oh hell no....there have better be a good safe conclusion for this one. after all its their stupid dads falut for sending them and now pastor jim is in and so will bobby to find the boys and sam is alone they will seriously hurt him. please let there be a conclusion its as if im watching the show SUPERNATURAL u have me on a clincher and i was wondering if i can get a copy of this poetry...ivonne_sammmmy69@yahoo.com this is the best that ive read and now im worried and scared for sam and dean... ? is there a conclusion, please rating: overwelming...thank you.

just be this quote id kick his ass and cut him into pieces for my hell hound dog a clearly won from CROWELY ...“I’m a God fearin’ man,” Jedidiah replied, and with eyes still locked on Sam, he smirked when the youngest Winchester flinched under such close scrutiny. “Yer not much of a talker, are ya, Doctor Reid. I see you as the kinda guy who hides behind yer badge, but lets the big boys do all the talkin for ya – pardon my speakin, but I’d have ta say yer no better than a street whore hidin’ behind yer pimp awaitin’ the day someone slices yer throat in some dark alleyway.”

i would so slash him on the premisis and allow dean and sam to finish the rest. daen must have been so proud of his FIRST SON being SAM ... “is that how your daddy made you feel all those times he snuck into your room late at night? Research shows that most violent offenders such as your brother have been victimized as children – so tell me, Reverend, do you take after your father where your own children are concerned?” THAT WAS SEXY SUDUCTIVE AND A BITCH SLAPPER BY NON AND I APP;AUDE HIM...? TO THE WRITER CAN I SHOOT HIM...this is getting good and if that reve touchs the boys the GYPSY BITCH IS SO GOING TO BEWITCH HIS ASS...:)

ahhhhhhh! shoot i use to go to them before ... did two reading became boggus then the third time ... for they say three is a charm they werent kidding...for it came through...this is so bone chillen and its freaking me out thanks.

Gulp, so they are out looking for Sam. Dean is having a hard time staying focused and aware so the rats don't try to take a bite out of him. I hope that Dean and Sam can help Jeriah, he doesn't seem like his brothers. I'm sure it irked Dean when the Benders assumed that Dean and Sam are "together". I couldn't remember which season this took place, but the mention of John in this chapter clearly puts it in season 1 (and Pastor Jim is still alive). I hope somehow Sam can allude the Benders and rescue Dean and perhaps Jeriah (I have a feeling Dean won't want to leave him there). Looking forward to ch. 6!

Yikes! The Reverend Bender is a psycho, too it seems. Dean keeps worrying about Sam and the Benders but I wonder if Dean is worrying about the wrong Winchester? He probably has no clue that he could also be a target of the crazy family. Poor Sam, he seems so worried about Dean and his health, it must be a terrible strain on him. I'm really looking forward to reading the next chapter.

Sorry for the delay...RL...

Interesting chapter! Uh, I really dislike the reverend. Why do I have a bad feeling here? Moving on... 

Author's Response: lol, i so understand the RL getting in the way of things. lol, bad feelings are prolly a good idea. thanks for reading and for taking the time to review. bambers;)

So now somethings messing with Dean's mind and making him see things that aren't there in order to lure him out. Is it sleep deprivation or something more sinister? great chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for taking the time to read and also for leaving a review. It means so much to me! Hope you enjoy all that is to come. bambers;)

That Reverend is just creepy. Seriously good story, you've got me hooked.

Author's Response: lol, yeah, he really is kind of creepy, isn't he. thrilled to hear you are hooked on the story, hope you enjoy the rest that is to come. bambers;)

Welcome back Bambers,

missed you and your stories.

this one is off to a great start.  The Benders.  can't wait to read more.

Question now that you are back are you going to finish any of the old stories??  

you had some really great ones going.  been waiting for months to find out what Charlie was going to do to Dean now that Sam has falling down the hole...... 

and what about Dean in "Knocking on Heavens Door".

just hoping you are going to continue with some of the old ones.

again glad you are back.

Renee

Author's Response:

Thanks, Renee, I'm glad to be back. yeah, i will be finishing my old stories, my only problem being is that I lost them all when my computer died, so I need to figure out a way to get them off of fanfic and onto my new computer. I have been giving that lots of thought so if anyone has any simple idea i would be thankful!!

Thanks for reading and for taking the time to review! It really means the world to me. bambers;) 

I'm kinda worried about Dean. He is so sure that Sam is the one that is in danger but it could also be him? He could be setting himself up. It he gets into trouble that leaves Sam in danger, too. Hudak doesn't seem to happy to see Dean! I'm wondering if the missing young man has something to do with the Benders and Sam and Dean? Looking forward to finding out!


Author's Response: lol, moira, it's a very good thing to be worried about Dean. He's definitely not thinking straight at the moment and it's bound to lead to problems for him. Thanks for reading and for the awesome review. bambers;)

Bambers, what a wonderful surprise, welcome back. Terrific start, awww...I love it when Dean and Sam're worrying about each other. I don't like what the fortune teller saw in Sam's hand. I'm hooked, I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Hey Oceane, glad to be back, I've really missed everyone here! So thrilled to hear you like the story so far, and hope you will continue to enjoy it as well. Thanks for reading, and for the warm welcome back! bambers;)

Very intriguing start. I love how each brother is worried about the other and not themselves. Hmmmmm...I have a thought that the old woman is a bit late in her forcast of the brothers. Seems like they are losing their minds already. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading, Moira, and you're right, the old woman is a bit late in her warning for the boys...Hope you enjoy all that is to come. bambers;)