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Reviews For The Mansion
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 01/09/08 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 12

Great story.

Loved the family of bleached blondes and Jim Bob lol.

Reviewer: nightchills (Signed) · Date: 20/02/08 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 12

I enjoyed it, thanks. On to the next adventure...

Author's Response: So glad you did, and thanks for giving my stories a run.  I've noticed you've been reading a couple of them.  Always appreciate hearing peoples opinions.  Thanks Kel

Reviewer: nightchills (Signed) · Date: 20/02/08 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 6

It's cool that I'm reading this story during the eclipse of the moon. Adds some great ambience to the creep factor!

Author's Response: So glad you're digging it, just a fun fact.  That house exsists, though the story is fabricated, and I spent a large part of my somewhat dubious childhood hanging out there...lol.  Glad you're enjoying - kel

Reviewer: nightchills (Signed) · Date: 20/02/08 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 4

I am so glad that G'ma Carol didn't resemble the waitresses!

Reviewer: Nilah (Signed) · Date: 29/01/08 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 1

The opening piece in your first chapter describing Dean prone on the car! What a sight that must have been to behold! Very engaging.That “best pie in the state” scene where Dean is coaching Sam only to fall prey to the same gesture was hilarious. You always manage to introduce just the right touch of humour- Sam and Dean style of course. I look forward to these shots. 

Author's Response: Yeah, though I keep hoping the boys have yet to show up in my town...lol.  So glad you enjoyed and thanks so much for reviewing  - Kel

Reviewer: garvaldmains (Signed) · Date: 25/11/07 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 12

Fab!

Dix 



Author's Response:

Wow you're really going back a bit.. I'm flattered.. So glad you enjoyed this one as it's always been a fav of mine.  Thanks for reading ;)

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 15/08/07 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 12

Great story.  I enjoyed it very much.

Vanessa

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 05/07/07 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 6

oh, very cool chappy, kel!! i really needed it after reading some others this morning!! again such awesome details!! well done!! bambers;)

Author's Response: Thanks bambers.  I gotta admit I've been curbing my reading lately.. unless its from someone I know. Glad you're enjoying this one...Kell

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 02/07/07 12:19 AM · On: Chapter 5

another awesome chapter!! i just love the backstory you build into each and every chapter...it is so darn cool!! love carol!! thanks fro the awesome read!! bambers;)

Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying Bambers seeing as you've given me so many great reads!!! thanks Kell

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 19/06/07 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 4

excellent chapter as always!!! love candy and mandy!! too funny...wainting for their sister mansy at the next diner!!! loved carol and the backstory about the house!! you are simply a fabulous writer!! thanks for sharing!! bambi;)



Author's Response: Thanks Bambers, I seem to do funny easier than angst....Oh, well stick to your strengths right...LOL

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 15/06/07 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 3

so another awesome chapter!! really should be writing something right now, but couldn't resist reading the 3rd chappy!! plus, i am in a sort of lazy mood right about now, and thought a good read was the order of the moment!! thanks for sharing!! bambers;)

Author's Response: I'm with you Bambers, haven't written today at all, just kinda lurking, reading here and there (Fredo'll have a fit..LOL) Any way thanks for reading and I'm glad you're enjoying it - K

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 15/06/07 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 2

excellent chapter!! i love your attention to details!! what can i say, beautifully written!! bambers;)

Author's Response: What can I say Bambers, that means a lot coming from you.  Thanks for reading and reviewing - Kell

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 12/06/07 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 1

hey, nice first chappy!! sorry haven't gotten around to reading sooner!! looking forward to reading the rest!! thanks for the awesome beginning!! bambers;)

Author's Response: Goodness, Bambers you're forgiven.  Juggling multiple stories takes time, I get that.  Hope you enjoy - Thanks for reading K

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 07/06/07 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 12

I'm sad that this is the end! You created a very fun, imaginative story. It has been quite a ride. Thanks for sharing it with us!

~Kayla



Author's Response: Thanks so much Kayla, I'm really glad you enjoyed it.  And thanks for being such a dedicated reviewer it really make  my day to hear your thoughts about the stories - Thanks for reading  K

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 07/06/07 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 12

Awesome story! Thanks!!! I'm glad you brought Carol and Ralph back in and even tied up "the girls"!



Author's Response: Thanks alot for reading Iam, I always appreciate the reviews - Hoping to read something from you soon - Take care - K

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 07/06/07 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 12

   so good to see them laugh like that ! And i joined them when Sandy appeared ! And they hooked up Carol and Ralph, so sweeet.

   So, a one-hour break to catch up your readings and then back to the Chosen, ok. Demanding, no, i'd be demanding if i'd said that in a near future i also would see Sara come back in a story...



Author's Response:

I'm telling you now, Fredo.  I'm not going to write for at least the next three days, well maybe two, wwweeelll maybe I'll start the chosen tonight.  LOL we'll see.  The hubby does like me to spend some nights with him, crazy huh - As for Sara maybe I'll think of something just for you - K,

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 07/06/07 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 12

Thank you, Kelly......nice wrap-up to a really solid, intriguing story........no real loose ends.....you sure can spin a yarn..........this one goes in my "favorites"

Author's Response: Hey, thanks much Jude, I could have just let it go but I wanted to put a finish on it - Glad you enjoyed - K

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 07/06/07 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 11

wow what a great chapter, the end is very emotionnal, love the dog's transformation. The boys -and you K- did once more a terrific job !

Author's Response: Thanks Fredo- glad you enjoyed, I really appreciate your feedback  - K

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 07/06/07 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 11

LOVED what you did with the black dog at the end. Of course Dean would attract that kind of dog....

Author's Response:

Are you kidding me, I'd come back from the dead if I could be guaranteed a belly rub by Dean - LOL

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 07/06/07 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 11

I'm glad that our boys finally got rid of that spirit! Great job!

~Kayla



Author's Response: Hey thanks for the reviews one more chapter and I'm done ;)  Glad you've enjoyed it - K

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 07/06/07 11:02 AM · On: Chapter 11

awesome, Kelly.....glad the boys got a quick view of their ghostly benefactress........how fitting........the evil laid to ruin and the victims laid to rest at last...........great, totally enjoyable story.....thank you so very, very much...... 

  as a reward now you will get more time for laundry and cooking....lucky, lucky you...  :0)         jude

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 07/06/07 06:55 AM · On: Chapter 10

Kelly, your story telling is soo sweet....you tell the tale with minimum torture for our heroes  (just enough to know they suffer for their job triumphs but not so much that they need body bags)....and you draw us in with maximum tension and suspense.......like the great stories we read as kids in the 60's.....loving every minute of it.............thanks, kelly................

Author's Response: Hey, thanks Jude.  I always worry that my action isn't strong enough.  It's nice to hear its enough. I admit I love them too much to torture them too much (or god forbid ruin their bods/faces with scars - LOL)

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 07/06/07 01:55 AM · On: Chapter 10

Awesome chapter! I'm thinking that the basement being in sections is going to be significant for some reason?

Author's Response: Isn't everything significant for these boys - LOL  K  - still looking for more Fester, update coming soon I hope ;)

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 07/06/07 12:04 AM · On: Chapter 10

I love reading your stories, they always leave me wanting more! This chapter was simply fabulous. Of course nothing can be easy for the Winchester brothers. I mean the center of the house? What bad luck! Looking forward to more!

~Kayla



Author's Response: Yeah, great huh.  We do nothing but beat these poor boys up - LOL  Update coming soon I promise - K

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 06/06/07 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 9

What did he find? What book is it? Answers, I need answers! :0)

~Kayla



Author's Response: Answers are on their way Kayla, just give me a bit, story's already in my head it's just a matter of how fast I can type it out - Life AARRGGHHH you know ;)  K

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