Supernaturalville
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 13/07/11 11:42 PM · On: The Why's To The No's

Wow!  I'm glad you wrote this, too.  I hoped that Dean apologized to Ben but I wanted to see it.  I'm voyeuristic that way.  I like the comparisons between Dean as a father-figure and his own dad, Ben and a young Sam, and past Sam and present Sam.  I especially like how you captured the body language and emotions of Ben and Dean.  "mwah!"  superb!

Author's Response:

HEY!

thank you!!! awh you know.. no one reviewed on this story here so I stopped posting my stories here and just do it on ff.net and on my LJ :) hah.. so.. thank you!!! yeah I sooo needed a scene in that ep, where Dean and Ben wouild talk :) so I wrote it... and thank you for saying I captired the boy's body language... I didn't want it to be mushy and sobby and idk what else.. I just wanted them to be boys :) thank you!

S.

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