:: Supernaturalville

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 19/10/10 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 1

Poor Dean, he doesn't seem to be able to catch a break. Sam needs to get him to a hospital pronto then burn John, the bonsai throwing ghost! Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: saber (Signed) · Date: 19/10/10 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 1

Yeah!!! A story by Muffy!
I could just picture the sly smile on Dean's face as he and Sam fought over the volume of the music. I am hooked on this story already. Even though what happened to Dean was terribly serious, this line was funny. "Old Man Thomas done gone and chucked one of his trees at you," one of the men supplied.
Hee! Hee! I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 19/10/10 01:04 PM · On: Chapter 1

I love the idea of the cafe- it definitely sounds like one of those off the road tourist attractions. I think getting stabbed by mini trees is a new one- ouch!

Reviewer: Amberdreams (Signed) · Date: 19/10/10 04:23 AM · On: Chapter 1

Even for Dean that was fast work in pissing off a spirit, he'd only just walked through the door!! Hee!
Am I a bad person finding this funny....??

Reviewer: lunasgathering (Signed) · Date: 19/10/10 02:59 AM · On: Chapter 1

Great start! And right down the hurt!Dean business. Knowing the fun and interesting way in which your mind works, I can't wait to see what happens next. So is the diner real? Have you been there?

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