Supernaturalville
Reviewer: dixie (Signed) · Date: 05/12/10 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 1

Awesome one-shot!  I could easily picure that scene if the writers had gone this route!!!

Author's Response: Yes all my Michael dreams have been sadly shattered!  Glad you enjoyed though!

Reviewer: fitz (Signed) · Date: 29/09/10 12:40 AM · On: Chapter 1

Bravo.  Watching the exceptionally restrained Sam in 6.01 being so undemonstrative reminded me of how Castiel first treated Dean, like he was some sort of curiosity.  And so I wondered if Sam was sprung from the cage, then where's Michael? What if....You nailed my paranoia with eloquence.  Nicely done. cheers.



Author's Response: Glad it worked for you!  I'd love this to be what happens on the show, but I can't see them going this way somehow.  I don't think a lot of fans would like the idea of Sam not really being Sam for any part of the season!

Reviewer: bjxmas (Signed) · Date: 27/09/10 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 1

Okay, I have to review here too, not just because it is a brilliant story, but because I forgot to say I hate you.  Yeah, that's right...so you wrote this in five minutes on your lunch break and I toil for days and come up with bumkus?  Life is certainly not fair.  

Oh, and I also love how you have Michael practicing his smile in the mirror, that mirrors Lucifer's scene with Sam where he is looking in the mirror sparring with Sam.

So, well done...exceptionally well done.  And I forgive you, for the five minute thing, 'cause you're an awesome person.

Later, B.J.



Author's Response:

Erm.  Thanks?

Actually, I wrote it in five minutes, but then I spent about half an hour rearranging the sentences so they actually made some kind of sense!!

I'm glad it's coherent though, because I wasn't entirely sure it was!

And thanks for reviewing x 2! 

Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 27/09/10 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 1

You always give such thought-provoking pieces.

I felt that Sam was locked down tight - burying just about everything so deep it's going to take a major earthquake to bring it boiling to the surface. But even my freaky mind didn't go to the place of not-Sam.

But...you know....I can see this....Michael being around people who don't know the real Sam, practicing at being human, building up to the moment when he faced the final test - confronting Dean.

And I loved that vividly painted picture of Sam's loping, stoop-shouldered walk, and Michael practicing his smile in the mirror.

I also love how you challenge readers with your what-if scenarios. I recall - I'm pretty sure it was one of yours I read - a one-shot about Sam for that year of Dean's deal actually not being Sam at all, and Ruby turning out to be a guiding angel. I remember clearly Sam's spirit appearing at the final confrontation between Dean and the demon who had stolen his brother's dead body.

And I have enjoyed this one just as much.

Thank you for sharing this.

Jules



Author's Response:

You know what?  I remembered writing that story too but couldn't for the life of me remember what it was called till I went and looked it up, and then I thought maybe I'd dreamed writing it because I couldn't find it!  (It was called Three Hundred and Sixty-Five Days!)

I was really intrigued by Sam in 6.1, even though we didn't see quite as much of him as Dean.  There's definitely something going on, and while it could be trauma from his - um - day spent in the Cage (heh) I wouldn't be surprised if it was something else.  I don't for a second thinks he's got Lucifer in there still, but there's something...

Thanks for reading and your lovely comment anyway! 



Author's Response: Actually I've still got the title wrong...  Make that Three Hundred and Sixty-SIX Days!  (It was a leap year!!!)

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 27/09/10 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 1

Quite the twist here. I thought there was something off about Sam, too but I'm not sure  what it is. You definitely had a twist that I would never have thought of! Thanks for the great little one shot!

Author's Response:

Thank you!  And I think you're right, there's definitely something off with Sam, although I doubt it's this!  This actually came from Swan Song when the streetlight explodes above Sam's head - like they have a habit of doing when angels pass by! 

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