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Reviews For The Memory of Pie
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 24/01/11 03:44 AM · On: Chapter 1

Hmm....not sure about the pie, hun. Might just stick to plain old apple - lol. 

I'd actually read this when you posted, but never got back to leave you a review. 

This story, while it's not in any way similar apart from the pie, reminds me of BHoney's awesome The Importance Of Pie. The same sentiment runs through both stories. 

Loved the way you fleshed out the memory of Sam's from Dark Side of The Moon, giving us the background to and aftermath of the event. And adored how Sam wanted to give his brother something special, and hitting on the perfect present for his pie-worshipping sibling. 

Didn't envy John the bucket of KFC, though. Yecch.....greasy....*gags*...

Loved it. Thanks for sharing, hun.

Jules



Author's Response:

It's the best pie ever Jules.  I promise! :)

I've never read Beth's Pie fic because I never have that much time but her Parenting Your Gifted Child is one of my all time faves.  Haven't heard from her in a long while.  Have you?

I had to do something to make Dark Side of the Moon a little easier for me to swallow.....no pun intended....okay, maybe just a little. :)  I know Zachariah manipulated those memories.  No way did Sam's best moments not include Dean in them somewhere.

Thanks for the review!  Really glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: leslie92708 (Signed) · Date: 01/01/11 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 1

Awww...This was really sweet!  Certainly makes up for "Dark Side of the Moon" when it was so depressing!  I like your version!

Author's Response: Thanks!  Yes, Dark Side of the Moon was a very depressing, disturbing episode.  I really had trouble sleeping the night after it aired.  I don't for one minute believe all of Sam's best memories were those that didn't really include his brother so I had to put some kind of spin on things. :)  I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: saltnburnem (Signed) · Date: 29/11/10 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 1

I love this one:)  The comments about Dean asking the typical parent questions, even though Dean never had to deal with that....typical of the perfectly protective and watchful older brother.  And then Sammy brings him pie!! Guh! That's just sweeter than the pie you described!! That sounds just like a Sammy thing to do  for Dean .  Wonderful Thanksgiving tale!


Author's Response: Thanks Terri!  I liked this one quite a bit too and was extremely hungry for some pie after writing it. :)  I love stories about the boy's childhood and I really wanted a more positive twist on DSOTM since it was such a disturbing episode.  Thanks for reading and thanks for the stars!!

Reviewer: GreyCat (Signed) · Date: 26/11/10 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 1

Of course Zack was messing with Sam's memories! Have no doubt about it!

Dean it's an awesome big brother but even he has to admit that Sam is an awesome kid brother 'cause what other kind of brother would remember bringing some pie for his big brother? And two pieces! Great one!

Dany



Author's Response: Thanks Dany!  Sam had to bring some pie to the person who made it possible for him to have his first real Thanksgiving.  For some reason this fic makes me really hungry. :)

Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 25/11/10 04:06 AM · On: Chapter 1

Aww..sweet. I agree that Zacariah was manipulating Sam's memories, and nice job of skirting that bit of canon to add a Dean-slant to Sammy's first real Thanksgiving. I knew what Sammy was taking home as soon as you mentioned the box;-)

Happy Thanksgiving!

Sue



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, Sue.  Ooh, and stars too!

I had to do something to make that episode easier for me to live with. :)  And I just couldn't imagine Sam not bringing Dean some pie!

Hope you had a nice Thanksgiving!

Reviewer: saber (Signed) · Date: 24/11/10 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 1

Thanks for this entertaining story. I'M missing the brotherly love. Happy Thanksgiving!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!  I think we're all missing the brotherly love but I have faith it will be back.  Happy Thanksgiving to you as well!

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 24/11/10 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 1

Mmmmmmm Apple butter pumpkin pie!!! I doooooo love pie... and now I'm hungry!

Great story hun! and perfect for the holiday- almost forgot that little bit in DSOTM... and this is a nice twist (in a way) to an otherwise- angsty eppy. I like that Dean covered (which he would have) and that Sam brought back the pie for him... (the pie king! HAHAHA)

Love it! Thanks for the smile!

Tree



Author's Response:

Seriously, that is some good pie!  My favorite. :)

That whole episode bothered me a lot and this had been in the back of my mind for awhile, even before I wrote the drabble.  I thought the drabble might be enough to satisfy me, but nope, it wasn't so I had to write more.

Thanks for the review.  I'm glad you liked it and it made you smile.  Everytime I look at Chris's banner, I want some pie.  Ooh, wait, I have one in the fridge.....

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