Reviewer: karmyn31 (Signed) · Date: 31/10/09 12:02 PM · On: Chapter 1
That was beautiful. Angst done right. Tell the truth, I would probably do the same thing if I was Dean.
Reviewer: Roguehunter (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 01:51 AM · On: Chapter 1
Excellent story and tag to AHBL2. Not normally one to get all choked up, but i have to admit i had a few tears in my eyes after reading this. Thanks for shaing.
Author's Response: That had a lot of personal issues in it and it's not the kind of thing i normally write but i'm glad it moved you.
Reviewer: darthwriter (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 1
OMG!! That was just so sad. I had tears in my eyes practically the whole time. You nearly broke my heart. Jude said you were great and she is right, i literally stand in awe of your amazing talent. kari
Author's Response: Jude is deluded, but she's a sweetie! I'm glad you liked it (?)
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 17/10/07 02:49 AM · On: Chapter 1
OMG girl! I'm sitting here with my breath still caught and my chest so tight I can hardly breathe...This was AMAZING! "Shovel dirt on the baby he had carried out the fire" Kill me now before I suffocate! "the impala..his home, now his hearse" How final is that! Almost a betrayal of the sacredness of the impala and it's significance to the security of our boys. You are amazing and I will be searching out more of your work. PS LOVED your bio. What are you you ask us? Absolute fun it seems!!
Author's Response: wow, ta for the enthusiastic review. I'm glad you iked it. I hope you enjoy my other stuff. I haven't written much outside the Vs lately but my part of th season is about done and I hope to get somethnig else written.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 14/09/07 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 1
That was heart-breaking! I felt so sorry for not only Dean, but Bobby. I love the line, "toss the match that would turn Sam's laughter and tears and memories into so much ash to be scattered in the wind." So powerful and poignant.
Author's Response: Ta, that story was my way of dealing with some stuff. I'd never said some of that out loud. I appreciate the nice words.
Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 13/08/07 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 1
Groveling apology headed you way, have read this story before, but was on dial up, so it was a case of download story and get off quick[picture husband in background waveing telephone bill] At last i have Broadband so can read and review at leisure. Love the angst and hurt Dean, this is his worst nightmare come true.Beautifully written , could envisage Kansas Dust In The Wind playing. many thanks Lorraine
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 07/08/07 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 1
Wow--you sure made me cry! Yes, definitely enough angst!!
Author's Response: I know, I'm an awful person. I still don't know what got into me. I NEVER write crap like that.
Reviewer: sojourner84 (Signed) · Date: 11/07/07 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 1
Terry, beautifully written. "Bury Sam? Drop him into the cold wet earth? Leave him in the dark? Alone? Shovel dirt onto the baby he had carried out of a burning house? The child he had raised?... Burn him? Salt him like one of the creatures they had hunted their whole lives and toss the match that would turn Sam's laughter and tears and memories into so much ash to be scattered in the wind?" Guh...*is sad* -SJ
Author's Response: Awwww...ta...you're so nice!!!
Reviewer: ThePasserby (Signed) · Date: 26/06/07 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 1
i know ive read this before, but i dont think i reviewed, so i just wanbt to say...perfecto.
Author's Response: Aren't you nice! ta so much. i don't know what got into me with that.
Reviewer: mags (Signed) · Date: 12/06/07 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 1
Oh man,that choked me up all over again!I think i need to watch the finale now,to reassure myself!Well done....
Reviewer: PurpleNurples (Signed) · Date: 29/05/07 12:00 AM · On: Chapter 1
Man...somehow I like it when there's Dean angst. Is that bad? lol. I loved this! It was great!
Author's Response: Nope, not bad. Just proves you belong with all us other sick twisted people among whose number I am proud to stand.
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 28/05/07 12:08 AM · On: Chapter 1
I love angst! You did such a great job here! I loved it! ~Kayla
Author's Response: I think I got a little carried away but i'm glad you likes it! I like angst but it's usually more physical than emotional...I thnk (?)
Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 27/05/07 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 1
awww...this just broke my heart, was in tears, and gosh darn i hate being reduced to tears!!! it really clashes with the cold-hearted persona i've created for myself as a writer who likes to nearly always kills, maim or ruthlessly torture the poor boys!! lol!! this was just awesome!! cookies to you!! bambers;)
Author's Response: I know what you mean. I can't cry but I'm such a wuss I wouldn't have read this if I hadn't written it and I still can't believe I wrote it, it is so not my type of thing, but I'm glad you liked it if that's the right word.
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 26/05/07 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 1
Terry....just HAD to reread this.....like Dean's heart and soul were made of glass and you looked right thru them....what a fine piece of writing this is .... A small perfect diamond is worth so much more that a string of pearls............what an absolute gem !!! thanks again for sharing.
Author's Response: Laughing. What a lovely thing to say.
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 26/05/07 01:04 PM · On: Chapter 1
Terry - writing angst??? No puking? Good God woman - what the hell got into you? All that emotion? Tenderness ... pain ... raw and angry open wounds. Who are you and what have you done with Terry????? hahahahaha! Just messing with ya- this was a great tag dude!
Author's Response: Tree I know!!! I don't know what came over me. I'll go back and add a vomit scene. I knew it needed something...
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 26/05/07 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 1
Powerful and so heartwrenching. Beautifully done Terry.
Author's Response: I was attacked by an emo demon...
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 26/05/07 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 1
Hey Terry, this is like stumbling across a long-lost friend! So glad you uncloistered (I know, not a word.) yourself long enough to bestow this little gem on me. (I mean us) Although as I have remarked elsewhere, all of you people writing AHBL tags are killing me dead. Dean trying to keep Sam warm? Cleaning up Sam's body? Explaining himself to Sam? Thinking he'd failed? Have mercy woman. Did I say I was happy to see you? I'll be lucky to survive! Come back soon, and many thanks!
Author's Response: This was littl over the top even for me. But i'm glad you liked it, if that's the right word...
Reviewer: ThePasserby (Signed) · Date: 26/05/07 02:59 AM · On: Chapter 1
*sobs* I LOVED IT! *sobs again* you always know just how to say it, it always sounds terribly beautiful when you tell the story, and you've succeeded in reminding me that there is simply no humanly possible way that I can wait until september for season three to begin. Maybe we can make a deal with a demon for the show to return from hiatus sooner...
Author's Response: So happy could make the wait worse for you!!!!!
Reviewer: supernaturalsam (Signed) · Date: 25/05/07 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 1
Great job, Terry! I really felt this one, felt what Dean was going through. I'm not usually one for Tags, but this one was wonderful! Glad you shared it with us!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, i don't write a lot of them. And Ta so much for your wonderful comments on Shades!
Reviewer: freyja529 (Signed) · Date: 25/05/07 10:44 PM · On: Chapter 1
Okay, made the mistake of trying to eat while reading this...bad idea as it is hard to swallow with a football in your throat. The line about him carrying Sam out of the fire and into this life and carrying him back out just killed me. You captured what I truly believe would be going through Dean's mind when faced with the idea of burying his baby brother. Amazing insight. Guess good things really do come in small packages...
Author's Response: I'm sorry, this made me laugh...I really liked that line to.
Reviewer: Phoenix_Song778 (Signed) · Date: 25/05/07 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 1
Good to have you back from VS land! To answer your question..yup enough angst for me and then some....just the way I like it! You really do know how to rip a person's heart out, that's why you're one of my favs!
Author's Response: Aaawww...I live to rip out hearts and stomp them flat.
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 25/05/07 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 1
God, reading that drives home, just how good that episode was. Really nice job with Dean's thoughts and feelings -thanks for the read -K
Author's Response: Ta! You are always so nice!
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 25/05/07 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 1
very nice I always enjoy reading what you write. very nice foray back into non VS writing. Gengen
Author's Response: I don't kow if i'd describe it as very nice but I'm glad you read it!!! I finally got to catch up on yours!
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 25/05/07 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 1
Thanks! I totally had Dean not letting Bobby help, cradling him in the back seat of the impala... My theory is that they may have wanted to shoot it that way, but Jensen couldn't actually carry Jared.... He is a Sasquatch afterall....
Author's Response: Yeah I know, laughs, I had a little trouble visualizing that but what the hell, in my world it can be done.
Reviewer: gaelicspirit (Signed) · Date: 25/05/07 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 1
I know you said I didn't have to, but what the hell... don't worry about responding. I saw so many layers of Dean in this: parent, brother, friend... but it was the parent aspect that lodged the sizable lump in my throat. The idea of having to let Sam go... make it real... say it was over... Guh. You gave his act of desperation grounding in his devestated thoughts. From start to finish, it was very real. Hard to read in a very good way (if that makes any sense). I will forever be in awe of your storytelling ability.
Author's Response: Smiles fondly upon Gaelic, who will always be my favorite.
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