelly....

Author's Response: Ahh, you know me Jude, I won't leave them hanging for long, though if the rain doesn't push off I may be in trouble, Can't get much done with Hubby hovereing - LOL

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 03/06/07 02:24 AM · On: Chapter 6

oh i enjoy i enjoy, it's great, i can't wait for more !! What's that beast, is it protecting something ? So exciting, hope you'll write more and update asap. My sunday is gonna be pretty busy (mother day so family lunch and after that airport because hubby finally comes back from China yippie), but i always find time to read your stuff. Good sunday to you, take care.

Author's Response: Yeah, for you.  I'm glad hubby's back.  My Sunday's shot though, that's why I updated two chapters yesterday.  I'll do my best but I probably won't send another your way until Monday night - Glad you're enjoying - K

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 03/06/07 12:49 AM · On: Chapter 6

I love all the characterization you put into your stories! You did an excellent job here...but you are killing me with the cliffhangers!

~Kayla



Author's Response: I tell you what I tried so hard to write a third chapter last night, but had to give in to this cold I've been fighting.  I'll have the next chapter up on Monday ;) who knows, maybe Sunday night - K

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 03/06/07 12:41 AM · On: Chapter 5

Carol reminds me of my grandma! Greatest cook in the world. Great update!

~Kayla



Author's Response: Thanks Kayla and I think Carol reminds all of us of someone, for me it's an Aunt, you gain two pounds everytime you stop for a visit. LOL  K

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 02/06/07 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 6

Ok. This dog is too corporeal to be a black dog, so I'm goin out on a limb here, and I think that it isn't evil and isn't about to eat Dean. I think it is maybe protecting something/someone? Or possibly I'm totally crazy.... God, I have to second guess someone with no spoilers to play with.....

Love Carol by the way and the whole Dean not wanting to show weakness by loosening his pants... I would have reviewed the last chapter too, but you posted this one before I could even read the last one!!!! Also love the cleft chin remarks - my hubby has one too - and hazel eyes - very handy....



Author's Response:

Glad I'm able to keep you guessing Iam, we'll just have to see about that black dog.  As always I write as it comes to me, not sure yet where this one is going LOL - Thanks as always for reading - K

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 02/06/07 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 6

okay, kelly ...this ending at 10 o'clock at night is just mean-spirited and ornery....  don't take any more cough medicine...it's changing you sweet demeanor.....maybe you've spent too much time chatting with Bambers....picking up on that beat-up-the-boys  meanstreak of hers...I really liked Carol and Ralph being nice to them at least

Author's Response: Thanks Jude, sorry but I'm going to have to leave you guys hanging for a day, got picnic tomorrow.  So here's Dean can hold on till monday - LOL  K

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 02/06/07 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 5

obviously, kel, this is our SOMETHING  BIG .....okay, thoroughly hooked now and awaiting our next installment..........think the laundry will stop growing at some point later in the week ???   maybe we could all chip in and hire you some help.........How's that cold of yours ?? Was afraid you'd be taking drugs and unable to concentrate......

Author's Response: LOL I gotta tell you Jude I had planned to sit down last night and write, but then I went and had a beer (for medicinal purposes).  This morning when I woke up I actually had to erase parts, it was so messed up.  Guess I know now not to drink and write - Next chapter's on the way - ;)

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 02/06/07 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 5

   as we say here, the way to a man's heart goes by his stomach ! And Carol won twice. I really like her !...

   So the smell, what smell ? And the brothers will be pissed and one more time feel guilty when they'll know that somebody was killed...



Author's Response: Thanks as always for reading Fredo, glad you're enjoying - Enjoy your weekend - K

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 01/06/07 05:32 AM · On: Chapter 4

aww, kel, loved sweet little Ms Potts...the boys could use a little grandmotherly love...this is really getting good.....they mention Black Dogs all the time in the show anf other fics but first time i've really read anthing on one......throwing cookies your way to keep the kids busy ...and many clean pair of sox to placate the hubby....... thanks....

Author's Response: Thanks Jude, glad you're diggin it.  I'll take the cookies and the socks.  I'm sooooo far behind that when hubby finally comes home he's not going to be able to find me through the pile of clothes. LOL  K

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 31/05/07 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 4

Hell hound? Is that what it is? Please update soon, I'm dying to know!

~Kayla



Author's Response: Running behind Kayla, so sorry.  I'm glad you're enjoying is so far - Thanks as always for the review - K

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 31/05/07 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 4

  oh i liked the part with the old lady telling the story on the porch, and the cake, so peaceful, the boys deserve more moments like that...

  So will the next waitress be Sandy ?!

   And a black dog huh, interesting..



Author's Response: Actually, I was thinkin Randy but who know's the boys'll be in town a bit dealing with this House :)

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 30/05/07 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 3

Thank God Sam and Dean are okay! Amazing chapter! Can't wait for more!

~Kayla



Author's Response: Ahh, thanks Kayla you guys are great, and I thank you for your consistant reviews - K

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 30/05/07 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 3

Something big, eh? Really not helpful! Loved the image of John and Mary cruising around in the impala with the boys....

Author's Response: Yeah, you'd expect Dean to be more observent huh?  LOL.  Thanks as always for reading and reviewing, By the way, stop reading this and get back to work on Fester ;)  can't wait for more.  LOL  K

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 30/05/07 01:28 PM · On: Chapter 3

you're welcome K, and this is a great chapter, can't wait to know more about the big something !

Author's Response:

Baby's napping Fredo, so I'm hoping to get some writing done now.  Thanks again for taking a look at it.  Just found myself having a deer in the headlights moment all the sudden, I appreciate you looking it over - K

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 30/05/07 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 3

Great chapter, Kel....so looking forward to the rest of this story.... yours always are captivating........and although the action always gets tense at least you don't throw 'our' boys under fast moving trains...   thank you for that !!

Author's Response: Glad you appreciate it Jude, Although I enjoy reading them getting beat up, I'm no good at dealing out the punsihment.  Baby's napping so I'm gonna get out of here and do some writing - K

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 29/05/07 10:34 PM · On: Chapter 2

If I were Dean right now I wiould be so pissed at Sammy! How could he just leave Dean like that? Lovely update! I loved every single second of it!

~Kayla



Author's Response: Thanks much Kayla, I'm glad you're enjoying, and I really appreciate those of you that consistantly take the time to review.  It really does make the work flow faster - Thanks again, K

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 29/05/07 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 2

  arghhhh, K, common !!! more more more, begging and whining...

   Oh Candy, 'a cold drink of water on a hot day', excellent, but not a chance, the guy is so in love with his car !!!

   As always, update asap !



Author's Response:

Thanks Fredo, glad your diggin it.  And trust me when I say that I've heard that very same, road complaint dozens and dozens of times from my own hubby - LOL  Update will get posted soon, I'm no better at torturing you guys then I am at doing it to the Winchesters - LOL K

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