Reviewer: jessilee (Signed) · Date: 25/08/11 09:26 AM · On: Prologue
you are a great story writer
Reviewer: Leigh Ann Wallace (Signed) · Date: 03/04/11 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 8
Very nice! And I really like the way you show how Sam "feels" about not feeling.
Reviewer: Leigh Ann Wallace (Signed) · Date: 03/04/11 09:48 PM · On: Prologue
Oh yes! This is fun! I love your stuff!
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 26/03/11 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 8
this is so chillling i do hope that there is a next chapter to theis one thank you. ? i was wondering if i can get a copy of this stroy from u i will leave my email sammmm674@yahoo.com
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 26/03/11 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 7
this is why i love stories like this they keep you hooked like a fish so thank you.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 25/03/11 04:21 AM · On: Chapter 6
damn it dean is there a day that you can focus on your brother and work and have after play in the back burner...shit dean always useing your small brain there... to bad you didn't sue it on ruby... :)
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 24/03/11 05:17 AM · On: Chapter 5
this is a good setting of where one person can be in two places example of Sam robot and sam sibling showing two different aspects of him doing a job and being concrened over his brother. Dean is witnessing it for the first time, that its his brother and the only factor that is need to mend his brother is his soul.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 24/03/11 04:59 AM · On: Chapter 4
it is amazing how the structure of place to homicidle bunnies attack both winchesters and dean finaly noticing how bad Sam is. its relization of not only partners doing a job but a family. that unfortunatly Sam can rember well of.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 23/03/11 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 3
damn it where the hell is bobby... this is good.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 22/03/11 06:06 AM · On: Chapter 1
this is so not cool how can a sibling do that to another at least have the balls to say to the other sibling.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 21/03/11 05:16 PM · On: Prologue
This is an episode that has given life to a new begining just by Dean accepting the task of his sibling being his blood at no matter what the cost he will relenquish his thirst of love, devotion n trust to his sibling.
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 28/12/10 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 8
Yes, we did. Nice tie-in with Appointment in Samarra, hun. And now we begin the long hiatus wondering about the aftermath of Dean's actions and Death's surprisingly generous response. Dean's heartbreak came through clearly in this chapter, over his soulless brother and how much he missed the real Sam. And Sammy, down in the cage for over a hundred years hell-time....*shudders*....that's so, so bad..... Nice one, hun. So glad to have come along for the ride. Jules
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 28/12/10 11:15 PM · On: Chapter 7
Awww, that last line was so sad, a poignant reminder that Sam is so disconnected from his true memories and the feelings that accompany them. Glad Sam's awake - must have been that bump on the head that's made him forget the hunt. Easter bunnies - lol. And Bobby checking out the nurse - ROFL! Jules
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 28/12/10 11:11 PM · On: Chapter 6
Good on Nurse Crystal for standing up to Dean - lol. He needs it sometimes. And more kudos to her for taking him straight to his brother. So, Dean had managed to call the emergency services before passing out, eh? Thank heavens they were fast - sounds like Sam was really in a bad way. Hopefully his MRI was clear and he'll wake up soon. Jules
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 28/12/10 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 5
Loved Sam's memories coming to the fore. And Dean telling 'Gigantor' to lock his knees - LOL. Well, looks like Dean got them both to the hospital...or did he? Hmm, and where is Sam? The plot thickens once more.... Jules
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 28/12/10 11:01 PM · On: Chapter 4
No wonder Sam wasn't moving - it was probably taking all his energy just to stay upright. And it looks like instinct is winning out over soullessness within Sam - he knows instinctively that he's to protect his brother, not just because it makes tactical sense, but because it's hard-wired into both of them at the DNA level to have each other's backs. Let's hope Dean can get Sam away from the bunny bonfire in time before he passes out completely. Jules
Reviewer: leslie92708 (Signed) · Date: 26/12/10 11:20 PM · On: Chapter 1
awww.....*sniff* Poor Sam : (
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 05/12/10 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 3
So it's a giant bunny. Well, there you go. And now Sam's in trouble, it seems. Thankfully he didn't take the shot, that he remembered what it meant to shoot your brother. But that scream....he's paid a price for it. Hopefully Dean can clear his head long enough to grab the gun and take the bunny down. Jules
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 05/12/10 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 1
This season's been so hard, hasn't it? Just when we thought they'd put the boys through hell, they go and do it again....*sad sigh*.... Loved Sam watching X-Files. And a Ripaparoo? Have to tell you, Petra searched her Book of Monsters & Creatures from cover to cover, and I spent over forty minutes on Google, trying to get an image of that thing - and we got nada. So we're dying to know what it is. Next chapter perhaps? Jules
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 05/12/10 02:03 PM · On: Prologue
Love that last line, Denise. And I'm holding on to that stubborn determination of Dean's to see this through - Sam's going to need him desperately when that poor tortured soul of his is finally returned. Jules
Reviewer: supernaturalfan (Signed) · Date: 30/11/10 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 1
Great start to this one Denise..can't wait to see where you take us. What kind of creature is a Ripaparoo? Look forward to you next chapter. Take care,
Jane
Reviewer: ArielMarie (Signed) · Date: 30/11/10 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 1
Great start! Whats a Ripaparoo? Cant wait to read some more! Liz
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