:: Supernaturalville

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 20/02/12 05:25 AM · On: Chapter 8

I told you my Sammy ... Dean and Daddy ... wont allow these ass to screw with THE ONLY WINCHESTERS IN TOWN ... remember Uncle Bobby will be there... no worries, we will get you fixed up and then we'll be generous enough to allow you to kick them both where it counts with the bad leg. PROMISSE ... i have BIG FURRY HELL HOUNDS that have not eaten just yet. SIT!!!! see they do obey....mmmm my pets.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 19/02/12 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 7

damn Sammy ... its ok you will have another chance. oh Markus your ass is sooooo mine before Deans. what a great uncle...

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 19/02/12 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 6

Damn it markus ur ass is so toasted you piged headed no good for nothing hunter of a family memeber ... i do hope that they kick your ass. wow to imagen that John had a sibling this is a great motive to continue to reading more of your awesome loving stories thank you for this one i was wondering how did you get your ideas ... these are breath taking. i was also wondering if i may have a copy of this story to keep reading at my leisure time. This is HOT can stop reading and paying attention to my graphic homework at hand. lol i leave you with email thank you dearly ... pissedsam74@yahoo.com

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 19/02/12 12:22 PM · On: Chapter 5

wow this is even getting worse for the state that sam is in ... i do hope John finds away to con him out of this one or both of his sons will be gone.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 19/02/12 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 4

well now, i understand and so does Dean ... thank gaod .... but if you see it in johns eyes there was no way to help he had his children top priority then his beautyfull wife ... and then his brother, but how would he have known that the stupid demon would screw the family this bad. he lost his wife. i have sympathy for the man.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 19/02/12 04:11 AM · On: Chapter 3

this is so not safe for even a bug to a fly to be doing its wondering ... this guy is insane to even become any where close to Uncle Bobby. He is tender and loving this guy is just an ASS .. i like this story very much that shivers run down my spine.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 19/02/12 04:03 AM · On: Chapter 2

Damnit John Winchester ... he will torture him to his biding .. you old man...you should leave Dean behind some how to follow.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 19/02/12 03:44 AM · On: Chapter 1

Markus is a DEAD UNCLE...who the hell is he to screw with the WINCHESTERS if they are fam...ily this punk is so going to get his ass kicked and John better have a good stroy for this misshap.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 19/02/12 03:34 AM · On: Prologue

well that is just simply a dirty trick to do to a family member of own kind.
what a jerk and wait till Dean finds out he will have your hide for this.

Reviewer: Leigh Ann Wallace (Signed) · Date: 24/05/11 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 8

Uh oh, I read too fast. Now I have to wait. I'm in trouble now.
great story!

Reviewer: Legion (Signed) · Date: 23/05/11 03:30 PM · On: Chapter 8

Cannot wait to read more, as usual!

Reviewer: Leigh Ann Wallace (Signed) · Date: 23/05/11 01:19 PM · On: Prologue

Oh boy, I'm loving this!

Reviewer: monkeymuse (Signed) · Date: 12/03/11 11:50 PM · On: Chapter 7

poor Sammy! what are dean and john going to think he is messed up bad!!! not sure if i like dev amd markus yet!

Reviewer: sonia (Signed) · Date: 13/02/11 03:59 AM · On: Chapter 6

estou gostando muito quero mas, por favor

Reviewer: kiguide (Signed) · Date: 12/02/11 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 4

now we know the time frame,

Reviewer: kiguide (Signed) · Date: 12/02/11 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 2

definitely pulling me into the story

Reviewer: kiguide (Signed) · Date: 12/02/11 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 1

this scene is definitely building the threatening feeling that will keep the reader hooked
as the reader, I am not sure at what time in the past this is taking place - I am guessing it is before Sam went to college because the brothers are still with their dad, but is Sam in High school? Is he a pre-teen? Remember to frame the story for your reader

Reviewer: kiguide (Signed) · Date: 12/02/11 08:01 PM · On: Prologue

intriguing opening.
vary the words you choose to describe - for example don;t say his vision swam and then use the word swimming - choose something less repetitive

Reviewer: ArielMarie (Signed) · Date: 11/02/11 08:40 AM · On: Prologue

Interesting story! looking forward to an update!

Reviewer: monkeymuse (Signed) · Date: 12/01/11 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 3

I hope you keep writing on this!! It is an outstanding fiction!!! John's brother is evil. WOnder how dean is going to take the fact that John has kept a brother secert

Reviewer: Legion (Signed) · Date: 06/01/11 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 3

Come on, I can´t wait, what will be next.

Reviewer: EyeHatePie2 (Signed) · Date: 22/12/10 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 1

This is such a great story, please finish so I can read the rest.

Reviewer: monkeymuse (Signed) · Date: 13/11/10 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 1

Cannot wait to read more update soon neat idea for john to have a brother i tae it markus is older????

Reviewer: Legion (Signed) · Date: 12/11/10 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 1

I am looking forward to update!

You must login (register) to review.

Affiliates